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  1. ninecila

    Behind Closed Doors

    The last sentence was so sweet... But I now understand Michaels Attitude better. Now I understand why he is so terrified of being gay but also so alright with it. And his childhood explaines also a lot. Great chapter!
  2. Nice, nice, nice Though I didn't know Zuppan also had issues with his hand
  3. ninecila

    Phonecalls

    Oh my God, I can't wait for more! *jump up and down*
  4. Rhydian i so cute!
  5. I still don't get, why Zach should hate Bay. Yes, Bay behaved like a asshole after the kiss and could have handled the whole think better. But I don't think the few sentences were so bad, that Zach should hate him. What Bay Said was not nice and propably hurt Zach - but in part they were also facts - Bay is the better runner. But it is not nice to have such things brutally shoved into your face so feeling hurt and getting pissed of is a natural first reaction. I'm not saying Zach hasn't the right to be really pissed of and in that context I can also understand his threat to out Bay - he was frustrated, hurt and pretty pissed. A lot of People say thinks they don't quite mean under those circumstances. What I can't understand is that he really Told People that Bay is gay. Granted, if his Friends who stayed over like Bay were the first indes he told, he didn't have much time to cool down. BUT he knew what a shitty thing outing someone against their will is - and did it anyway. Even if I am really pissed of at my best friend, there are usually borders I don't cross - like doing things, that can potentially harm that person. The next thing I don't understand is, why neither of them tried to talk to the other. Well I dort of do understand - if each one thoughtthe other hated them it would be hard to approachthem - BUT I would at least try to apologize. I had a lot of fights with my best friend while I was in school. We would Start a fight - about such stupid things like the weather - and stop speckig to each other for six weeks as a result - but that was back when I was 13. From 18 Year olds I would expect different behaviour. But back to the hate thing: I get why Zach could think Bay hates him (if that is what happened), after all he outed him. Buxtehude would Bay think Zach hates him? Zehs initial reaction to Bay being gay wasn't that bad (it could have been better, but I think that was because of the shock of findig out his best friend is gay and has the hots Form him) and he tried to talk about it to Bay. And while the things Bay Said to Zach weren't nice they weren't unforgovable either. Maybe I missed something? Or had the wrong impression of something? And by the way: Bay's parents are ridiculous to believe into stereotypes even after living with their son for 18 years and since he didn't change that much after being forced out of the closet. But it explaines part of why Bay has the predjudices against other gay people.
  6. No more running? I am so proud of Bay
  7. Ha, I knew it! Zu isn't a bad guy, just kind of rough around the edges And yay! Bay is making progress looking forward to the next chapter
  8. Glad that I checkend for a New chapter since it seems that my notifications aren't working. I love this story and have a feeling Bay might make a step in the right directon
  9. I am starting to really like Zu - he is kind of rough on the outside but sweet on the inside (harte Schale, weicher Kern) Maybe he will be able to help Bay with his issues. Love this chapter
  10. I really hope he doesn't give up on Isaac and stops running from things
  11. Like it:)
  12. ninecila

    Chapter 3

    Talk about a mysterious ending....
  13. Wow, my theory couldn't have been farer from the truth - what a loaded chapter. And Bay is so cruel - there are times he seems like an ok guy, but the next moment he is such a prick! Poor Alex...
  14. Ha, good thing that I'm not a native speaker - I didn't even notice the errors the others mentioned though I have to wonder - does one read stories for the story or to search for errors? I wonder what happened to Alex... I get the feeling that Bays hate for flamboiant guys isn't as intense, but I have no clue where I get the feeling from. Maybe Alex broke up with Bay and got together with someone flamboiant? Looking forward to the next chapter
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    Epilogue

    Just finished reading - it was something different - quite refreshing Really liked it
  16. Well he chapter explaines a lot, but I am still not sure wether I like Bay or not
  17. ninecila

    Blind Date

    Oh wow, I so didn't expect Michael to go to Ashers flat. Got to wonder what is going on in Asher after that kiss :)I would love to know more about Michael, as it seems that my first hunch about him being a closet case was true. All in all, I don't get the impression that he is a ungarisch asshole. Instead, I think, he Fels too much - he lets things get to him too easily. I wonder if they will resolve this Problem between the two of them while I am Looking forward to more, I hope you get better soon. best wishes, ninecila
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    Cupid's Arrow

    I am definetly growing to like Michael, despite his drinking problem. And I already got a new therory about Asher - though I am not telling it looking forward to more
  19. ninecila

    Piperton

    I have a feeling Michael might be really deep in the closet - maybe so deep he doesn't even realize it - and it might be the source of his drinking problems. But that is just me guessing - maybe he really is straight and his drinking has another reason. He seems like an ok guy as long he is sober, but I really haven't read enough of him to like or dislike him. Is Ash a nurse or doctor? His examination and diagnosis seemed professional.
  20. Oh my God, what a situation! I don't have much hope of them escaping Dean, but its impressive, that they at least made it to the core. I am going to keep on writing for an impossible mirracle.... But either way it ends, it is one hell of a story
  21. ninecila

    Chapter 1

    I'm really looking forward to more chapters. This is promising Lots of drama, something I love. I can imagine there is going on a lot of selfblaming when the others find out.
  22. I don't see how they could survive this - but well I didn't tink they would survive Bridget either....
  23. Uh oh, that last sentence sounds ominous - will Bridget succeed or will they get away and simply never return to Gitmo? But I honestly don't see a way they can escape the trap Bridget lay for them this time. Anxiously awaiting more
  24. ninecila

    Chapter 1

    Interestingv:)
  25. ninecila

    Chapter 3

    A really, really beautiful chapter
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