Miles Long
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Didn't like Cho in the original HPverse like her less now and Ron, how could you? Gripping story, thanks.
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Ron is quick to mutiny and Harry's quick to write his best friend off...ah youth. Nice job, thanks.
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What is Harry getting himself into? It makes me wonder about Draco's sincerity. Super interesting take/twist, thanks.
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Fabulous drama and pace, really enjoying the work, thanks.
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Harry's life is really taking a series of rapid turns. Sad to see Cho is just as annoying in this version as the original...oh well not everyone can be redeemable in the alterverse . Fine job, thanks for putting this out there.
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Oh Merlin, you've created a Byzantine world of politicking for Harry to power through with Draco as his navigator, thanks.
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Clever repartee between Harry and Lucius, reflective of the ingenious world you've created, thanks.
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Subtle gift choice for Draco's mom . Excellent work, thanks.
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This is my second read and I am enjoying it as much if not more than the first go. It's a deft balance between the original universe and the creative alterverse that really works and is completely believable. Thanks.
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I think this was the most scintillating first kiss I've read in a very long time, beautifully done, thanks.
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Why is it Harry's fault? If anything Draco has the better eye for detail . Love the story so far, thanks.
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Go Harry, he could run for office with a speech like that . Nice work, thanks.
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Lovely twist and so in character, Harry standing up for what's right versus his own personal agenda. Draco is even somewhat more redeeming, which is a fun twist. Thanks a bunch for sharing.
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Being more a tertiary fan of the franchise I was tempted by this story but kind of skeptical; however, other my enjoyment of other dkstories led me to believe there might be a there there. Happily my belief was proven fact. Great start, thanks.
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I had to thank you C James one last time for such a thrilling adventure ride. This was my second read, I enjoyed it so much the first time I couldn't stop to comment (it was too damn compelling) but I promised myself that I would go back, because a story this well thought out and researched deserves reviews aplenty and all the likes GA will allow me . Thanks again to you and your team.
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Well done, although if I don't envy Trevor and the rate hike he faces from his insurance for having to restore the same ship twice in less than on year . Seriously, another inspired chapter, thank you.
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If only there was a shark to rip Bridget in half. Truly an awesome adventure, thank you.
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Not cool at all leaving us hanging. I'd say you were brilliant if I wasn't so irked...a begrudging thanks all your hard work.
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The suspense is brilliant, great work, thanks.
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The Grand and Deadly Design
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in The Grand and Deadly Design
What is it with Bridget wanting to listen in on Joel and Lisa's sex life, jeez let them get it on in peace ? Looking forward to what happens next, thanks. -
'Till Death do them Part
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in 'Till Death do them Part
Diabolical is what Bridget is, my guess is that Joel and Lisa's wedded bliss lasts as long as the honeymoon, which, come on, has to be a set up. Fantastic work, thanks. -
Bridget is if nothing else quite the strategic thinker. Too bad she's so evil. Excellent work, Thanks.
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Talk about ending on the chapter on a hopeful note . Great story, I really appreciate the attention to detail and background included.
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False Hopes and The End of the World
Miles Long commented on C James's story chapter in False Hopes and The End of the World
Trevor is crazy clever and ingenious on the fly. How ironic it's a 17 year old (or did he turn 18 yet) that is foiling a Colombian drug lord/lady? Top gun writing, thanks. -
Interesting quagmire the young men have stumbled into, the potato attacks are hilarious. Thanks.
