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    Deep Talk

    Jaro_423 commented on underthehoodster's story chapter in Deep Talk

    Seems a very convincing picture of two thirteen year olds and a wonderful capturing of first love. I look forward to more.
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    A great chapter. Sweet first encounter. Love your descritions but do find some very annoying basic errors of spelling and grammar.
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    Lovely description of first love.
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    The Mall

    Jaro_423 commented on underthehoodster's story chapter in The Mall

    Really enjoying the story. The characters are very real.
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    Yes. I knew you would get them through this. Thanks for a great turn about. Just disappointed we did not see some intimacy though.
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    Hysterics

    Jaro_423 commented on underthehoodster's story chapter in Hysterics

    Its a captivating story that is well told. He sure is an over sexed teen. I cant imagine getting so aroused in so short a time that you shoot without a stroke. Lol. But the rest is totally convincing.
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    The New Kid

    Jaro_423 commented on underthehoodster's story chapter in The New Kid

    I like your opening. You write well.
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    Had a bad feeling that Ian was going to cause a problem. Damn! But i have faith that somehow in someway they going to get thru this and that Chet and Arron will be fine. Have faith in you, Gary, to make it all right and that youll have great fun doing that. Lol.
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    Chapter 22

    Jaro_423 commented on Uplifted Spirit's story chapter in Chapter 22

    Great quotes. Matt really sticks his neck out here. He's returning to the old Matt who was willing to take shit in order to protect bis friend/s. But looks like even he might have taken it too far. Hope he doesnt get some retribution from this. Ive no doubt Andy will see the light soon.
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    CJ is really being rocketed into the limelight and it seems a possible future in politics. Afraid i am so sceptical on that issue and very cynical. Its a power corruption game that burns most and spits them out being half the men they were when they joined the game. I sure hope CJ is spared that. Ever heard of an honest politician? To lighter matters. A great first night for the lads. What great fun! But they escaped the dads' scrutiny somehow. That was a bit disappointing. You really are a fan of history aren't you! An interesting tour of Washington though its not a great story filler and for a non - American it does end up dragging a little, no offence meant, but just saying.
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    No Surrender

    Jaro_423 commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in No Surrender

    As Helen commented: such an eclectic bunch of folk at the dìnner. Am reminded of a line from a poem describing the folk at a pub - "a lovely load of human litter". I love it and it seems Rodo is the same. How delightful! CJ is receiving a wonderfully broad education regardless of the school he attends.
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    OK. Caught up here too now and waiting somewhat impatiently for another chapter on each. Yes! Chet and Arron are really going places fast unless that dick Ian spoils it all. Just hope that Arron trusts his gut instincts here to stay the course with Chet and to see tbrough any crap Ian might sling. Can wait for a hot scene between these two great guys. Bring it on!
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    So frusfrati g tryi g to get this to post so just lost my review. Sorry. gret story love the ele e ts of hilarity, confusion and eroticis.
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    A really hilarious opening. I hope its setting the scene for lots of fun for them both. Looking forward to their dinner date and how they plan to dish their friends, though i think Kendall and Michael might end up with the last laugh seeing the way things are going for Chet and Arron. I wonder how you pronounce that name? Like arrow? But with the n of course? It does sound great. Is it like an alternative spelling for Aaron? Love how Chet enjoys saying it.
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    I must say i was with Kendall all the way - totally sceptical about the change in his dad. Unbeleivable! And was it a surprise! But i had said that this held the potential for lots of surprises and the change in dad was the big one. When one is facing death its time to reassess. Its one greAt thi g about a terminal illness - u get another chance to make good some things and Carson Dooley does. Good on him. Somewhere buried deep is that hidden essence of a good man that Kendall evidences in his life. Fantastic. You did it yet again and wrote another award winni g chapter. Thank you. I hope you not giving up on this story now as u seem to have slowed a lot in posting. Whens the next chapter coming?
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    There's such a wonderful sense of "together we can get through this". Whatever curved balls life throws their way, together they can face it and come out stronger . So beautiful and inspiring. Kendall's mom is a treasure. Love that touch of the Scottish brogue too. Can't wait to see how it goes with his dad. Lots of possibilities here for surprises. Another great chapter from this amazing author.
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    They just keep rolling along: one good chapter after another. I love these guys so much, Dude! Man, ýou do such a great job!. Delightful finding two other gays in the force in one visit. Wow! I can see Michael's reluctance to match make but just make some introductions is all and let nature, as it were, take its own course. Sounds like they could be a good match though it would all depend on personality. How easy it was to register his partner. Lovely! How easy it was to let his apartment go and find someone to take it on with the furniture. Shit! Wish life could really be so easy. I guess thats why we like this so much. Well, why i like it anyway. Takes me out of my own life and circumstances and lets me dream a while. Thank you.
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    That has to be one of the funniest chapters I've read in a long time. The humour was brilliant and the jaunty banter par excellence. Just the right balance to it. And it was so beautifully laced with tenderness and depth of feeling so it never just became comedy. I love how you are handling this relationship. These are two macho guys but you are showing them to be such tender warriors. So balanced! So beautiful! So clever! So deeply satisfying! You are one helluva talented author. So glad you wrote this story.
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    I'mI feeling at a loss for words on this one. Good as ever! Great family. Love the parents. Love the guys. Love the story. Keep it coming.
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    Ah! So heart-warming! It could be so mushy but somehow you get the balance right and convey this love in such a genuine and convincing way. I love it. Very very well done! I think I'm going to just read this all over again when I've caught up because it's so inspiring and beautiful. Thanks for writing this lovely story. Looking forward to more.
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    So good. So beautifully satisfying emotionally and sexually. Great job again. And now that tension has eased the wonderful teasing and humour just adds another layer of delight and pleasure.
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    Chapter 9 All In

    Jaro_423 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 All In

    Damn! That was good. Wish I could say a whole lot more but ive already lost the review once and if I have to do it a third time I might just end up trashing the tab. Lol. Brilliant in every scene. Great job. Thank u. Lovi g it. Still more? Wow!
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    Now u just riding the wave. Amazing! Finding it hard to believe this is ur first effort. Bloody fucking fantastic! These hard hitting roller coaster chapters just keep coming. The match, the jerk Lanny and his damn girl, Kendall's punching him (that was great and I loved Kendall's quip that Candy was laughing at him), Kendall sacrificing his game and team for his friend (Wow!), and his staying with him all the way and providing the hospital bed and accommodation and care: it's all so good. So glad K phoned M's mom and got her take on them. He needed that. This is all so good and the best yet to come. Yeah! Great job!
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    Maybe you were just warming up and now you are really into the game in these last two chapters. Another winner here! Fantastic chapter. Right on the nail! Can't wait for their discussion. Just hoping that Kendall can put aside his preconception of Michael as straiģht long enough to see that Michael is as smitten with him as he is with Michael. I think he might be there if hes already sent Chef off. Just hope Michael doesn't fall foul of this Lanny guy who is out to do him a nasty. Though that would put Kendall in overdrive to defend and protect Michael and might be the very thing to bare their feelings to each other.
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    I really loved this chapter. Michael's attempt to blunder back into Kendall's life was so very realistic as was the emotion they both experiencing. Great job. Michael's determination to find a way is heartening and exciting. You also revealing more and more of their characters as we go. Fantastic job. And there's a touch of humour coming through too which is delightful. This is turning into such a satisfying regarding read. Im so glad you wrote this story and so pleased to have started reading it.
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