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  1. Albert1434
    That was one very have ride differently a C ticket. Very enjoyable and believe me brutal but how could it be any other way!
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    Ups and Downs

    Albert1434 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Ups and Downs

    The Kids are doing well which I was very happy to see. But the bit with their father questing to see them was so bad I could not believe! A well-defined story very enjoyable and brutal.
  3. Albert1434
    That was a very interesting and great chapter. And Ding Dong the Monters are dead! Great and believe dialog is very enjoyable!
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    Chapter 1

    Albert1434 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Your welcome as to fantasy stick around
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    Chapter 1

    Albert1434 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 1

  6. Albert1434
    You said I would kill you for this chapter however I see no reason to kill you simple maiming will do.!
  7. Albert1434
    Oh my god this is so unspeakable I am think I should send in my Ninja
  8. Albert1434
    Poor Jill I feel so sorry for what she had to live through. And I must say I think the children seem to be getting better. Great chapter and with wonderful dialogue and description!
  9. Albert1434
    And you work in a hardware store
  10. Albert1434
    That is smart of ya!
  11. Albert1434
    This chapter is clearly a 50\50 yes in fact it is! 50% dark and 50% light. That evil woman just unbelievable and that nasty little kid I guess he is lucky that Jill didn't loosen some of his teeth! And the wonderful beginning friendship and I hope for more for Brendan I am sure is feeling better and It is clear to see that Skylar is a hung and one hell of a catch! Great Chapter!
  12. Albert1434
    All right a great chapter no monster or other madness. Just perfectly written and every enjoyable story line and Brendan and furthers the cause and makes new friend which you can never have enough of!
  13. Albert1434
    Thanks so much Gary
  14. Albert1434
    Well here we are again and is there no end to the monster's actions for which no punishment will ever be enough. And I don't care what Grey has said what he did, he was totally selfish in the separation, could have been done in beauty and not as ugly as it happen, I hope that comes back to haunt him! And Brendan is so lucky to be bless with such wonderful children who love him with all there hearts as seen here! Great chapter as always
  15. Albert1434
    Thanks Page that looks so good!
  16. Albert1434
    Thanks so much Drew
  17. Albert1434
    Thanks so much Spike
  18. Albert1434
    Thanks Clo
  19. Albert1434
    Thanks Frog Boy!
  20. Albert1434
    Good recovery!!
  21. Albert1434
    Aloha All
  22. Albert1434
    Bah
  23. Albert1434
    I was so hoping that Grey and Brendan could get married Kids could have two daddies. And it was great to mix Manny and co. into this story!
  24. Albert1434
    I saw that coming
  25. Albert1434
    I can honestly say that I think Brendan the best for his kids and just wonderful. Once again we that monster for what they are!
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