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Everything posted by Carlos Hazday
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Let's not forget CJ can issue visas for entry into the United States...
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I was going to say the bride wears the pants during wedding planning sessions, but that seemed inappropriate when we're talking about men wearing skirts.
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I want to showcase CJ's ability to think on his feet even more. While there are times when proper plans can produce what he wants, there will be others when he'll have to act quickly. Maturity will hopefully let him know when to shoot and when to ask questions.
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LOL CJ's still too unimportant for Putin to notice. Give him a few years.
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I'm certain that's what CJ meant when he mentioned the silver spoons. Or they could have been white gold for all I know. I've been to two weddings in my life where vodka bottles frozen in ice blocks and caviar were featured. I remember eating the eggs, I particularly remember putting away a lot of vodka, but I can't recall what I used to spoon caviar onto whatever bread or cracker it was I chose to shovel in my mouth.
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Either them or rival taco truck drivers fighting for a good parking spot...
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I'm certain as soon as CJ walked away from the ambassador, the Russian called aides. Ambassadors are not always clued in to what the spies posted to the embassy are doing. Not sure what the situation's like in this case, but I'm interested in what Yevgeny, and the ambassador, will do nect.
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Isn't that when Liebe wants to run away from home and jumps in the back of a taco truck?
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Growing up in South Florida, I've seen a lot of old mansions sold, bought, often razed, and sometimes converted into private clubs. Mar-A-Lago was in the news down here frequently. I think the property that attracted even more attention (before Trump's election) was the Versace Mansion in South Beach.
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Interesting... In an upcoming chapter, someone's less than complimentary about Brett and Cesar and compares CJ to them. Owen tells the idiot he had paid CJ a compliment. Ooops almost forgot about having another loser in the story. You'll recognize him when he shows up. LOL
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It could go a lot of ways with the Russian. We'll see. As for CJ, he can be the life of the party and as irreverent as Brett. But as with his father, you fuck with him, you better take cover. 4000+700+7
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Good. I've done my job. As I mentioned in another comment, I've tried to keep some things (he's feisty) while showing growth (he'll think before pulling the trigger.) At 24 Cj's a much more mature young man.
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Maybe Brett and Cesar will buy Mar-A-Lago out of bankruptcy one day. There'll be an uproar when they encourage minorities to apply for membership.
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Yep. Has been at it for at least 10 years. Lately it's been with the Marines and their fight style.
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THANK YOU! As i've already mentioned, I was worried about this chapter. That buildup was a pain to write. I wanted to set the stasge of an evening gal and slowly reveal what was hiding behind the curtain. (a naked ballet dancer?) Vail will be fun. I recycle some sections from the same vacation in Cadet, and add some new interesting segments not previously covered. Keep an eye out for the house news and a baby.
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Okay, here's a spoiler. Over the next few years, CJ, CJ and Owen, CJ,Owen, and Liebe, and the 3 of them and the twins, are frequently featured on magazine covers. CJ and Owen also do several fashion related shoots (GQ, details, Vogue, etc). Owen negotiates for them to receive anythinging they're photographed in. CJ refuses to model for anyone but Tom Ford and Owen demands Brioni. Have I mentioned the Feast with the Beast black tie event at the National Zoo? Or the Met Gala in New York? I think they'll definitely be the beautiful power couple.
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The 'what happened in Mexico' question? Is that a thing? Did something happen in Mexico I'm not aware of? Another earthquake? Another shootout? Another corrupt politician? I have sooo many questions!
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Yeah, but will Yevgeny stay down or does he have another card to play? Northman's already been rebuked and the frequency of the slapping may accelerate. Somebody needs to tell him no matter how high he may think of himself, he's nothing but an insignificant gnat.
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I think the chapter when CJ and Austin get in that shootout with the narcos was a bit more exciting. But I'm glad you liked this one. You definitely calmed my jitters,
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Yes. I firmly believe under the right circumstances, CJ's capable of violence and even taking someone out. And because he didn't figure that out, the Russian's overconfidence was his undoing. A determined CJ can make things happen. I keep trying to imagine Yevgeny in five years and what comes to mind is him, home on the range, sitting by a campfire. He's probably waiting sor a victim to shoot or something.
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@scrubber6620 Thank you. This was a difficult chapter to write from a technical point of view. I wanted to convey a high-class evening full of beautiful people, vodka and caviar, while something dark brewed underneath. I could see someone thinking CJ and Owen are players. CJ in particular's a flirt, someone not used to his ways could think there's more there than innocent BS. CJ might not be a trained killer, but he's not defenseless. I'm certain he's been more cognizant of his surrounding when entering a room and assesing any potential threats. He could kill someone if that person threatened him or more so his family. Yevgeny was sloppy and CJ has been lucky. Let's see how long that lasts.
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Thanks, Tor
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Maybe give her one of these for her wall?
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@dughlas I though of you yesterday. Twice! Once while planning a couple of weddings and trying to decide if kilts would be involved in one of them. I think the bride's going to insist on trousers. The other one was when trying to recall the ages of Archie and Llibet. Googled it and was happy to note Archie's a year older than Liebe (same age as Carolina and Fabricio) and Lili's a year younger. I think they could be friends.
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Ah, yes, Liebe. Had she not been in the picture, I think CJ would have been less pissed off. Owen too! Thankfully, their building has a doorman and strangers are not allowed to the apartment floors without prior notification. She should be okay with the nanny.
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