Miles Long
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Lovely interaction between the two couples. Thanks for yet another awesome chapter.
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Matt has got to be the most generous spirit ever to not just walk away, and that is what makes Andy's internal struggle so poignant...he creates problems to protect himself at the expense of the one person he loves the most. Nice work and even though I'm again on edge of weepy over these two I am grateful for the work.
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Thanks for a great update. Glad to see an update on Spin's attack and relieved to find that Jesse's bio dad is not trying to rip him from his life. Nice work, thanks.
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Sweet chapter. I really appreciate the way you've respectfully captured the complications involved with the polyamorous situation Matt and Andy have. I love how Andy told his little voice off for once. Truly good work, thanks.
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Kick ass chapter in a kick ass story. Matt and Andy are so beautiful together it was heart, soul and gut wrenching when Andy's fear was driving them apart. Thanks for your wonderful work.
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Now starts the larger aftermath of 9.11. Excellent chapter and having Brad's perspective is really key given what a company like Triton contributes. I look forward to more of Brad (I also hope for some more Wade love too ). As for Will and Tony...I have decided to take the same approach as my friend who was dating someone I struggled with...if Tony makes Will happy then who the hell am I to rain on that parade...I'll pour myself a Hendricks and Q tonic and think on to other things . Thanks for the chapter, as always looking forward to more.
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Beautiful and emotional chapter. Matt is such a generous and loving soul...I'm proud of Andy for taking the risk and pushing his negative inner monologue back. Fantastic work, thanks.
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Thanks for the update on pre change Taryn and Alec.
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Wonderful chapter and brilliant ending running into Clavert's ship. I'm so giddy for Granger's homecoming it is outweighing the wee bit of anxiety I have for his reunion with Francis. Fantastic work, thanks.
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Vacation chapters on vacation are the best, no any Mark Arbour is the best. Thanks for my fix, it brought a grin to read about Lark laying into Brad about Will and Will getting some very silly advice from the straight contingent. Go Stef for hooking Will up...I have taken the liberty of having the lock picked...brilliant.
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Ah what a treat after a long day of travel. Another beautiful chapter despite Tony . I get it he's going through a lot and good for him for putting on his grown up pants and getting help, but like his father before him Tony doesn't resonate that much with me. However, I am willing to be surprised by a magnificent Tony transformation. Brad's poignant struggle has given him back some of the soul I thought he'd lost in other stories. Fine work, thanks...must sleep now crazy jet lagged.
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Angie is almost too good to be true, but Andy needs that because while he is deeply in love with another man he is obviously not interested in building his family with one. That Angie exists for him and understands his situation with Matt is a blessing because a lot of people don't like to share their lovers. Again great work, thanks.
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Yay Andy! I am so impressed by this story. The characters and plot ring with so much truthfulness that a few times I've literally wanted to shake Andy, especially when he tormented that young man Chris. Although that, like the attempt at drug dealing, was such an obvious signal to him that all is not right in Drewland and served as parts of the wake up call he is only now accepting (I hope I hope). I realize it's so easy to be objective when not subjected to the deceptive/confusing inner monologue that Andy tortures himself with, but the world created is so compelling and it's characters so sympathetic that it's easy to invest in them. Thank you Adam Phillips for your fine work.
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Awesome work. Emotionally draining, but awesome. Thanks.
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You have created a beautiful tragic hero. It's my first read so I don't know how this ends but Andy's fall from grace has been so spectacular that, should it happen, his return will be awe inspiring and if it doesn't then the beauty of tragedy will reign supreme. Thank you.
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You can't get things back if you never actually make an effort Andy. How is it he went from self actualized grade schooler to a self centered brat who continues to break the heart of the one person who actually made him redeemable. As if loosing his brother and father weren't enough...hmmm...infuriating. Thanks for your work.
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Oh my god Andy's pride is freaking killing me. I'm starting to wonder if he even deserves Matt after all of this. He is the one who ruined their relationship and he has too much pride to actually work to get it back. Really? Great at writing to inspire such ire, thanks.
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Lovely chapter, despite Andy using everything as an excuse to keep avoiding Matt. Thank you.
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The gay porn challenge was great until the open offer to service the team...jeez Andy talk about setting yourself up for spiral. Engrossing work, thanks.
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Andy, Andy, Andy...losing your cherry on a bet? Disappointing to say the least. Heart wrenching chapter. Thank again.
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Andy...CALL HIM YOU DOLT! What happened to not being afraid anymore? Where's my shoe? Thanks again for another wonderful chapter.
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Go Kyle! Not everyone needs to sow their oats, and it's refreshing to meet a character that doesn't. He could be good for Andy, who also gets a "Go Andy!" for being a stand up guy and sticking up for a teammate. Nice chapter, thanks.
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I'm proud of Andy for learning from his mistake with Matt and I'm even prouder that he stood up for himself and Damien. It's nice that I don't want to clock him with a shoe anymore . Good job, thanks.
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Sometimes we are our own worst enemies; unfortunately Adam found that out too too late to make the most of the precious time he had. Weepy now...begrudging thanks!
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Jesus Andy you are thick and you're blowin' it big time. Annoyed with your creation but still grateful for the story.
