What more perfect Christmas there has never been! I sure this is an echo of your Christmas celebration with your family. I am just in love with this chapter! There are many very wonderful chapters in the story so far but this one could be the best so far!
This story just drives me mad for the perfection of it, so much perfect texture, and lovely description that I am very much enjoying! Your use of English in powerful ways just makes this a genuinely great story, makes for a amazing chapter. The building of the cabin was a delight. Thanks for sharing your hard work!
Wow Ethan is one hell of a lucky guy to survive so much and to make it back to his true love and man you rock I just hope that you will continue writing!
Well, what should I say here oh yes you made me cry again but they were happy tears! Ethan isn't dead thank God! I love the spot story
Yes a perfect chapter I loved every bit of it! So much has happened so damn good! I just love how you write amazing use of English just perfect!
Well, you made me cry in many places in this immensely powerful chapter. So Tragic is it I can feel their pain, so clear is it to me Aric and Ethan love for each other that this ending is so painful! And now Eddie and Aric to be together for Ethan's sake and because this is what Ethan would have wanted and it sounds like this will be done with love and caring so neither will be harmed. Thanks so much for sharing this painful and loving chapter!
Well, here I am and what a fine view we have! I love your use of English and your description as well as dialogue. I can't wait to see where all this may lead! With fingers crossed I have many hopes, I do hope that I have guessed correctly but as fate would have it, only a matter of time.!
Pull yourself up and enjoy a huge glass of Mango Habanero rotgut now if you start to see color have no fear it will soon passes, just have a nice piece of pizza the town is famous for!
This great and wonderful written bit of madness if very enjoyable I am sure you will love it!