Sammy Blue

Heeey! Why did you do it this way? The first half I laughed my ass off and then I got all depressive. Seriously, the first half was pretty funny and even though there was some conflict, it didn't have the usual extent... The second part was just sad. I have seen this coming and I really just didn't like Matt anymore, or so I thought. It was pretty sad to see them go different ways, even though I have known it would happen and actually almost hoped for it. I feel really sorry for Matt. I'd write something more deep and stuff but i'm like on semester holidays and drunk :S Oh and: Happy 1000 Reviews! yay! Sammy Ps: Your writing is awesome!

Haha I know, I'm cruel Thanks for your compliment! Far too few people are commenting on Ethan! We will see what it is soon, I guess... but not in the next chapter. The weekend swap is a risk, but first let's hope they even make it that far.

I'm sorry for the ending! I see your point with the weekend, but it depends a lot on what exactly they do during the weekend. But if they are not very careful, they will cause problems. I guess their best call would be to try to stay out of sight. I guess either way, Josh would prefer a weekend mostly alone with Ethan. We will have to see if that works out, though... Thanks for your review!

Hehe, don't get your hopes too high. But yes, it is getting harder... Cody is probably the smaller problem, though. They can tell him and ask him to keep it a secret. But that wouldn't be as easy with Ian.

I already feel bad for Josh, because of course he is almost like living in a dream that will end at some point. It seems very likely that Jacobs parents will accept Josh as Jacobs brother, but there is still this issue with Josh being gay... who knows how Ian and Conrad will react to that... Ian and Philip might be suspicious, but without a little 'extra' they won't be able to figure out what exactly is wrong... you are right though, it seems harder and harder to keep going without anyone noticing... Thanks for your review!

Thanks! I will try to write quick and upload it soon.

Thanks! I like it this way, too. When I started writing, I really pushed forward to get more action in, but now I really enjoy taking it slow.

Haha Yeah that cliffhanger... ;D Thanks for the idea with the chapter title again!

Josh As I left the clearing, I almost had a little jump in my step. I was so happy. Finally, I was making friends; not only Ethan and Sarah, but now also Cody. Then there was Jacob. He was just awesome and I wished I could be more like him. Right now, my life was good, better than I could have ever wished for. Even my muscle ache and the prospect of it becoming worse after working on the farm this afternoon couldn’t dampen my mood. As I stepped back onto one of the small trails that led back t

You are wrapping things up, eh? I really liked this chapter! Brad is backing off a bit, and Frank was amazing. It's heading for a nice happy ending, even though that sounds weird after 9/11... well, life goes on! However, what I liked most was the part from JJ and the way he changed there. Of course just this one conversation won't make him a different person, but he is headed in a direction that I really like and I hope that we will read more from him in the next book!

I will try my best. I'm usually a sucker for happy ends, though, or at least for not too devastating ends, so I guess we'll be alright.

Thanks! Glad to see you're back to reading, I was fearing we had lost you to the Koreans.

Thanks for your review! I will reply in English, so everyone else can read what we're writing. First of all, thanks for your compliments! As for Josh coming out, I cannot see that happen any soon, at least not willingly. However, Philip seems to have his suspicions... so we will see what happens. That one would not end pretty, though. And someone is bound to find out what is going on at some point. So many people have suspicions on one thing or another already. More than they are willing to realize. Parker doesn't seem to be all that happy about what happened to him and Mr. Fisher, Philip and Ian already have noticed things and a forth person is about to join them in the next chapter... Don't worry about your English! Practice makes perfect!

Hey, here it finally is! I've been waiting since Saturday when I read it on AD. I like it! It's still confusing but it's starting to get clearer. I wonder if Ty is gay, too, or what his problem ist. Considering that it is a gay story, the odds are good! The way that he's going, he will get into serious trouble though. I hope he gets his s...tuff together :3

Thanks a lot! Enjoy!

A nice short story! I didn't find any problems, other than that the first sentence seemed a bit odd to me. Maybe it's because English is not my mother tongue. Maybe it's a missing comma? I don't quite understand it (I get what it's saying, just grammatically it seems confused to me). And then there is the story description: affect/effect. I'm not 100% sure but isn't it effect and not affect? Anyway, nice writing, very short but all wrapped up and complete. Keep it up! Sammy

Yay a new chapter! I was not quite expecting it after the hell that broke lose after the last one. But let's leave all that behind... I really liked this chapter and have nothing to bitch about. I particularly like the relationship between Will and JJ. It's very rare that they even talk, but the way they do... I don't know, it seems so real to me. Despite all their differences and all, they are brothers. That counts even more now, after 9/11. I hope that there will be more about the two of them, now and in the next book. It will never be a major topic, but those small things along the lines are really nice to read. If JJ loses it this weekend I hope that Will will be there for him and that we will get to read about it. Sammy

Good point about adjusting back to their own lives. Also, there might be more to Philip than we see at first. ;3Thanks!

Hehe yeah, it seems Jacob keeps adding up things he doesn't tell Josh and Josh didn't give him every detail either... we'll see where this leads. Thanks for your review! =)

Jacob “Hey, how was your day so far?” Josh asked as he pulled me into a brotherly hug. “It’s okay, I guess,” I replied. I considered telling him what had happened between me and Parker, but decided against it. He seemed happy and I didn’t want to ruin his mood by talking about that asshole. I’d tell him some other time. “How about yours?” He grinned at me as we sat down. “Awesome. I’m really liking your life.” I smiled. It was good to hear that he enjoyed his time. He seemed different someho

I'm kinda almost glad that all these problems connected with Matt are gone for a bit... I was expecting him to try fix his relationship with Wade, but apparently he decided for the easy way out. Should've seen it... Brad and Wade? I'm not sure about that... LOL However, if it makes both of them happy, I think Will won't have much of a problem with it, or will he? It looks kinda strange, though, and it would make the family tree even more incomprehensible... I hope it doesn't happen.^^

Thanks! This one will be a great help! When I read the first chapter the other day I was kind of lost.

I'm hoping for more updates! I love this series, it's just awesome! I can't wait for Richie to wake up. This should be interesting. How will he react? And if he decides for a live in darkness (which I assume, having an early sunquest is technically an option but I don't think that would help the storyline very much)... will Justin teach him? I believe that he could be a major help when it comes to Justin's issue with self-denial. How will Richie react to Justin being gay? There are so many questions out there, just regarding this one person. Someone else said that they think that Richie's extra might be something that could have saved Dylan. I think that's actually pretty possible. When looking at Richie's life, his friendship with Justin and later being in hospital... it's rather likely (compared to the norm) that he will have some kind of healing ability. If of course he had something to heal the heart of a vampire, that would be... ironic, in a pretty brutal way. Anyway, Comicality, please write more! We might not drink blood, but you don't want to risk our hunger pains if we don't get a chapter a month here.

Great story! But it kinda says it's complete but it isn't....?

Aww c'mon, still no sequel? You can't leave us hanging like this! I really enjoyed the story and I'd love to read a sequel! I was totally expecting him to change his mind and leave the planet at the end. :-/ Great work! Keep writing!