Albert1434
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Aloha Nick
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Aloha Terry
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This story is so unbelievably power and so filled with superb dialogue and discription. I loved it and if you read it you will as well I am sure! It has wonderful and lows, I shed more then a few tears as I read this story. Ideas here in I would wish could come to pass for the betterment of the world! So give it a try and I am sure you will love it!
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Sleep well my dear friend
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I just love this chapter although much good come to pass in this story. I would have it happen in real life and those evil people who are only in for the money and have no care for those who are injured or killed. But slant things in the way there lords and masters want, let us not forget the almighty dollar. I do wish that one day it could be different! Thanks so much for this story and the chance to stand once more on my soap box!
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Aloha Bucket Its show and tell time
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Aloha Spike
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Aloha Page
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I can't tell you how glad I am that I found your wonderful stories' guess I was lucky that day. Drsawzall you're an amazing person, you bring so much power to a story and so clear is your thoughts there is no way it will not more the reader! There is so much ugliness in the world and you show it to us in stunning detail, I can see it clearly in my minds eye! Thanks so much for this powerful chapter
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So true Man so true!
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This chapter had me crying and recovering then back in the tissue box! So Miriam was right about the duck part but if he had and not thrown his tablet then more kids could have died! So powerfully written, so deeply disturbing, yes these are the dark sad truth of our modern time, money means more than the lives of kids. And everyone should have a gun so sad, this is one of my sore points for far too long! Making it to easy to kill. I will now get off my soap box. Once again you Master the writing skill and bring us powerful dialogue and painfully powerful discription!
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Aloha Clo
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So right you are Man!
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Aloha ManI am enjoying your story Man so good!
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Aloha All
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This can't be the easiest way to tell a story, keeping it interesting and not boring, but the truth is you're amazing and brilliant. And the storyline is clear and well thought out. With your powerful use of English, is very enjoyable I can't wait to read more of this story to that end I read on!
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1. As you have asked me, I read your other stories, and I well, however, I would like some direction as to what I should read next! 2. I have sent you a message and I am guessing you have not read it. I wish that you would! This is a truly a good beginning to this very good story. So, they cast out 4 young boys are they in fact scapegoats! Well, this is very well written at some point I hope to find out how this archaic ritual started. Are they trying to maintain the population at some level?
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Oh he is so good I have thank Frog for not wanting him kind of a fool!
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I am sure there will be more Terry
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Hell I lead him on
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He'll keep me and steve warm this winter!
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That's ok with me Nick Ill keep him!
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This whole the promise of a great story. Already I am loving it. As in the story I read this show the power of your use of English which I dearly love. And I can't wait to see what happens, I have always loved Sci-Fi so I will wait no longer on I read!
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His on loan from the Black Hand!
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