Daithi

Like this story. It is an emotional roller coaster. Interesting to see what happens to Derek.

I'm so glad the hearing is done and no I didn't think you would do that.....bjt the ghost of a chance was always there. I wonder how disappointed Noah will be with no go-go boys on the vacation. I think I might have an idea what the detective wants to talk to Scott about. One its either something to do with Steve and his not quite faithfulness or about the time after Steve's death and before Noah. Either way I really hope it doesn't cause a hassle between the guys.

And truly beautiful story, it took me a few chapters to get into it but I'm so glad I finished it. The characters in this story really stand out each one made their own impact towards how the ending played out. The final characters in the last few paragraphs are really what the whole story was about. Usually I prefer stories where everything us neatly bundled up into a happy ending. This story had the perfect ending, there were loose ends that we never see the outcome of Marx, Conrad, Keegs parents and Jean. But they were in the story but more of a sidebar lol. To me or what I got out of it was the power of love, hope and faith, but done in such a truly unique way that you didn't need those ends tied for a complete story. A sequel would be nice we can see how Keegs can be human equivalent to of an angel and guide Alex, and to watch Patrick grow and find a partner. Hope to see more of these characters but can sorta understand if we don't.

You have two people,especially who profess to love Keegs. One who was let down with love but turned vindictive, guess there is truth in Shakespeare words about a women scorned. Then there is the, over of a ghost that will do will protect him, build his confidence plus everything else thru love and for love. I will take the ghost please.

I wonder why she is doing this. Is it cause he is a ghost and is worried Alex will hurt him even though Alex has done nothing but good for Keegs. Or as I suspect she is doing this because she was scorned and is doing the the bitch thing.. Either way I hope it comes back and bites her in the ass.

He was in the car but was he the decapitated one or the other one. Was the other one his brother or an old lover. Intriguing.

Was he in the other car?

Oh wow. Marx didn't stand a chance, now hopefully he doesn't twist it around so that he shot the other guy in self defense trying to help Alex.

Okay that was interesting I think there is just a bit more than psychic happenings going on with Alex.

That's what you call coming out with style.

March really isn't to brilliant is he lol. And what is up with Alex that was interesting, knowing text or calls are coming us one thing but beating someone up without touching them is a bit freaky. Good story though. Would love to have seen the look on Marx's face after Coaches little admittance.

You know Sasha you make it really hard to stay mad at Bay. He has had a lot of controversy in only 18 hears. As each chapter from his past crops up I see why he thinks the way he does, but now it's crunch time. He needs to think about what he wants now, is he going to run from it all like be has always done or is he going to wisen up, stand his ground and fight for Isaac. I hope he fights back this time, he has way to much to lose running this time.

I don't think Jon knows exactly what to think. It sounds like Kent doesn't want to push and, dt Jon bring it up. And Jon is wondering why he wasn't pushing and asking for. Sounds almost like Jon isn't sure what gets wants, either that or he was ts Kent to bring it up a date make the decisions. They need to talk more rather than skirting the elephant.

I am not addicted...much I just never actually log out I just changed screens and refresh everyone hour or so lol. Unless my Internet goes wonky due to weather or I actually am driving and don't have Internet access bjg that doesn't count the.....does it? Lol

What a beautiful chapter. A thrilling weekend and I love the turn around payback Kent gave Jon with the instructors, wonder if the two instructors were a couple that they could off each other so well. It's so obvious that Jon loves Kent if only he would stop analyzing and just go for it. He can trust himself over and over again in high risk sports he needs to finally risk his heart for Kent. Confused about the laughter at the end I know there must be a significance about the 1p.m. But can't remember it.

You knew it was coming, it was just a matter of time. I'm just sorry it took so long for him to really screw up. As much as I hate to admit it Zupan was correct, and the day Zu was actually civil Bay proved him right. Isaac was right in there is no filter between brain and mouth but that can be fixed for the most part. What Bay needs to think about is the reason for the words and thoughts he needs to filter. He's never had something so important to him to lose before. Now comes the 64,000 dollar question , is he going to run lime the child he was or stay and fight like the man he is for what he wants. Staying, growing up and fighting for Isaac will be the hardest thing he's ever done, I hope he has it in him for both of them

Intriguing last sentence. But if he had a simpler mind would he be the same man he is now. Yeah be wouldn't have all the quirks he has now, but on the other hand its those same quirks that make up his personality and make him Jon. My way of thinking a little bit I'd effort us more than worth it in the end. Yeah he is a worrier but I like the introspective part of his personality. It actually plays off quite nicely on Kent more amiable personality so it works fir them I think anyway. Nice chapter. And yes to answer hour question whether they are gay..straight lr anything in between if you make,etc you are big babies when your sick. It is officially written into the male genetic code lmao.

Zu still rubs me the wrong way but I don't see the accident being totally his fault so I think Bay is wrong in that, but the guy really is a prick. On a good note Isaac is starting to rub off on Bay. At the Bar when he made a scene one he never ran and two he knew be screwed up and why. Before he just would have ran til he could tuck it away as someone else's fault.

Well interesting reason to get shot lol. But it sounds like Ash and Michael will have quite a bit of time to sort everything out. Something tells me it will not be a quite easy convalescent, but it will prove go be interesting. Hugs and warm wishes for your surgery KC

What a sad chapter, so very confusing. I wish it had been Aaron that had died rather than Chance. I don't think Julius will be the same, he has lost to much.

Very nice chapter. They have everything come a long while from that first meeting. Jon still has confidence issues and they pop up at the most awkward times. But Kent seems to be able to handle them well. Though it will be interesting to see what he does when he finds out that the root of it is Jon doesn't think he is good enough for Kent. Looking forward to reading more.

It's so sad when someone that young has no one to turn to. Kids get lost thru the cracks, he lived thru a year and a half of hell because of it. The sad part is that the three people that cared for him will probably never know that he I'd dead let alone what he went thru.

That is such a sad chapter and yeah he was harsh with the older gentlemen but after hearing his explanation I don't blame him.

Well that explained a few things didn't it. Amazing how self assured Kent is compared to Jon specially since Kent really dirty have a lot of time to get comfortable being Gay. I think it really does say a lot about how much Jon likes Kent that he was willing to dial down the sexuality side of their relationship to keep Kent comfortable. Granted that wasn't necessary as he found out when he walked back in to the bedroom. I really liked this chapter. Ready for more plz.

It's amazing the difference two years make. In this chapter Bay seems so confused. He dumps/gets dumped by Lena but still only has Zach on his mind. But he does finally admit to himself that he uses his running as an escape.. But don't think it worked this time.