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  1. ninecila

    Chapter 18

    I love the story, please keep writing! It is far, far away from being total shit. It is will written with an interesting plot and great pace
  2. ninecila

    Chapter 19

    How could you stop there?! 😡👿
  3. ninecila

    Chapter 3

    Honestly, the nerve Dick has to do something like that....! 🤬🤯 Looking forward is not the right word, but I will be eagerly waiting for the next chapter to see how this continues.
  4. ninecila

    Chapter 15

    I Rallye am curious Wehre Luca fits into the picture. I can‘t shake the feeling that bei so not directly connected with Stefano, but I have no Idea what bis intentions are.
  5. ninecila

    Chapter 5

    The more I readthemore captivated I become
  6. ninecila

    Misery

    Love the Story
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    Chapter 7

    I really like the Plot and think I could get really into this story, but there is one Point that prevents that. The style in which it is written is very confusing to me - I have a really hard Time with keeping apart the different characters without confusing them and also with keeping track of the plot. I keep having the feeling I missed important parts of the plot. I think it would have been nice to have a Little more detailed Info on what happened After the party - it feels ab bit rushed at that part.
  8. ninecila

    New School

    Nice chapter And you did a great Job with the geman translations - did you have German in school? The only thing I would have to criticize is that you are translating too literally sometimes: the best example is the sentence about the focus of the german class - the structure is the same as the english one but this order doesn't make sense in German. And instead of falling in live with s.o., verlieben wir uns in jemanden But as I said before: Overall a great job on the translations and a very nice chapter!
  9. ninecila

    Chapter 11

    And here i was hoping Ezra would finally catch a break.... Poor guy.
  10. ninecila

    Part 3

    Love it, simply love it. You shared an incredible story with us - Thank you!
  11. ninecila

    Chapter 9

    Intense.... I Never thought Ezra would open up this much with Josh and his Mum.
  12. ninecila

    Chapter 8

    Yay, Yay, Yay!!! Considering the topic of this Story my excitement is inappropriante, but I was just so happy to See that there was a new chapter of "Saving Ezra". You did a fantastic job with this chapter, I felt as if I was right there in the car with Ezra an Josh, strung tight with worry for Ezra. I am hoping, that als horrible as this event was, it will prove to be a turning point in this life full of pain and violence. I am looking forward to the next chapter
  13. ninecila

    Chapter 1

    Hilraious I really like this father and son combo
  14. ninecila

    Chapter 17

    Oh, I so hope the next chapter will be ready soon - that's plainly evil! But I still love the story
  15. ninecila

    Chapter 13

    I am without words, i simply love this story...
  16. ninecila

    Chapter 12

    Incredible chapter - i can't wait for the next one
  17. ninecila

    Chapter 2

    Love the story, can't wait for more
  18. ninecila

    Chapter 10

    So exciting - can't wait for the next chapter! An incredible story, I love it
  19. I will keep it short, since I propably would just ramble senselessly: I absolutely love it! One of the best chapters up until now. This is one incredibly good story!
  20. Wow, I Never thought Ambrose would turn up again! Love it!
  21. ninecila

    Chapter 5

    What a cliffhanger... And a whole week until the next chapter... You Are cruel
  22. ninecila

    Chapter 26

    Lobend it an I will wait anxiously for book 2!
  23. ninecila

    Chapter 21

    Very intense but beautiful chapter
  24. *squeal* Finally it happened - so cute! I love it! poor Stephen, it is so stressful for him, but I have faith that things Are to going to turn around for him now. Can't wait for the next chapter
  25. ninecila

    Chapter 1

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