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Well now, Lookey what the wind blew in! What the hell man. I totally did not see that all coming with Lee!! Has Corbin been sitting next to Domidick in those meetings? Wow. I like Nick for Corbin, he seems like a good dude. Too bad he is going to end up in Friendzoneland. I still say Corbin won't end up with the dummy Brit. I have to say though, I was so proud of the Brit. He is getting closer to knowing himself. OMG! HA! I just a thought! Maybe the Brit is supposed to be Corbin's Ron Weasley! I still like Lee for Corbin even if Corbin just totally made a dick move. Lee will be well within his rights to threaten him with a butter knife. So when do we get the cadette back out of hock? I am interested in seeing the full unholy trinity back in action. I really love this story. Its so awesome. Even if the author has a tendency to wander away, leaving us all hanging in agony. Ha! Free guilt trips! You are still amazing. For reals, I hope all is well and you are just very busy. )

I finally caught up on the story. Its great! I like the pacing so far. I can't wait to read more.

That was so good. I litterally yelled "YES!" when they kissed. It was so sweet. I had a horrid day today and seeing this chapter really made it better. Take care of poor sweet Robin. AJ is a prick. Thanks again for this awesome chapter.

Hmmm.... This was a good chapter. I am glad Nick waited a bit to be the grand marshall in the got laid parade. Corbin needs someone like that for a bit. I don't really think Corbin will break his heart. Nick comes across as strong. I don't get a lot of drama from him yet. Thats good since Corbin already has his unholy trinity to deal with. I do think he will be one of those people that you sleep with and date for awhile and then they are your Ron Weasley for the rest of your life. I am so mad at the dummy Brit at this point that I don't think he deserves Corbin anyways. Corbin isnt an angel by any means but he is mostly honest. I think I like Lee for him at this point. Then again you could throw a huge curveball and set him up with Domidick. Omg that would be funny. Just for giggles you should make Dom have a dream about him. I am totally cracking up right now. Anywho, this was a good chapter. Thank you for not taking forevaaaaaaaa to post it. Until next time...

You know that look that you see on someone's face right before they start threatening people with butter knives? Yup, you guessed it. I am making it at you right meow. So help me, if you wait a month to undo this little cliffy you left here, I will aim to misbehave. Now. That being said, I think Pete is a penis head. I know he is confused and all that but damn it, He does not get to zip off one little text and be back into Corbin's loving arms. What he did was no no bad Brit! So now Corbin has another little boy toy. This Nick guy could be fun. It gets Corbin away from the unholy trinity that is Pete,Lee, and Mike. I like that Nick knows himself and seems to be crushing on Corby-dearest. Could be interesting. I still don't think that the penis head, formerly known as The Brit is good for him. Its fun waiting to see. How much longer will Mike be in exile? I want to see how he comes into all of this. I think I covered everything. Oh wait, I remember! Wasn't Corbin Lee's first? I think they have that creator bond like vampires or something. Also, Lee turned into a HO! Goodness heavens. So I think that might be all that is beging to be let out of my little nutty brain. I liked this chapter, Domidick is still an ass and the Brit is still a penis head. I think that covers everything! KTHNXBYE!

I'm sorry do we know you? Have you been here before? Oh yeah! I remember you!!!! Just for the record, two weeks is 14 days. A fortnight if you prefer it from Pete's world. Actually, I don't want to be in Pete's world. I know who I am and it took a LOOOOOOONG time to get there. Pete is a damn dummy. He always has a reason for what he is doing other than the actual reason. One day he is going to want Corbs and Corbs is going to be gone, gone, baby. Drunken words spoken are just sober thoughts unhidden. I hate that Corbin's heart is getting broken by this damn dummy every time he turns around. Mike was not perfect but he was honest. He also knew the value of buying an extra set of cheap sheets to get freaky on whiist the other ones were being washed. Personally, I don't think he will end up with either one of the two jackasses. I think there is a Prince Charming waiting in the wings for him. Omg. Funny thought. What if he ends up with LEE?! That is rather doable actually, they are both alike more than they know. They are both forward thinking social climbing type folk. They make plans and have a strategy to get what they want. Lee is apparently a great orator( hehe). It could work. I love speculating on it. I can't wait to see what happens next. So help me if Pete ever ends up in Corbin's bed, he is well within his rights to make him wait DAYS to get to the end of the rainbow. P.S. I do hope all is well with you. I was so happy to see this chapter up, I hope you are able to get the next one up soon. Tootles!

I was reading all the reviews calling Pete toxic. I am not really sure that he is. I am not always sure he is the best thing for Corbin but I am not always sure there is a person who is best for another. I still think that Pete is so confused about himself. Its hard to be something for someone else when you dont know what your ownself is yet. ( thats a horrible sentence, I know ) But my thing is this. Corbin is stuck in the middle right now. Mike has decided to get his head out of his ass. I don't agree with what Domidick did but I think he may have helped them out in the long run. Mike and Corbin are going to have time to step back and look at what they want from each other. Pete is being forced to figure himself out. I think they should just have a threesome and be done with it! Sorry, kidding, sort of... Now on to the whole Lee thing. Lee is an interesting little dude. I think that everyone needs a Lee, You know, someone to scratch your back or the back of your throat, which ever itches at the time... Corbin is smart to bring Lee into his inner world. I think that they are going to be good for each other. I think when Corbin looks at it he is going to see that Lee is a lot like him and he will do great things. As for Domidick and the seniors. They are all dicks. I can't even say they are out for their own benefits. They are just ugh... Anyways, I am glad that you finally posted. I had to read 2 chapters because some how I missed the last one! Oh well.

Omg. Those silly boys. The whole lot of them are completely nuts. I still love Corbin's crafiness. And Lee... Well you can just wander over to the review to see what I had to say. HAHAHAHAH Cliffy for you... I did want to know if Mike was going to really be in trouble or if he just got a slap on the wrist. Domidick was so wrong in that. Too far and too petty to be just deserts ya know?

Two weeks my ass.... Its ok though, it was well worth the wait. I am team Mike all the way. Although I laugh at him because bullets at his face is ok but a littte bit of man squeezings and he comes all undone. I am really proud of him thought because he is starting come around and get what he needs I am also mad at him too because hitting is bad. I can see where he was coming from though. Truth be told, NitBrit needed to be popped one good time. My heart hurts for him though. I can't imagine not being my whole self. What he is going through now is so damn hard. I can see why he is going a little nuts. I still say that in the end ( It doesnt even matter... Sorry, Linkin Park abucted my brain, I met them 2 weeks ago. It happens) I say Corbin is going to end up with someone not introduced yet. Kind of like How I Met Your Mother without the dragged out end. For the record I am glad that Corbin appears to have found his balls again. They were tucked up kinda tight for a bit. I love his crafty ways. He is so slick and wonderfully awesome. Though I do wonder if he is trying to set a record for helping guys out of the closet. Will he win like a toaster or something? Love ya bunches and I can't wait for the next chapter. Please feel free to use my idea of two weeks instead of yours. ( I hope all is well on your end of the world.)

Oh this was fun. I love QAF. I miss them so very much. Its on Netflix now and I must admit to watching it through every now and again. You nailed these two characters. I'll just be waiting over here on the sofa for more please.

HA! Take that Brit boy. Corbin was so right for doing that. Pete was evil with his little text and he deserved a little retribution. I am really liking how things are going with Mike. I love watching him come out of his shell a little bit. I wonder if Amanda knows she is on the wrong side in this war. Silly girl. I don't think Pete deserves Corbin anymore. I feel bad though, Pete needs to figure himself out and will probably need help to do it. On the other hand, Corbin is not a set of training wheels. Pete needs to ride out on his big boy bike and go for it. Now for buying the paper thin horrible sheets for a temporary thing... I have never bought a set of those because I was playing with chocolate Redi-whip with others. Yes, there is a story there, no I will not tell it. I want to maintain the illusion of my halo after all. I about cracked up when I read that part. tooooo funny.

I like what is happening with Mike. Pete's text cracked me up because he is all like, Oh I don't like about who I am kissing but he is sooooo wrong. He may be honnest about who is kissing but he is lying to the most important person! He is lying to himself. When Corbin kissed him he could have stopped or turned away. Corbin wasn't forcing him. Pete wanted to be there but he is a big, feathery chicken! I do however see where he can be pissed about Corbin heading over to Mikeville to play for a bit. That was a no no bad thing. However, Corbin hasn't quite learned how to keep the horse in the barn yet. He will though. I have faith. Someone over in the forum said that they see a life without either guy and I can agree with that. I can't wait to see how this all comes out. P.S. I love how Corbin wiggles his way out of everything and the whole I will stab you with a butter knife was great. I threaten my kid sister with a butter knife about once a week. Its good for her.

Man. That was a really lot of something. I feel bad for all three boys. Pete is probably shocked at this point and needs a minute to mull everything over. Mike probably doesnt know what to think. He is turning out rather sweet though. Even though Mike is clearly being hurt by all this change mostly does hurt. I hope what he would get out of all this is a new picture of himself. One that is able to kick that closet door open and let a little light in. Poor Corbin is being crushed too. I don't even know what to say about Pete though. The one thing that is starting to come through is that Corbin is starting to look out a little more for feelings. This is going to be good to watch happen. Ok I have said it before and I am saying it again. The way you tell the story is amazing. The tone and voice is so strong that you feel like you are watching a movie happen. I can often "see" whats happening in my head and thats really cool. I wish this was made into series. It would be awesome like Queer as Folk. Who do you think you would have for actors? Anywho.... TTFN!

So I would just like to thank you for getting this song stuck in my head. Its one of the only from George Michael that I like. Well at least now I will get to know it better as its stuck in my head. With that being said... I am glad Mike wandered along and pulled Corbin's head out of his behind. He is smarter than some little fresho. He was right. She just wanted the limelight. Stupid girl. I hate people like that. I can't wait to watch Corbin squash her like a bug and then go after Domedick. What an absolute jerk. Anywho. I can't wait to see what happens next and I am glad Corbin is done with his pity party. Now he can start coming back.

Wellllll nowwwww. Imagine my surprise when I wandered over here to see my favorite wolf back cavorting amongst the people. Please refrain from going away for so long. I like this story and I am spoiled. Oh and quite personally. Corbin did the exact right thing. That stupid hootchie mama is a freshman. To let her go on that way would not allow her to learn a valuable life lesson. He did her a favor. Man I felt sorry for him though. He will be ok though because he is that kind of strong. Welcome back.