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Mind-blowing sex! Can't say I've ever had it that bad! Lol! But I can see his total besottedness with Chandler's body. Once he wrangles with that will it be easy to sacrifice? I doubt it. Lust can seem so close to love and is hard to give up. Never easy. Interesting story.

Wow! A lot in here that stirs up things, especially in the early part of the chapter. The actual betrayal is very effectively told and comes across as pretty realistic though I can't say I've actually been there as a giver of, though I have received it as Ben did, but had a very different response to him, though I can understand his response completely.

Your review certainly makes one want to read the story. Thank you. I'll check it out.

Great chapter. The mystery deepens but is in part taken a step further. Very evocative and stirring. Keep it coming! I am fascinated about where you are taking this.

Interesting! Seems Corbin had no choice but to respond to Mike the way he did, so that puts that affair to rest for 6 months and then, as Corbs says, what will be will be. It's amazing how his friendship with Pete gives him inspiration for the damndest (not sure that's a word) plots as it seems Pete somehow sparked his imagination for this plan to go beyond the now, and has led him to apparently tow the line (though this is all entirely a manipulation of the highest order). Corbs is such an incredibly intelligent politician in his manipulation of people and events. A master in the art! Maybe that's the attraction Pete holds - Corbs never seems quite to be in control there nor able to manipulate Pete and Pete leaves him in this terrible place of inconclusiveness and uncertainty, which is like a drug, luring him in. I feel a little sorry (only a little mind you) for Lee. He's on his way to become another Corbin it seems.

Keep up the good work! It's moving forward nicely!

A really great chapter! I'm so impressed with how you keep this story moving and inch it up another knotch (not knot! Lol!) The therapy session was amazing and then Matt and Andy after the session - it had an element of humour in it! But it was good that they were able to take what happened in the session and clarify it to themselves without flinching. Wow! And then Matt with his parents. I was so proud of him! I think that must have been how his parents were feeling too, and it made me love them and him all over again. You do such a good job. I am loving this story so much. It is ministering to me deeply. Thank you!

Love-lorn and love lost. Such a beautiful romantic picture captured.

Thank you for your encouragement.

Yes, tea is very English! Lol! Thanks for commenting!

Another's, but I like how you have interpreted it too. Thanks for the comments.

Thanks so much, Lisa.

Thank you so much!

Thanks for another good chapter, Nephy! So sad that Sacha and Nik can't be together right away, but at least the message was a good one to end on. Lacey, Lacey! Don't go ordering Sacha's life for him when you know so little! Well meaning, I know, but very dangerous for Sacha. I keep feeling that Sacha's dad is somehow not in the picture. What's happening there? He did so much to find and rescue Sacha and now he's not around.

Thanks, Al, for your kind comments and encouragement.

It's still so dark. Can it be time? No marimba chant yet. Must be a little numbered hour. Turn over. Sleep a while. Absence of responding body. Consciousness prods awake. Move your ass! Put on the kettle! Tea and new things call out.

I'm not sure why I missed your posting this, but I got it today (Mon) and I can't believe how you are taking this story up another step again. I am deeply moved by this chapter. I felt the pain that Matt's parents felt. And now I'm sensing something so deep being explored as the boys have their minds gently probed by Walker. He's so good and Andy has responded so remarkably to him. It's so good having them both present as they are resonating off each other here. Can't wait for Matt's response. It was really amazing how Matt recorded Andy's response. Will Andy now record Matt's response? Very intriguing. These boys are not really boys any longer in their minds or their emotions - they have experienced too much to be regarded as 16 year old boys any longer. Very moving. Thanks for writing such an interesting and deep story. You are really good at this.

Hey, thanks for the heads up! Great chapter. Keep them rolling!

That was great! Just loving this story!

I am enjoying this fun story!

Hilarious!

I love the dialogue. Willie is funny with his quips.

Some rather more serious elements in this chapter it seems. Interesting.

A very amusing story. Full of entertaining surprises!

A short one but full of fun. This could be good for a laugh.