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  1. Heh. Ran into this video elsewhere on the net a couple hours ago. Found it amusing and cute... in it's entirety.
  2. Finn

    Chapter 1

    Eternity. Forever. That’s how long I’d been alive, the length of time I’ve spent in this depthless realm. Truth be told, I don’t recall being born. The first memory engraved in my mind is aimless wandering, attempting to escape from a large fountain, only to turn right around and find myself at its edge. I live by this fountain. It’s my home. Not once in the last forever have I strayed from it. It’s always here when I turn around, regardless of how far I’ve moved away—it’s cool, clear water je
  3. What is existence? What makes it valuable? Having everything? Feeling everything? Knowing yourself?
  4. Well, there goes that possibility. I am a terrible, terrible boy. ;P The short scene by the river in the trailer reminded me of another movie I saw once... Probably because it looked like the same damned river. Seems like a nice place, to boot. That wasn't just filler. How dare you even think so.
  5. No, this is: would you be my Pup, WL? A Fluffy Puppy would certainly make sitting and watching more bearable. xD
  6. Ohohoho, cute guys? Do want. Unfortunately, I don't so much want to watch television. Sitting and watching is boring. Although, the film looks damned scary, and the trailer reasonably exciting. Maybe if a certain huggable entity shows, and I need a justification for said huggling...
  7. Happy birthday, sir! o/o/o/o/o/o/ Had to Google the guy to get to his name. Couldn't get to his profile from his writing. Had to double back to Google to get to his profile. You guys need to make getting to a writer's profile from their story easier. Anyway, best of days and luck to ye, sir. *adds Stronger Than Lions to his stuff-to-eat list*
  8. This is two years old? Sweet Jesus. I have honestly /never/ heard it before today. Her voice, it is... obnoxious. My God, so obnoxious. And she was thirteen? Mein Gott! Those were teens? Whoa, I'm out of it. They did seem more like children... tweens, barely. Jesus, and they were driving.
  9. Finn

    Chapter 7

    They're already pretty friendly. ;P Luka just doesn't know it. That kid is so, aimless, heh. Cody does a lot of giving in, it does so seem, except in the big way Soren would like. ;D No, I'm joking. Except, not. At all. Ahahahahah.... *teeters off*
  10. Finn

    Chapter 6

    Lol, funny. Cyber buddy... You'll discover their thoughts on that a few chapters later. ;P Noel's Luka's close bud, though. The same one Luka checked for during Chapter 2... it was a single small line, but it was there, ahhahaha.... ;P I'm glad you're glad, and not disappointed it was so... anti-climatic. Interesting on Soren, though; barely says much on him during his tween years. xD
  11. Finn

    Chapter 2

    Seriously, your writing skills are ridiculously amazing. I'm in love. Or maybe jealous. Probably both. Either way, kudos. Had me smiling and laughing through both chapters, and I am just entertained when stories toy with me like that. You also made me recall (the same stuff as Lisa, heh), which though unpleasant, is quite impressive. Kudos, kudos. Love your skills with words. ;P
  12. Finn

    Chapter 7

    “You’re up late,” Mark’s voice whispered. “You’re usually up by the time I arrive.” Luka stirred, groaning slightly as he turned in his bed. “Go away,” he grumbled beneath his breath. “Let me sleep.” Mark smirked, reaching out and brushing the hair out of Luka’s face. The boy was in the middle of his bed, his face pressed into his pillow. “I’m afraid I can’t do that,” Mark replied, running his hand along Luka’s slim body. “I get paid for educating you, not for babysitting you.” His hand brushe
  13. Finn

    Chapter 6

    I don’t know… I feel as if he just doesn’t pay as much attention to me as he should. I mean, for the last couple weeks, whenever this kid—let’s call him Steve—shows up, my boyfriend just, like, goes blank. Pretty much no matter what’s he’s doing, when Steve shows up, he just drops everything and gives him (Steve!) his undivided attention. It hurts, you know, to have your boyfriend—the guy who tells you he loves you ever single goddamn day—pay so much attention to someone who isn’t you. I don’t
  14. Finn

    Close Call

    That is a very close call! Looks like speeding actually saved 'em. 'S not all bad, seems. ;P
  15. Chrome doesn't use it as an add-on? Huh. That's unexpected. Don't know any non-Adobe PDF readers, unfortunately. It doesn't give me problems, and my computer hides the notifications I don't often bother with. It bugs me to update at times, but I generally ignore it--leave it there for days, until I finally go "ugh, I /should/ update this stuff". Haven't yet. As for anti-virus, I use AVG. Have never used anything else. Have had unsavory run-ins with Norton (and McAfee), and, consequently, have advised my family and neighbors to ditch it ASAP--it's (both) just a ugly, bothersome, annoying thing(s). I don't even trust it (them) to really do anti-virus stuff. Here's a search on a site I use when I'm desperate for an alternative, though. Hope it helps.
  16. Finn

    Chapter 5

    Ah, I'll run in and clarify that soon--the whole mother, stepmother business. The latter just sounded like a mouthful, but I guess it is more accurate and clear. Cody's mom has something against him, and he's feeling pretty heated over it. His dad's also quite, troublesome to him. It was really the comment his father made and how the man totally forgot the kids weren't home that made Cody break. The lad just took the rage and channeled it , probably in the wrong direction. I'll fix that second issue too, aha. And, yes, even I've noticed I'm repetitive with my words at time... lots of times, really. It's something I'm trying to wiggle out of; hopefully it'll be different in the later chapters. Criticism is welcome, though. Can't fix something if the problem isn't known. I'll try to use that word less, though; albeit, I don't mean the entire ugleh face, but more of the little noise that comes with it--you know, that little arrogant wheeze. I find it hilarious. Very hilarious. Much appreciated! o/
  17. Finn

    Chapter 4

    Danks, danks. Funny you should mention Luka's extended family. A later chapter suggests his surname and/or culture stand out in his present environment. Either way, it's mentioned that Luka's from abroad, so it would be inconvenient for him to escape that way. Plus, as I'm already well-deep into it, it would be a tad, random to sudden spawn a cool uncle. Although, it's certainly an option, if I want to avoid from getting /too/ negative. Soren and Cody certainly are, something... not sure if cute's the appropriate word though, ahhaha. Cheers, o/
  18. Finn

    Chapter 5

    Soren groaned, struggling to open his eyes. He felt secure, with Cody’s warm arms wrapped tightly around him. His boyfriend’s sleeping face was staring back at him, the lad’s pink lips parted slightly inches from Soren’s nose. He couldn’t resist; Soren arched forward to kiss his lover, his hands maneuvering beneath the blanket to set themselves around the boy’s waist. Cody returned the kiss, his eyes opening shortly after it ended, a wide smile spreading across his face. “Hey,” Cody whispered,
  19. Congrats, all. o/o/o/o/o/o/ Indeed, FishWings. Reminds me of golden chocolate... yum.
  20. Now that you mention it, James, yeah, it does sound pretty incredulous. And I bought it without a second thought, too. Amazing stuff. Beautiful story and pretty nicely written too; I could be jealous of this playwright... for more than that reason, really.
  21. And that frightens me; I like my anonymity. I neither need nor want everyone everywhere I have ever had contact with tracking and watching me every moment of every day. Neither do I want the power that comes with this stuff--information on you--in anyone's hands but /you/. It's, disturbing and unsettling. >_> Cyberspace should be free, yo. o/o/o/o/o/o/o/ Also~~, I'd love to join you in your remote cabin, but I'm afraid I'd die from lack of Interwebs.
  22. Oh God, yes. It's ridiculous. I logged into Skype once, and the damned thing integrated my contacts--I don't want my Skype/MSN contacts on my frakking phone. Since I've logged into Google Play, I'm frightened to check online; Google might have already added my phone number to shite. At least they don't have my real name... hopefully-probably... I will never log into Facebook from that thing. Though, on topic; what I really meant was seeing what I see. My phone defaulted to allowing Apps my Geo-location, so I'm pretty sure they're all already following me... They're everywhere, man--everywhere. They're following me, oh my Jesus--noooooooo~~~ *gets dragged off by Don't Be Evil agents*
  23. Woo, awareness campaigns! o/o/o/o/o/o/ That'll fix it, all. ;P Never worn pink in my life; just don't think that color clicks with me, aha. First time for everything, though...
  24. Finn

    Chapter 4

    Soren grunted and groaned as he felt Cody’s body heat hug him from behind, as well as from within. “I can’t believe we’re actually doing this,” he mumbled out, just managing to force the words out before Cody’s movements sent him reeling again. “Don’t pretend,” Cody returned, pressing himself closer to his lover. “You wanted it as much as I did.” Soren grinned blindly, feeling Cody’s cold fingers wrap around his member. “You’re quite excited, babe.” “I know, I know,” Soren pleaded, leaning bac
  25. Does indeed seem pretty cool, and it also comes across as pretty dorky. I mean, walking around wearing those things... Not yet. Pretty interesting, though, that some houses have voice-controlled automation... Kinda scary too. Seems far-fetched, tad futuristic, all mind-blowing. This one's made by Google, though, so I already don't trust it to not collect every bit of information it can. xD And it's uber-uber expensive. Don't think it'd become a common toy anytime soon... least Apple gets in on it.
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