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Well, it is very interesting, that's for sure. Compelling writing that draws one in to the mystery of what happened to separate them (Frostie and Tallen) and why, and also who Daniel Ellison is as opposed to Tallen (who doesn't ever seem to have a surname) and who appears to live in another realm. Strange and puzzling and definitely quite beyond the scope of a therapist as we know, so not surprising that Mz Dyer is somewhat perplexed by this. And here you actually did interact a little with your readers, so that's encouraging.

Very interesting. Now we see an earlier suspected connection between them. An instant bonding it would seem. But you don't like to interact with your readers. A bit like Frost are you?

Well, Suki might help get him over Nik if that is to be a closed door. How sad! James is being wonderfully protective. Nice to see that. And Lacey seems to be keeping out of the way. Is there some reason for that? The chapter was just too short though, Nephy! It was hardly a sniff into the story!

Tallen is so very good with Frostie! But he also seems to be remembering things that Frostie can't. Very intriguing. They are good together and I sure hope this helps Frostie get free of his fears and phobias.

I know I was a little uncertain as to where this was going, but I didn't think I would drop it, and that's what appears to have happened. I can only think I was extremely distracted and busy - excuses, excuses. So glad Faxity did a review and I got involved again, because I actually think I am going to love this. I love the mystery element and I really like Frost and Tallen, though there's something about him that might be other than it appears and I sure hope he's not going to turn out bad for Frost. I love your writing style too. It's great.

Really excellent review, Fax. Sent me scurrying to read! I discovered I had already started that and can't think why I didn't pursue it. I can only think I got distracted by something else and forgot about it, though I see from my review of the first chapter I had some doubts about it being my cup of tea. It is very intriguing and wonderfully well written, so I must given it another shot. So thanks for the reminder of just how worth a read this might well be.

The "like" button was so inadequate for this. I adored this chapter. Nelson's reminiscing was so delightful. I love him! And his mom is such a peach too. Such a feel good chapter and so funny too. What a pleasure to wake up to this morning. It will make my day. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story. Looking forward to the progress of the lovers. They make such a sweet couple. Lol!

First off, just to get it out of the way - I think you called Walker's office Wheeler's office when Andy was banging on the door. Your description of Matt's finding everything boring after their summer is so good and so realistic. It's a tough place for him to be. Wonder how Andy thinks he can rescue Matt from this. Matt's beating up Frank K was a great release of his pent up frustrations but not a long term solution - though it could get him totally suspended if he keeps it up, and that might actually work for him to start new somewhere else where he doesn't have a history. Doc Walker is fantastic with the boys. What a guy! He is a voice of sanity and light in a dark world at the moment. He is such a good counsellor. Thomas & Colt are providing some light diversion/distraction from Matt & Andy, but Matt & Andy's situation is pretty serious if they're going to finish their education (which they must as the beginning of this story shows them in college, right?!)

Thanks for a great story. I loved Pen being in on the final act and the final line, no less!

The romantic wins the day in the end and leaves everyone happy! Well done!

I had a good laugh reading all the reviews and seeing that later readers like me can laugh all the way to the bank knowing they can just open the next chapter to see what this was about. I would also have hated to have to wait to see the conclusion, and might also have looked for you too! Lol!

Difficult to say how this will go. Daniel has to be desperate or incapacitated to stand against Trevor. He will do all in his power to protect Sean and Robbie. They can maybe do something if they catch Trevor in the act of abusing Danny and overpower him, as LadyDe suggested. Can't wait to see what you have in mind.

Danny is in a bad spot and doesn't seem to be able to help himself to get out of it, whether for fear of Sean taking it (very likely) or for himself too, perhaps, or even for Robbie. Trevor is obviously dangerous and perhaps Danny is not even too sure that the law can protect him. I think Sean will do everything in his power to help Danny get free, so it will be interesting to see what he and Robbie come up with.

Darn right about that! We'd all have your guts for garters if you posted a Rob chapter now! Even if we are Rob team! Can't wait to see how the date goes. A delightful read. Just love the interaction between Eric and his family members. It's really good. And the anticipation of the date is great. Very nicely built. This story is great fun! Thanks for the chapter!

It will be interesting to know the history of their relationship and Robbie's part too. Impossible to know how Daniel is going to respond without that. I suspect he is going to find it difficult for some reason to seek help on this one and if he doesn't co-operate with Trevor there is this threat on Sean, which sounds pretty serious. Daniel will want to protect Sean no matter what. Does not sound like a good romance at the moment, but hopefully we will get back to that.

I was very moved by Sean's telling of his time with Michael. Seems that Sean and Daniel make a great couple. Trevor's reappearance will be a big problem it seems. It will be interesting to see what happens. A very enjoyable story.

Told with a delightful sense of humour and a lovely sense of the romantic. I'm definitely a sucker for both. Love the cat too! Love animals. Though I'm a dog person myself. Enjoying your story and enjoying the friendship between Rob and Daniel. A good straight friend can be such a great support.

Light-hearted and fun so far, though there's a hint at something bad in the past. Easy reading and short chapters too. I like it so far.

Aw! I love his note with the flowers to Penguin! Sure to get Sean's attention big time. A delightful, though a little painful (broken wrist), opening chapter. He did not seem over concerned about his wrist so perhaps it wasn't that painful, though I doubt it. I'm surprised Sean did not have some advice for him about how to hold it against his body so as not to jolt it unnecessarily. A broken wrist can be agonizingly painful.

Another great story. Very satisfying and heart-warming with a touch of humour. I loved it. I'm going to have to make some time to read over more of your stories. The two I have read so far are absolute winners.

What a great story! So neat and so full of angst and love in so few lines. I loved it. It brought tears to my eyes.

Well, I did read it. It was great and every bit as good as Cole intimated. Thanks for the review Cole. I might never had read it otherwise.

And it didn't disappoint. I'm so glad a review was written on the story otherwise I might never had read it. Thanks for the great ending.

There's still another chapter to come so I'm believing that it turns out right in the end, but it could have ended here and never been repaired. That's normal in life. For it to be mended somehow is not the usual story of life. Well, I must finish this and see what you did with it.

That was some amazing test he gave himself. He is so strong to have gone through it and not given in to Chandler. Amazing! But it was a pretty good test and showed him what was what.