Hi Nephylim,
Just started reading this story 3 days ago and am now hooked on it and caught up. I am so glad that Ryland is dead, though I wish he were tortured worse than he tortured Alex/Sacha. These villains always seem to get away with punishing but never get the punishment them selves.
James finally has a new respect for Sacha as he has seen first hand what Sacha has been through.
I think that there might be a love connection between Nik and Sach, perhaps?
Thanks for writing for us.
Hector
Oh how sad I am. Another of my favorite stories ends. I am sooo gonna miss these guys. Thank you soo much for such a great saga and the epilogue was brilliant. Looking forward to your next story. As I was reading Jesse and Dylan's story I was thinking you might be setting us up for continuing their story at school. Anyway, great story.
Ding Dong the witch is dead, the witch is dead. I'm dancing the jig in between typing, in rejoicing of Brigettes demise. Now to get Trev and his friends out of hurricane Dean.....
Suffice it to say, this was another nail-bitingly, heart pounding, action packed chapter.
I too shall miss the exploits of Trevor, Joel, Lisa and Shane.
Thanks soo much for such and awesome story.
H.
I have caught up, couldn't stop because this story is a page turner. Wasn't liking or trusting Tony until this chapter and reading about his side of the story. Now I fear Jacks character, no telling what he's gonna do. Can't wait to see how the boys band develops and how they will be received but I'm thinking a stint on Americas Got Talent is in their future?
Only one complaint. This chapter was way to short.
Keep 'em coming.
H
Hi Houdini,
Decided I'd try this story and WOW! I'm glad I did. This chapter pulled me in. Sooo guess what? Yeah that's right I'll be reading this story as well. Can't wait to see where you take us.
H
C James, you cruel and abusive bastard! To leave us hanging with the four souls, three beating hearts cliff hanger. Though, seriously this is one AWESOME story with another one of your breath holding, heart pounding, action packed chapters. I hope that all on this cat survive because I didn't spend 2 years of my life with these characters for any one of them to die. I will be both pissed and sad at the same time. Well except for Bridgette. That bitch needs to be slowly tortured then put to death. I couldn't believe Trevor instructed the others to "try not to hit Bridgette". WTF? I would have said KILL THE BITCH!
Thanks for such a great and entertaining story. I am prepping my self for the final word to be read on this long, roller coaster of a ride story and the emptiness that is sure to follow.
H
Although other readers equate this story to Deliverance, I liken it to Rambo except Rambo was otracised for being a Vietnam vet and he blew things up. Anyway as always, a great story.
Awesome story. It irks me to see the Hopkins' of the world never able to admit or see their own failings and always blaming others for their woes. Thank GOD he got his comeuppance.
Phshew! I'm breathing a sigh of releaf. Mark on more for the good guys. I loves me some Uncle Greg, glad he was there to foil the plot to destroy Kookaburra, and put servailance on the power boat. I hope that Trevor and Shane make it back to Florida.
The Author of this story is AWESOME! He knows how to get the heart pumping with his action scenes and such.
Thanks for sharing your story.