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Thanks Joann for finding the story and reading it, a lot will be told in next chapter but not all of the answers.
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Chapter 2 Rob looked at his phone smiling at David, and then touched the screen to accept the call. “Hey, Jack.” Rob grabbed David’s hand to make sure he didn’t get up from his chair. He reached over giving David a kiss, whispering “I love you” … ya, I’m here, what’s up?...Ya, he is right here with me…yep, he sure did tell me what happened…well you have a lot of explaining to do to…Jack, I have heard all the crap you have said to him about being gay, then he finds you in bed with a guy. What
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Just a little beta for you. You have SarEr, Zun and the mother leaving the hospital at 11 pm, but you have the doctors calling Zun's sister dead at 9 pm. If that is the case then Zun and the others would have been there when she died. Like the story very much, on to the next chapter
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Chapter 1 “You are not going to believe what happened to me today.” David was saying this when he walked in the apartment expecting to find his brother sitting there on the couch like any other day when he got home from work. David and his brother Jack have lived together since they we’re both trying to save money so they could get their own place and have enough to rent for a year. David wanted to go back to college and Jack wanted to have something but now he doesn’t remember what it was
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One man tries to understand what he had done to make his family keep secrets from him, all the while trying to make a life with his boyfriend. Will he be the better person? Will he get back what is rightly his?
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Well the end it not what I thought would happen, a lot of unanswered questions still need to be answered.
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Thank you Lisa could'nt have finished the story without your help.
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Epilogue Sitting here on the porch of the house Gavin and I had built, had me thinking back on how all this came about. Brought some happy and sad memories to the front. My Dad passed away two years after Gavin and I moved in with Mom. He never came back home; Mom had to put him in a full care facility since he couldn’t be put on a waiting list for a liver. He didn’t die happy; he made all the nurses lives hell in that facility, throwing his fits of anger. I never went and saw him. I sta
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Chapter 3 We pulled into the yard and parked in front of the house, noticing that my mom’s car wasn’t there. I looked over to make sure all the horses were in the barn and not in the turnout. “Let’s go in the house and wait for her to get here,” I suggested. Gavin got out and waited for me to come around the front of the truck. He grabbed me, giving me a big hug and whispered in my ear. “Everything will be ok, babe. Just remember that I fell in love with you and that we will take car
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Oh his father is a real duzey, but there is them parents out there somewhere that act just that way. Thanks for the comment and reading my story. One more chapter to go then epilogue which will pull the whole story together on what happened to the two boys.
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I'm trying Rach
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Chapter 2 “Hi, what are you doing?” I asked when the phone was answered. “Nothing, sitting here looking at the computer. Trying to stay in my room. Mom and Dad are yelling at each other again.” “Can you get out of the house?” “Ya, where you at?” “At the park. Had another fight with my old man again. Mom just called telling me that he collapsed and she was waiting on the paramedics to come and get him. He always does this when he drinks all day,” I explained to Gavin. Gavin wa
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Thanks Rachel could not have done it with you and Lisa. Thanks for all the help.
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mmmmmm....we will see about that mean drunk, next chapter might tell you more about just that.
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Okey Dokey will do. Thanks for the comment and reading my story.
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Chapter 1 I walked in the kitchen door, seeing my mom and dad sitting at the kitchen table. I went to the sink to get some water, turned around and saw my father staring at me. “What now?” “What are you doing in here? Did you get the hay in the barn?” “No, I just got done with the fencing.” I stared back at him, just knowing that shit is going to happen, like always. “Fine, now get out there and get the hay done. You are the most useless kid I have ever seen. You don’t know your
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Thank you, had fun working on this little story, more to be posted soon.
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Thank you very much for all the help, even if I am just a Okie, and our lango don't match we worked through it, and that I thank you for.
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Thanks, had some great help.
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Montana High Prologue The fictional characters in this story are based on a tale about two young adults falling in love in a small town in Montana (Horse Country). Harlowton, Montana is a small town outside of Billings. Seth grew up as an only child, and his life was not easy for him. He and his parents lived on a 120-acre ranch with his mom’s parents. His grandparents homesteaded this land when his grandfather was in the military. They grew corn and wheat for many years. As years went
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Could it get any better? Two young adults thought that they would have to leave their home town to be together. But there lives take a turn for the better....
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Just My Style I’m no poet, But when I look into your eyes, I see every dream I’ve ever had, I see the sun rising and the moon shining, I see all my tomorrows captured in a single moment, I can see the light there in your eyes, The love we share in a single tear, But most of all, I see all the love you have looking back at me.
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Thanks, loved writing it.
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I try!
