Hector Q Sanchez

Very Good Story. Zach's plan was definitely not well thought out. Never go into battle without any weapon what so ever.

Hi Nephylim, Just started reading this story 3 days ago and am now hooked on it and caught up. I am so glad that Ryland is dead, though I wish he were tortured worse than he tortured Alex/Sacha. These villains always seem to get away with punishing but never get the punishment them selves. James finally has a new respect for Sacha as he has seen first hand what Sacha has been through. I think that there might be a love connection between Nik and Sach, perhaps? Thanks for writing for us. Hector

Oh how sad I am. Another of my favorite stories ends. I am sooo gonna miss these guys. Thank you soo much for such a great saga and the epilogue was brilliant. Looking forward to your next story. As I was reading Jesse and Dylan's story I was thinking you might be setting us up for continuing their story at school. Anyway, great story.

Good Story. Happy that Greyson chose Evan of Asa and Chandler. Looking forward to seeing how Evan and Greysons relationship progresses.

Ding Dong the witch is dead, the witch is dead. I'm dancing the jig in between typing, in rejoicing of Brigettes demise. Now to get Trev and his friends out of hurricane Dean..... Suffice it to say, this was another nail-bitingly, heart pounding, action packed chapter. I too shall miss the exploits of Trevor, Joel, Lisa and Shane. Thanks soo much for such and awesome story. H.

I have caught up, couldn't stop because this story is a page turner. Wasn't liking or trusting Tony until this chapter and reading about his side of the story. Now I fear Jacks character, no telling what he's gonna do. Can't wait to see how the boys band develops and how they will be received but I'm thinking a stint on Americas Got Talent is in their future? Only one complaint. This chapter was way to short. Keep 'em coming. H

Hi Houdini, Decided I'd try this story and WOW! I'm glad I did. This chapter pulled me in. Sooo guess what? Yeah that's right I'll be reading this story as well. Can't wait to see where you take us. H

C James, you cruel and abusive bastard! To leave us hanging with the four souls, three beating hearts cliff hanger. Though, seriously this is one AWESOME story with another one of your breath holding, heart pounding, action packed chapters. I hope that all on this cat survive because I didn't spend 2 years of my life with these characters for any one of them to die. I will be both pissed and sad at the same time. Well except for Bridgette. That bitch needs to be slowly tortured then put to death. I couldn't believe Trevor instructed the others to "try not to hit Bridgette". WTF? I would have said KILL THE BITCH! Thanks for such a great and entertaining story. I am prepping my self for the final word to be read on this long, roller coaster of a ride story and the emptiness that is sure to follow. H

Although other readers equate this story to Deliverance, I liken it to Rambo except Rambo was otracised for being a Vietnam vet and he blew things up. Anyway as always, a great story.

Awesome story. It irks me to see the Hopkins' of the world never able to admit or see their own failings and always blaming others for their woes. Thank GOD he got his comeuppance.

Phshew! I'm breathing a sigh of releaf. Mark on more for the good guys. I loves me some Uncle Greg, glad he was there to foil the plot to destroy Kookaburra, and put servailance on the power boat. I hope that Trevor and Shane make it back to Florida. The Author of this story is AWESOME! He knows how to get the heart pumping with his action scenes and such. Thanks for sharing your story.

Thank You for bringing us this story. Just finished your story and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I am looking forward to the sequel as well because I'd llike to see how Spencer and Phoenix's budding relationship progresess. I'd also like to see how Spencers life progress, such as does he get out from under his mothers abuse? Will he live with Nix and family or will he be fostered? These and many other questions need to be answered. Oh and does he get a new pair of glasses of maybe somebody paid for Lasik surgery for him. Until next time, Happy Holidays; Halloween, Thanksgiving,Hanukkah, Christmas, Kwanza.

Thanks for updating, soooo hoping for Billy and Brandon to get back together.

Miss Sunshine I am thorougly enjoying this story, it has had me chuckling; laughing; crying and seathing with anger over the antics of the antagonists. Having said that there is a minor detail that has been nagging for quite some time. You see in the first chapter when Spencer was being tortured, raped and beaten his glasses fell and were kicked across the hall and Nix picked them up and later gave them to Spencer, however there has been no mention of said glasses since. Any reason why? As a person who wears glasses I know that they get in the way and I am sure that as Spencer has been getting his severe bet downs his glasses surely would have gotten in the way. I don't expect that they should be mentioned in every chapter but at key moments just a reminder that Spencer does have glasses. Just had to get that of my chest. Thanks for reading and continued success with this story.

Ahh two of my favorite things; photography and camping and I think you captured the feelings of both. Great story. Good ending. Me Likey.

This chapter had me in tears. The thought of losing ones mother, I couldn't imagine as I still have mine.