Miles Long
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Absolutely spectacular piece of fiction. My stomach literally dropped for a second time when Trevor realized what happened. Man when one of your characters luck runs out he really runs out. Fabulous work, thank you.
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Argh! But what about Trevor? Genius keeping on the edge. Sweet chapter, thanks.
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This chapter was really hard because it was so expertly written and simply the worst thing I could have imagined. Brilliant work and diabolical to leave us hanging. Thanks.
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No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in No Good Deed Goes Unpunished
Trevor did the right thing. This gives Dirk and Jim a fighting chance. Excellent work, thanks. -
Trevor deserved a bit of tranquility before the big sail. That State Attorney is on crack if he thinks he's going to force a determined teen to do anything, let alone one with the means to sail away. I really hope Gonzales is finally becoming savvy to Alfred's shenanigans. That guys just scummy. Broken record here, thanks for another great chapter.
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Are Dirks secrets really worth going to jail for murder and possibly losing his son?
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All of Bridget's manipulation seem to be finally yielding fruit, poor Dirk, poor Jim, poor Trevor. Really thrilling work, thanks
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Dirk just can't get a break, and Trevor well his future is about to get very interesting, with an angry mob boss after him. Can this get any more nerve wracking? I guess with over 100 chapters left, it can . Thanks for such a good story!
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Trevor's luck has been unbelievably good (okay maybe not unbelievably good but really freakin' good). Crossing my fingers it remains. Thanks.
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Greed and corruption play a bigger part in Trevor's life than he even realizes. Edgy as he'll over that sweaty dynamite, thanks for such an addictive story.
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There is a special kinda hell for people like Bridget and George. Loving every minute, thanks.
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Relatively painless entry into the Suez, but I'm not sure how long it will last with with people plotting Trevor's demise. Splendid work, thanks for all the hard work.
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I had to wipe a few tears as well. Poignant goodbye, nice touch having Joel make Trevor sleep with him. Good work, thanks.
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I know all things have to come to an end but with everything going on I wish Trevor would turn back. Fun interchange between the guys. Dirk's a mess and Bridget is just an icky person with a soul full of poison. Nice work, thanks.
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I guess Dirk doesn't realize that he is asking his son to circumnavigate the globe alone. I wonder if he will still be in favor of it when he runs into Joel at the Piggly Wiggly. Really great couple of chapters, thanks for all the thorough work and beautiful detail.
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Trevor's a gifted sailor but being alone on the more unpredictable part of the trip is scary. Good for Joel and his bargaining skills!
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Joel is a rare bird too bad he's straight and in love with Lisa. Nice lawyerly technicality Jim laid out Dirk's not gay. Gonzales should have asked if Dirk was bi or slept with other men. The intensity just keeps increasing, thanks.
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Any woman who could be so cold about her own child's death isn't going to give crap one about anyone else's. Thanks for your work.
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Some people are just clueless, this applies to more than just rude customers. Lucky break Trevor noticing that Meltami in time before it wreaked complete chaos. Joel's up to something. . The stakes just keep getting higher, excellent work, thanks.
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Blake is the least of Trevor's concerns now that Bridget wants him dead. I hope Trevor's luck hold out. Great stuff, thanks.
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Oh Lisa your folly is going to end up costing you dearly. People like Bridget are not nice out of the goodness of their own hearts. They always want something and if you weren't so focused on what you want you would see that Bridget has the most to gain from pinning her husbands death on Dirk. Silly girl. Really nice work setting this all up, anxiously eager for what happens next, thanks.
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Ah this is where Trevor's pie eyed plans get doused with reality. The sailing community is a very tight one that readily helps fellow adventurers, this chapter was a lovely example of that, good job, thanks.
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Now I have a new place I want to see. Nice work, thanks.
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Joel is violating Trevor privacy pretty severely by reading his journal; whatever he read wasn't his business and getting mad is out of line. I love the details, it just adds such a rich layer on this already complex tale. Thanks.
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Gonzales seems to be a good cop, not sure about the other one he seems a bit too willing to pin this on Dirk as well, it's subtle but equally as manipulative. Nice work, thanks.
