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  1. Coldplay has always found a way through me. Trouble is my favorite from them. Beautiful song and beautiful video. https://youtu.be/kcASPx3-HuI
  2. I ran after him but I couldn't reach him. He ran faster as I got closer, and I couldn't run anymore. "Craig,” I yelled but he disappeared in the distance. "Come, John. Come for me," he yelled, from somewhere ahead. I was out of breath and I was sweating. I began to cough and doubled over. From behind, somebody grabbed me. "No!" I screamed. "John! Wake up. Wake up.” Mel was standing next to me. She looked worried. "John, how long have you been having nightmares?" "I haven't in a long time. T
  3. It’s so easy to live your life behind the scenes. I became so accustomed to it. Brian was supposed to be the famous one not me. Yet when the story Broke I found that everyone knew my name and they wanted to drag it through the mud. The media was working overtime on me. Some called me street trash. One news anchor called me Brian Black’s shame, another stopped short of calling me a whore but it was very much implied. Not one of them knew how hard I had worked to leave the streets behind me. No on
  4. Happy New Year Everyone!!!
  5. Happy Holidays to everyone on here.
  6. you can read these side by side.
  7. Hi Lisa thanks for your comments. i think they are helpful and I am thankful. The caps is my fault i Get used to caps in my line of work and I cant seem to break free of them sorry. All of your questions will be answered as we move forward into the story. The idea is to kind of keep the reader in the dark as John as in the dark, so you find out stuff as he reads it.
  8. Are you an editor? Would you like to edit this story?
  9. Life is like a roller coaster. You take your highs and lows then you end up right where you began. It had been two years since I last saw my family. I was a street kid when they found me. “You sure this place is empty?” Brady asked me. I rolled my eyes. I had cased the place for the past week. No one ever came or went from there. We could easily spend the night there. There was even a heater I could see from one of the windows on the side. “Yeah, come on,” I said. “It’s getting cold and we nee
  10. As our fans cheered for us, Drew watched me from the side of the stage. He was also clapping but his smile told me more. He was proud of me and I loved that. We were at the end of our world tour. One last show and he and I could begin planning our next chapter in our lives. He asked me to marry him when we were in Paris. “Encore, Encore,” the crowd yelled. Drew joined me on stage and started to play the song he and I had collaborated on together. At the end of every show we performed our song.
  11. Will Brian and Brady come to terms with the past they both shared?
  12. jdmotion

    Prologue

    Thanks for the review I will look for those and Update.
  13. The production assistant clipped a small lavaliere microphone to my lapel, and strung the wires within my jacket. “Remember to speak in that direction,” He said as a makeup artist approached me. She took out her kit and started touching up my face. I waited for her to finish. She gave me a thumbs-up before I took my seat. One of the production assistants instructed me on what camera to look at. The Interview would take ten minutes then I would take questions from the audience. A producer start
  14. http://youtu.be/MYSVMgRr6pw The video for this one makes me sad. However his voice is amazing.
  15. I love when things like this happen. It would probably just make my day if I saw a tiny fairy door in my town.
  16. My fam usually celebrates Christmas eve we give the kids gifts (which there are only two) and we get drunk. Christmas day we all usually work.
  17. This is dangerous after a break up.
  18. Exactly he was so afraid of his family finding out that I never took priority. Finally i proudly took the situation in my own hands and confronted him about it. He refused to change so we parted. My own story shouldnt mean that everyones is like that but if theres no compromise then you really can't move forward. Its like having a long distance relationship with someone that lives ten minutes away from you.
  19. Chapter One “How different the world can look from the top of a building,” I said to Arthur. “Everything is small, insignificant, and yet so full of life. People move in and out of cars and buildings, they shop, they talk and live out their lives.” People are oblivious at the beauty our world gives us as the clouds in the sky slowly move away and the sun takes away the light. It's so unlike my life. I stand still when everything moves. They said I had a car accident that took my memory. They s
  20. I could always sense when there was something wrong with Craig. He always retreated into himself. When something really troubled him he couldn’t focus. I knew he wouldn’t tell me what was wrong if I asked. All I could do was wait for him to tell me. “It’s all over,” I reassured him. “She’s gone now. We can finally live our lives.” He smiled and the cloud over his face disappears. “I know,” he told me and he takes my hand. “I’m going to miss you is all.” “I’ll be back in a couple of weeks,” I
  21. John Williams cant remember his life before he wrote a novel based on it. Can he regain all that he has lost by reading his novel?
  22. This poor kid is going to get a ton of offers from companies for his image. He seems so overwhelmed. Hopefully he can take advantage of that.
  23. I dated someone in the closet once but I couldn't keep that going. It became difficult because he worked too much and he lived with family. it got to the point when I would only see him once a month and I couldn't handle that for too long. Ultimately I got tired of waiting to just hear from him and we parted ways. I guess it depends on how much you can handle. I full heartedly believe that if you care really deeply about someone you can take a lot but that always gets old. I suggest that you have a conversation with the person you are dating and make your feelings on the matter known. Maybe you can find even ground you can both live with.
  24. Hey Ron thanks for the reply it means a lot to me.
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