Albert1434
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Of course, Jubal is making the stairs that Lucas wants, how could he do otherwise? Jubal is a Perfectionist and wants everything to be just so as his love wants even if he doesn't know about his feelings! For Jubal it is more than important to have the cabin finished for Lucas's return. I am sure he wanted the perfect gift! The wild horses are eating the oats and using the water, which must be good! I think that Reid could be a good friend for Jubal, it seems he has good feelings for him. Another great and well written chapter well thought out with just perfection of description. I just love the point of view for this chapter!
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He works in Bath!
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How true that!
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Well Man I can wait for the next chapter!
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Man I have a friend who lives in England in Summerset not far from Stone henge I have played games with him for years!
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Aloha Man how are things in Jolly Jolly land
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Aloha Terry
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Aloha Spike
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Last night we watched!
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Aloha Nick
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Aloha Clo
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Aloha Bucket
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Just let me tell you if you read this great and wonderful Story, you're going to fall in love with it just as I have! You have a amazing command of English which enriches every line. With powerful description and dialogue that brings life to the characters and fills this story, making it very believable ! Thanks so much for sharing this story
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Ok non-believers Nick isn't crazy!
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Well, I have sadly come to the end of this great and very enjoyable story. It is also sad that more people have not read this amazing story. So many great and good things have happened, and sad ones also add so much color to this story! I enjoyed your colorful use of the English just lovely!
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Aloha All
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Read my review of chapter 32
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However that is the water for next year so your wrong Terry!
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Well its Cold and Dry sigh
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Aloha Dear Terry
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Wow, wow, and wow Just unbelievable that horse could have been the finish of that ass. Pietro wow swing away my lad swing away! I would pay to read that report that the chief would have to write!
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I just loved the Battle of the Titans, Horse's Ver's the machine and what a ending so good. And the description passing through the food what just perfect! And now are we going to have a fight? And damn a Cliffy lol
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Boy I just love the hell out of this perfectly wonderful chapter. Well written and with simple great dialogue what was not to love! I have been enjoying this well thought out ride!
