Miles Long
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Yikes talk about causing someone to lose their appetite. Stunning descriptions and detail, thanks.
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Making this a personal vendetta is where Sanchez went wrong; she should have learned from his mistakes. Excellent chapter, thanks.
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Julie always seemed kinda shady to me and I never bought the whole college thing. It does suck for Trev though. On to the next chapter, thanks.
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Trev and Shane are going the long way. Damn the days of easy sailing are over. Good job, thanks.
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"I’m guessing that none of the agents who have seen this intel speak that rare and mysterious language known as Spanish?" Funniest line to date, great work. Thanks.
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It just such a good story it make me wanna dance, thanks.
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Anything that foils Bridget is a reason to smile, marvelous job, thanks.
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This bodes ill for Rachel and crew. Great work, thanks.
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I hate when a evil plan comes together . Nice job setting this all up, thanks.
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Trevor has sure made a spectacle of himself, great fun. Thanks for all the hard work and sticking with it when response was low.
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After what happened with Bassy getting on the boat and tracking I would think Trevor would be extra cautious. Good suspense, thanks.
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A little close for comfort having Graeme, be the one to sabotage the original driver. Things are getting interesting again, thanks.
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Lisa and Joel's good intentions are going to get Trevor killed. Thanks a bunch for your work.
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Paved with Good Intentions
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in Paved with Good Intentions
I love Shane's boastful antics. I look forward to Bridget's demise. Thanks. -
Tickling the Dragon’s Tail
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in Tickling the Dragon’s Tail
Love Joel's sense of humor. Another excellent chapter, thanks. -
Beautiful reunion between a boy and his boat. Atlantis sounds like a dream boat now, but with so many chapters still left I have a feeling she will soon be tested. Fun chapter, thanks.
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For every bit of bad luck Trevor manages to stumble into just as much good fortune. Love the story, thanks.
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Trevor's pretty clever, he's definitely going to be a big burr in Bridget's side.
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The Last Secrets of the Ares
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in The Last Secrets of the Ares
All this fuss leads Trevor to exactly what Bridget didn't want found. Gotta love the irony. Great chapter, thanks. -
Bridget's plan seems to working. She's like an evil puppet master. Top notch work, thanks.
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Loyalty to Bridget cost Billy his head, but at least he got lunch out of it I guess . The stakes keep getting higher, thanks for the good work.
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Shane really is too much and such a good match for Trevor. Bridget's pretty crafty, too bad for Sanchez. Thanks again, and again, and again .
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Incredible twist, but I wonder if Bridget will fall victim to the same Trevor obsession which from what it seems is about to cost Sanchez dearly. Thanks for everything.
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With so money chapters and miles to go it only makes sense that Bridget gets away. Great story, thanks.
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It's so satisfying when the bad guy gets foiled, and although I appreciate Bridget's predicament, I was hopping for more than a few busted ribs and a bad haircut. Simply wonderful work, thanks.
