Albert1434
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I loved that Terry I do try!
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Only when it come to you my love😁
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Spike a gun to the head hmmm I like the sound of that!
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Why thanks my dear friend Raven I love what you have to say as well!
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Your totally right Man makes me wish I has in Hawaii
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Hell of a great chapter thanks so much
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Because he was in love with that branch
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You wanted me to say "Ok non-believers Nick isn't crazy!" and I did what more do you want
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Of course, Jubal is making the stairs that Lucas wants, how could he do otherwise? Jubal is a Perfectionist and wants everything to be just so as his love wants even if he doesn't know about his feelings! For Jubal it is more than important to have the cabin finished for Lucas's return. I am sure he wanted the perfect gift! The wild horses are eating the oats and using the water, which must be good! I think that Reid could be a good friend for Jubal, it seems he has good feelings for him. Another great and well written chapter well thought out with just perfection of description. I just love the point of view for this chapter!
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He works in Bath!
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How true that!
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Well Man I can wait for the next chapter!
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Man I have a friend who lives in England in Summerset not far from Stone henge I have played games with him for years!
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Aloha Man how are things in Jolly Jolly land
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Aloha Terry
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Aloha Spike
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Last night we watched!
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Aloha Nick
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Aloha Clo
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Aloha Bucket
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Just let me tell you if you read this great and wonderful Story, you're going to fall in love with it just as I have! You have a amazing command of English which enriches every line. With powerful description and dialogue that brings life to the characters and fills this story, making it very believable ! Thanks so much for sharing this story
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Ok non-believers Nick isn't crazy!
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Well, I have sadly come to the end of this great and very enjoyable story. It is also sad that more people have not read this amazing story. So many great and good things have happened, and sad ones also add so much color to this story! I enjoyed your colorful use of the English just lovely!
