Robertaber

Nice chapter and great story i am officially following u as a author

Nice chapter im wondering how this will go meeting Marc's family and how will Damien and Marc get around the arguement they had hopefully marc will admit that to a point he was wrong to just go off and train all the time.

I totally agree with robert Rex great tension and honestly I think u should have uploaded the other chapter the same time because I think we are all excited to figure out what happens specially with the relationship ending fight btw to a point I agree with Damien about Marc with the whole shutting him out thing and I think he deserved that slap to the face that Damien gave him.

Well uh nice chapter sorta hit a few nerves ther in the middle about gay being unnatural and how veer a more or less burned his nude image in her mind and totally disrespected his privacy. Anyway other then that stuff it was a good chapter.

I usually don't read stories like this but I really thank for the first chapter u did great and I could to a point relate to Ezra just dont put to much depression in it k alittle then like sad then happy moments in that order is think would keep people entertained with some but not to much emotion

I agree with the guys above can't wait for Christmas 16

Nice chapter can't wait for abit more

Hey um can you continue this story please

Nice story so far can't wait for the next parts

Nice i loved the first book and the first chapter of this one is great are you going to update it anymore?

First thing awesome storys i read the first modern high then just finished reading all up to the last update. If like to say the first one really was a tear jerker but in some parts it was abit uh confuseing like ok so they had the chat after the coma and my first instinct is ok everythings sorta fixed but then they don't talk to eachother at all so that was one spot that to me didnt make much sense. Anyway good job so far on this one as for a suggestion mabye have Zachary do alittle vampire stuff like well if possible do some telekinesis or mind reading something like that and for Jacob you could mabye do some where he for example makes something but something complex like hmm mabye something alive since you mentioned it dureing the time when he was talking to the crystals. Anyway thats all for now can't wait for more

Awesome chapter update i do admit I was hoping for it to go abit better with Cyrus i would have thought he would listen to his pack conscious can't wait for the next one .

lol well im glad you enjoyed it lol, if I may ask how is it not realistic?

I awoke to hearing a beat in my head as if someone was hitting a drum in a steady rhythm. I looked around Adam’s room shocked at seeing that it was empty with nothing making the beating noise. It slowly intensified as someone approached the room. It was so loud I could not distinguish between it, and other sounds; it took my whole attention. I screamed out in pain as it started to pound down into my brain. Suddenly in ran Sam with a shocked and scared look on his face. “Justin, what’s wrong?”

I sat still thinking, trying to put together a good way to ask my questions. Dash, a little annoyed, pleaded, “Come on ask us something. I know you have questions. Don’t think, just ask.” I was having trouble thinking of how to ask my questions. My mind still clouded from my telepathic conversation with Lupus Albus, or Lupu for short, not to mention seeing the state of my old home burning into ash. Finally, I sighed and looked around for some paper, finding that maybe it would be easier to wri