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SpyroRyder

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  1. It's Connors birthday and he's spent it alone. But can a call from a good friend cheer him up. Note: I wrote this story for a school project many years ago and just found it existing in a corner of my hard-drive. I have edited it slightly but otherwise it exists as it did then.
  2. Unfortunately most romances from when youre 13 dont last. So much as it would be nice to know theyre still together i really didnt expect it, especially as Oliver would have the preasures if being really famous even if he didnt fall into the same holes that Ryder did.
  3. I wonder where this would go as the boy got older
  4. SpyroRyder

    Oliver Who?

    Well i wonder how the guys from Olis old band feel now =P
  5. SpyroRyder

    Unity

    I didnt start getting interested in anything sexual til around then so I'd put it just down to different rates of development. Theres probably a lot of things that can affect the rate of development but i am not a psychologist so wouldnt be able to say
  6. SpyroRyder

    Chapter Five

    This is turning out to be quite a nice story. Bit of a sidenote but your text colors don't work with the inbuilt dark mode. Any chance you could just use the default ones?
  7. I wonder how long it'll take Aaron and Noah to guess about the relationship. Even if they're not being all lovey around school it probably would have been obvious to Aaron at the very least that Carter was far happier than normal.
  8. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 34

    Just as I was beginning to like him a little, I was really hoping Eli would calm him so that behaviour like this didn't happen.
  9. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 16

    Hope that crash doesn't shake him too much and change his resolve. Also I would love to see a chapter from Eli's point of view, it would be interesting just to hear his thoughts on everything.
  10. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 1

    I am totally hooked. Great story
  11. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 2

    Some tension and suspence to round out a good chapter. I really like this story so far and I Hope you can continue to write more XD
  12. I’m sitting in a chair. On my couch to be exact. Reading a book, ‘The Evolution Of Language’. It’s a very boring book, kind of like my life as of late, but it is for my university coursework so I must persevere. My eyes start to get tired so I decide to rest them for a while and go for a walk in the outside world. It’s dark out, it being sometime around 9 PM, but I’ll do anything so long as it’ll keep the boredom away. I close ad lock the door to my dull and lifeless flat as I leave. It w
  13. Suffering from the post breakup blues a Man goes for a walk and finds something he didn't expect
  14. You write like a prince. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter
  15. I did have a sneaking suspicion that you liked Placebo and now you've confirmed it =P on a more regular note though whats mel's issue, i'm guessing that she's dave's cousin so what's the problem here =(
  16. And now I remember why you are one of my most favourite gay authors, this is AMAZING!!! I love it
  17. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 8

    I'm deeply in love with this story, it's so engrossing and I really can't wait for the full product to be out
  18. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 2

    This story is brilliant, I love it. You have a lot of talent
  19. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 1

    Like with a lot of the reviews I loved the story, it was beautifully written and works really well as a short story. I was expecting a bit more back-and-forth between Josh and Ray BUT the story still works extremely well.
  20. Brilliant story, I love it. It's one of those stories where I just want more immediately. And please make the secret admirer Tanis if just for the sole reason of having a nice little romance blossom early
  21. Loving the story so far, especially the bit about Tanis being the shy bashful guy. I was ALWAYS attracted to that type and love it when stories I read use them as love interests instead of meat muscle men. Interesting name though, Tanis. The only place I have seen that name is in a book series called Dragonlance. Was that your inspiration??
  22. SpyroRyder

    Chapter 2

    An engaging premise and setting, the characters are well made and the writing is of a good quality. A winner of a story if ever I saw one
  23. The moment I started reading this I realized you were joking. This makes for the funniest writing I have seen on GA to date because of both the sarcastic 'too joyful' undertone and the absolute mockery of some of the slash fiction that actually does get written, though not by any self-respecting writer or passer of highschool english. Now all you need to do is write a SERIOUS look at writing romantic fiction =P
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