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This is getting more and more sad. Could this be the breaking point? Daniel getting help and not dying in the beach and perhaps accepting Josh back into his life.
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At the beginning I thought Daniel might break Josh´s heart, but this wasn´t the way I thought it´d happen. I feel sorry for them both. Daniel is so lost now and finds it hard to let anyone close to him and Josh has no idea how to help him. This is really hard and heartbreaking for them, and I hope they´ll find a way to deal with it all....but first Josh needs to find Daniel.
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Very powerful chapter. Josh did well getting Daniel´s parents and their friends involved, hopefully they´ll find Daniel soon. I can´t imagine Josh wanting anything to do with his parents ever again or at least in a very, very long time.
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Poor Daniel! Kidnapped to a place like that. How do those people think they´ll get away with it? They are probably so convinced that they´ll be able to "cure" Daniel and he´ll be happy and won´t go to the police. Absolutely horrible thing to happen to anyone.
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I´ve read enough of your stories to know that not all your characters survive but I do Daniel does. Josh´s parents are ghastly people for doing this. I hate it when religious people think it is all right to hurt someone who isn´t like them. And now I have to go to work and wait till this evening to find out what´ll happen next....
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Daniel not wanting to talk about their relationship translates to me that Josh is going to have his heart broken at some point. Visiting Josh´s family and thinking they are sweeties also translates to trouble....on to the next chapter to see just how much trouble there´ll be.
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They are so different in many ways. Daniel has a loving and supportive family, Josh´s family probably know someone who can make gays straight again. Daniel has so much experience and Josh is so innocent. And yet they seem to be good together. It´ll be interesting to see how their relationship continues.
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I think you mean Desperate Housewives. Tried to watch those episodes JB was in, but it wasn´t for me
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I´ve twice traveled to England just to see John Barrowman in a concert He is wonderful!
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Such a sweet chapter Trey´s parents are great and they seem genuinely like Mark, that´s nice.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=9F_j3yHhYEo
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In the first chapter Noah´s eyes are light brown and now they are green
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I thought the first half of the story was heartbreaking, but it was nothing compered to the ending
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Frank has had such a terrible year but still manages to be a sweet man. Looking forward reading more
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I really thought Amber was firmly in the past but obviously not. If she thinks they all so sick then why did she bother to find out where there were? She´ll probably keep on turning up where she isn´t wanted but I hope she´s harmless. Very loud and annoying, but harmless. Good for Colby for finding someone else he is interested in and Jake seems like a nice man. Looking forward getting to know him better. Great chapter
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So many different emotions in a short story. Loved the story and hated what happened to Ephraim. Hopefully he and Luke can find happiness together.
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It really was lovely to find Kei feeling better, more talkative, more self-assured and happier. They both seemed so happy and the party was nice I hope Kei keeps recovering the way he was in the spa and perhaps his speech gets better too. Such a sweet chapter
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You did keep me in suspension about what had happen to Angel and I was just about ready to start crying when you finally revealed what was going on Absolutely brilliant story I really enjoyed it. I was surprised there were so few reviews and likes, your story really deserves more readers. And I do hope you didn´t get fed with my comments I´d have given more likes but run out of them, I hate when that happens in the middle of a good story. Now I need to check what else you have written that I´ve missed.
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Had to go and read the final chapter before I could stop and comment here. Bishops plan to kill Angel was very devious and to do it in front of all those people to have independent witnesses. Your writing really is very good. If I had a habit of biting my nails I wouldn´t have any left.
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It´s great that Bishop is as stupid as he is evil. Who´d leave discriminating papers in his office and that other stuff? Surely now they have enough evidence to send him and Henry away for a long, long time. Hopefully Marcus and Charlie get to Angel in time to rescue him. Anyway it would be very mean to kill off the main character right at the end.
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I agree, you are very good at this, I´m biting my fingers and thinking how stupid can Marcus be. He left Angel alone again and he knows there are in the very house people who want to hurt him. And why didn´t they go after them? Ok, I know the search is important but still....
