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  1. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    Well happy birthing day! The party was great and very enjoyable! I am concerned about this mining trip and the pirates' wonders do they talk like a pirate arrrrrr
  2. Aloha Dear Bucket
  3. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    😁
  4. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    My lips are sealed
  5. Phil Lesh, Grateful Dead co-founder and bassist, dies at 84: 'A legacy of music and love'😭
  6. We had Frost for the last 4 days!
  7. Albert1434

    Chapter 4

    I am simple enjoying the hell out this great chapter!
  8. Albert1434

    Chapter 3

    Sfi as I like it hot and believable. Speaking of hot I am sure that Marc is Well written and with great dialogue ! On to the next chapter
  9. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    😁 All good questions!
  10. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    I will fix that passage!
  11. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    That was a fun chapter to write!
  12. Albert1434

    Chapter 5

    Thanks for pointing that out
  13. Gin and Tonic The train compartment was cozy and well-appointed, with plush seats upholstered in rich fabric. The large windows offered a panoramic view of the passing scenery, allowing Reginald and Alexander to take in the beauty of the landscape as they traveled towards Cairo. The gentle rocking of the train and the rhythmic sound of the wheels on the tracks created a soothing ambiance. As they settled into their seats, Reginald turned to Alexander, a thoughtful expression on the
  14. Grab's the frog and throw him into the Tar Pit!
  15. Albert1434

    Chapter 2

    So Marc is on top of his class work seem he is one smart cookie. This chapter is very enjoyable and well written!
  16. I think it should have been named the la Brea tar pit.
  17. Albert1434

    Chapter 1

    Very enjoyable story, Well written and with good description!
  18. Albert1434

    Prologue

    I like the start to this story which hold good promise of being a good read!
  19. That is not Gary its Christian Bale!
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