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And the Sea shall give up its Dead
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in And the Sea shall give up its Dead
Great chapter, Gonzales finally gets his man only to find out, well, that the case he was working on wasn't a case at all. Thanks for a job well done. -
Martin is being awfully generous. Ten days to get a passport? I need to move. I love the suspense, thanks.
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I'm not a big Lisa fan, but it's gotta suck to know that you've been lied to and possibly been manipulated by someone you thought truly cared about you. Hopefully she'll be more careful with her heart in the future. Trev and Shane's honeymoon is about to end, methinks. Love the story, thanks.
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I'm guessing things are going to start getting pretty dodgy, good job putting this all together, thanks.
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Ned's a conniving little fart, too bad he's being played like so many others. Nice work, thanks.
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So close to figuring it all but so far away. At least they are being cautious and keeping Trevor hidden. Exciting chapter, thanks.
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So they are hidden away, but there's a killer with a plane so...the suspense is pretty impressive, thanks for the thrill ride even if Trev did run her aground .
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Nice balance between tension and detail. With well over 50 chapters to I don't expect to reflex any time soon . Great work, thanks.
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I'm enjoying the quicker pace, and having that creepy killer wandering around town is no doubt going to yield all sorts of drama in the future if he's heading to Ned's. As always thanks for the gripping tale.
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Nerve wracking this story is, but I knew the respite in Rhys Lagoon couldn't last forever. Awesome job, thanks.
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Lisa has possibly the worst instincts ever, Joel is close second but for some reason he is less off putting. That admitted I hope they savvy up to Bridget soon because trouble is coming their way if they don't and no doubt Trevor will do something foolish to try and save them. Thank you for the fine effort and creativity C James.
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I think seeing the doctor first was good planning as Trevor might have been a bit more reactionary to Atlantis' gutted state. Shane and Trevor are really turning into quite the lively couple. Great work, looking forward to more...thanks.
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Fowler doesn't fuck around at all does he? Kline is probably wondering what the hell he stepped into and how can he capitalize on the story. The people really have embraced Trevor, which is an interesting contrast to how they shut Shane out. Fine work, thanks.
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Sounds like Bridget and Georges dirty dealings are starting to catch up with them. No doubt things are going to get interesting for everyone! Nice job, thanks.
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Thing are coming to a head down under; it's good Trevor has Shane to help him weather the events that are unfolding. Good work, thanks.
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Declarations of love already? Desperate circumstances combined with destiny I suppose. Nice chapter, thanks.
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That goddamned garlic crusher has become the bane of Trevor's existence. It's about time Joel and Lisa started to wise up a little where Bridget is concerned. Well done, thanks.
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FINALLY HOORAY! Sweet chapter, they are just too good together to not be together. Fine work, thanks for sharing it with us.
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It's so obvious that Shane is in to Trevor, why are they dancing around? I write this a lot and expect to write it a lot more, so get used to it...Great work, thanks.
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Shane's been through quite a bit, making him a good match for Trevor. Now that Trev has come out when is Shane going to stop hiding behind his exihibitionism and open up to Trev about his own orientation? Thanks a bunch for this engrossing universe.
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Is that vague thought nagging Joel common sense? I hope so because it would be great if he and Lisa would find theirs. Shane's awesome, just like this chapter. Thanks.
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Trevor's been living on the razor's edge for awhile, that kind of trauma leaves a mark on one's psyche. Looks like Shane might have some insight to aid Trevor through his demons. If that's how he sounded his dad out no wonder Dirk took it the wrong way. Spectacular work, thanks.
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Trevor wasn't the quickest on the uptake when it came to flirting, but with everything he has been through he's completely oblivious to Shane's teasing. My heart goes out to him. Thanks as always.
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Ethan seems like his is going to be a humbling experience for Wade. This is definitely an area where Matt can step up and provide Wade with a ton of sound counsel. It will definitely be good practice for Riley. The run down of Robbie's will went well, but I was disappointed that Brad brought Robbie's whole cash deficit up, unless he really wanted the Hayes to feel indebted to him why wouldn't he have just given them their trusts/cash and kept his contribution on the down low. Stellar work giving me a fix and leaving me immediately craving more .
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Brilliant ruse with the Roos. Trevor should just come out, not sounding Shane out, just tell him directly. Trevor's beating around the bush has already led to one major misunderstanding with a man he loves. The story continuously rocks, thanks.
