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Carlos Hazday
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@dughlas I thought about enlisting, but the ban on gays in the military dissuaded me. I've thrown Brad a few challenges and so far he's managed to conquer them. By the end of 2022 I will hopefully have posted a couple of stories updating us on how he's doing.
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LOL You have no idea how prophetic that comment by BWB was. The eating and drinking schedule's about to get more crowded.
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I think I've ignored Harley long enough. How about a cameo in three chapters and larger appearances in two up coming stories, both involving motorcycle rides. One a trip to South Dakota for the Motorcycle Rally @ Sturgis, and another one a ride in the Nevada desert.
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Smart man! LOL She'll get plenty of attention in upcoming chapters.
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Let me finish writing about CJ being DC's mayor before we start on stories about his presidency!
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Tennessee bans books, Florida limits real discussions in classrooms, multiple states pass abortion restrictions and dismiss transgendered individuals as second class citizens; it's enough to drive anyone to desperation. I've always tried to write a positive story. To build CJ up to be the kind of person who learns and could stretch a hand to and work with almost anyone. But to be honest, I've had trouble writing this past week. Russia invading Ukraine topped it all off. And to think certain individuals continue to praise Putin. Hopefully, I'll be back to the story I'm working on soon.
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There are a few chapters that always get to me.
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OK, CJ has plans for him. He doesn't know about them yet, but I'll tell him. LOL
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ooops.... At least he recovers from his bout with sluttiness.
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I have a paragraph or two about Brad in a story set in 2027. And a huge appearance in the subsequent one. I promised regular updates on spinoff characters. and I suspect you'll like where I'm taking him.
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I knew what was coming and didn't want it to be something out of left field. I also wanted to show Brad changing as a result of going to war. Even if he relapsed in his drinking at some point, the newly acquired maturity will benefit him.
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A great advantage to writing a series for so long is I get the opportunity to continually develop characters. Seeing new aspects of their personality when they're placed in new circumstances is fun.
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Damn! You're gonna dislike the end result of that contribution. Anyway, I'd like to refer you to CDMX chapter 10 where Cody was introduced. No gym changing room shenanigans, but CJ, Owen, and Liebe did spend enough time with him to base their contribution on academics instead of looks. Maybe you want to drop me a comment and let me know if you still feel the same way after you read all about it. For the record, you're right. Their money, so they get to spend it any way they want. One day it's technology centers to support school children, another day it'll be archeological digs in the jungle.
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You're right, I've portrayed her primarily as a caretaker so far, but I felt enough time had passed since her husbands death she would be interested in doing stuff for herself, My sister-in-law's mother played tennis into her late 80s and that served as inspiration. The laady's still alive and functioning, just not playing tennis any longer.
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She'll keep them all in line!
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LMAO I imagined as a padded ball rolling on the snow when she threw herself off the sled.
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You may also have to help with casting when Netflix turns it into a series.
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You gonna sit next to me at the nursing home helping me write? You can be the research assistant!
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Jeans, leather jackets, and bubbly. (sorry but we know Owen would veto rotgut.
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They will likely defer to her wishes. And her brothers. I'm thinking a liberal policy with non-negotiable limits. Funny how this subject will be featured in a couple of future stories. BTW- going back to your previous comment, when I decided to introduce an archeologist into the story, my first thought was Yale. But I've been trying to move characters west a bit (yeah, I know, PA is East Coast) and when mentioning their alma maters is appropriate, I've been trying to vary those as much as possible too.
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I'll make up for it by trashing their football team in the future...
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When looking to see if it was realistic for her to be on skis at 20 months, I found a lot of clips of skiers younger than her doing better than I showed her doing. I figured since it was her first time, she'd be clumsy.
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Wasn't I just saying if I had my way some chapters would be extremely short? There are times I reach a natural stopping point and end up adding more because of the limits on chapter postings. All part of writing for the internet and serial postings.
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You have no idea! I think Liebe and her siblings will be as foul-mouthed as their father. #losingbattle
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Welcome to binge central. A couple of other readers have been doing the same recently. I miss Harley too, let me see what I can do about at least a cameo. Problem will be limiting his monologues to a page or two. Had to remove half my response due to multiple spoilers.
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