Miles Long
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Awesome action and genius although expected cliffhanger. Lucky I don't have to wait to find out what happens. Thanks.
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Bridget is up to something sinister (understatement of the century, yes ). Here's to her luck running out. Another fantastic chapter, thanks.
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All this misdirection and plotting I'm not even sure if I should be worried or looking forward to Bridget's fall. Great work, thanks.
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Assumptions are Dangerous Things
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in Assumptions are Dangerous Things
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Joel's instincts seem to be improving, too bad it only seems to be on things that don't matter like wind ups, that said I will miss him when he goes. Mike and Frank make for fun allies. Nice update, thanks.
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Heart breaking on many fronts and all of it with some whack-a-doo psycho plotting against them. Nice job, thanks for posting I was beginning to worry about the young men .
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Bridget's going to Australia, this has the possibility of not boding well for Rachel as well as Trevor. Thanks as usual.
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Again I thank you for this completely enthralling adventure you've created.
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This was a nice bit of relief from all the tension, nice work, thanks.
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This obsession with killing Trevor seems like it could back fire, especially now that Trev knows someone's still after him. Good work, thanks.
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Things I should not be reading if I want to sleep, Chapter 112. Thrilling action and brilliant escape. Well done, thanks.
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Good god nails on a chalkboard would be more relaxing than this chapter . Thanks as usual!
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Shit meet Bridget's fan. Great update, thanks.
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Grim fate Basingstoke has planned. Glad to see Mike working with Frank, those two combined with Trevor's unbelievable luck will bring Bridget down. BTW excellent choice branching out of the norm and making the villain a woman. It adds a whole level of uniqueness to the story. Thanks.
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Great pace and excellent balance between the main story lines, thanks.
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Another compelling chapter keeping me on the edge of my seat. Thanks.
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Thanks for the most chilling chapter yet, even though I find myself hating Bridget for what she did to poor Henry. I greatly look forward to her demise.
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Methinks Lisa has finally savvied up about Bridget. Nice set of parental interchanges, I'm glad Rachel was at least honest with Trev about her fear. It doesn't absolve her but it's at least something that he can relate to. Fabulous story, thanks.
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With all that's happened I see Trevor's luck turning for the better, which bodes ill for our flying assassin. Another great chapter, thanks.
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Cold blooded, but seriously how could George expect any better treatment than that of her husband? Foolish and grave mistake on his part. Continued appreciation for the wonderful work.
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Wow! Fantastic chapter. I do hope for George's sake Caroline will not be too rash, she's got to know that regardless of how hurt he will be over losing Calvert, George would never want to hurt either Calvert or Gatling. Well worth the wait, thank you.
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Looks like Bridget did a switch, are things souring in her little paradise? Superb storytelling, thanks.
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Why do I have a sudden ache I the pit of my stomach over Henry? Still struggling with Rachel, but if Trevor forgives her who am I to argue .
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Joel's dad is hilarious. I have to say that I am proud of Joel for not even trying to lie. Thanks again for for the strong work.
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I think what the Carlson's have done to Trevor is pretty reprehensible. Sure Dirk laments about it, but not enough to make it right, but Rachel, she takes the cake, her son barely makes it to Australia alive and she waits until her ass is in the clear to see him and reveal the truth. Yikes. Excellent work, thanks.
