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I liked it! It was kinda weird, but I don't know... in a good way! The flashbacks were great, the hotdog story particularly! :3 Especially in the beginning you were starting (in my opinion) too many sentences with personal pronouns (mostly I), but it got better towards the end. Oh and I love that song xD
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Jacob “Cody knows,” Josh said, as he sat down next to me on the meadow. “Damn. How’d he find out?” I asked surprised. “He’s seen one of us in my clothes in the park,” Josh explained. “Watched me closely and overheard a conversation between Ethan and me. We decided it was better to tell him than to risk him doing anything stupid while trying to figure out what’s going on. He promised to keep it a secret.” “You trust him to do that?” I questioned. Josh shrugged. “It’s not like we had a choice
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Chapter 3 - The Prince Comes Home
Sammy Blue commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 3 - The Prince Comes Home
Nice chapter, can't wait to read more! The age of the servants would make me way uncomfortable. too, if I was Josh. Maybe he can find a good friend in Max, and Max could help get him used to servants that way, but I hope he doesn't misinterpret why Max is even making friends with him once he finds out that he 'has been told to do so'. Of course it's not like that, but it come across wrong. Also, being close to someone his age could complicate keeping things about Nate secret... Well, we shall see. -
A great chapter, although I am more confused than I was before... I was kind of hoping this would give us some clarification, but right now it feels like nothing and everything is possible. I'm particularly interested in what's up with Jarrod. I wonder if he's just not used to being around gay guys or maybe Alex is even right with his one assumption and Jarrod might even flirt back? ;D Well, we shall see!
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Aw, wow! That was a very nice chapter and good, consoling ending to the tragic events that took place during this book. This story was really great and deserves it's spot as the most reviewed story. I don't think any other story had me laughing as well as tearing up so much like this one. In this review I will not speculate on the next story and possible future events, I think that can be left to the forums. The only thing I do need to say is that you nust write the next story quick because I might just have serious withdrawal symptoms if you don't.
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Hey! Thanks a lot for your review and your compliments! I agree, chapter 14 was more for fun and chapter 13 was much deeper. I can totally imagine what that shower scene would look like in a movie. Thanks for giving me that mental picture. I can't tell you anything about Ethan, other than: We will have to see.
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Hehe I'm at least planning the next chapter.. I've been kind of busy in the last days. Well, if Ethan had a crush on Jacob, that would of course complicate things enormously... let's hope he doesn't ;3 But you are right, they are lucky to have Ethan, without him Josh would've never made it this far. :3 Thanks for all of your reviews!
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Yeah, I kinda started to feel like it was a bit imbalanced between the twins and Jacob was the one just giving and Josh the one just living into the day and only taking and not thinking about things, but that definitely changed here... Josh isn't that careless... :3 And I know that I totally would, too. We will see how it plays out. ;D
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Haha thanks! ;PI think almost nobody would pass up on that chance.
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The Josh and Ethan thing definitely has potential to cause problems. They will shy away from letting anyone know though, or at least Josh will. Jacob's parents would only go along with keeping it from Josh's parents for so long and what then?Thanks for your review!
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Thanks a lot! We will have to see where the whole Josh and Ethan thing goes, but yeah, the suspicions about Ethan are starting to get more and more.
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You are right, if this goes wrong, Jacob will be really troubled about it. We have yet to see what Philip's real intentions are. ;PAnd well, maybe in a few decades most of those people like Josh's father will be gone. Just like with the racism... who knows.
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Thanks a lot! I don't know if I will be able to work that with Mr Fisher in somewhere, it seems like a minor thing, but one never knows. ;3
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Hihi, maybe Cody was just playing around with them but who knows... Thanks for your compliment and review!
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An Almost Ordinary Schoolday
Sammy Blue commented on Sammy Blue's story chapter in An Almost Ordinary Schoolday
Thanks! :3 Well he certainly will handle it better than Josh. :3 -
The Prince and the Pauper is awesome! :3The teacher might become suspicious, but he won't be able to proof anything... in dubio pro reo
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Thanks for your review! Ian and Conrad are already so different from Jacob, they shouldn't be very surprised and probably nothing would change... it probably is more of a question how they'd react towards Josh. :3
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Thanks! I struggled a bit with it at first but they are quite different due to the way they grew up, so eventually I managed to get it right
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Thanks! :3And don't cry AJ
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Twins are awesome! :3I thought it made more sense that someone who knows one of them meets the other, than that they run into each other... it's kinda more likely. Although this story is partly inspired by a news report about two brothers who were separated through adoption and met exactly that way: running into each other at the public pool. Thanks for your compliments and review! :3
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Haha, you're lucky that there's quite a few chapters to go then! I'm glad that I was able to convey Josh's feelings and longing.
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Thanks a lot! It was hard to balance that. At first I thought I'd made it way too long but it seems it turned out just fine. :3
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Thanks a lot! Looking forward to reading how you liked it!
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They are getting more and more in danger of being discovered. However, with their new plans, as long as nobody runs across them in the park, they should be fine. IF they swap back in the next chapter and only meet during the afternoons, and then trade for the weekend, and Josh stays with Ethan for the weekend, they should be fine, as long as nobody sees them. Being seen is a real danger though and the park is probably not the best spot to meet without being seen...
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Thanks a lot! I suppose Cody isn't danger to them anymore, at least for now. He isn't really close enough to anyone other than Ethan or Sarah to slip up. And yes, I suppose we all wish for friends like Ethan.
