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  1. Carlos Hazday

    November 2014

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in November 2014

    Considering how long it took for those two to become a couple, I wouldn't hold my breath waiting for a wedding. Owen Jr.? LMFAO
  2. Carlos Hazday
    Glad you enjoyed it, Jeff!
  3. Carlos Hazday
    I actually thought that could have been a Brett line Ritch echoed. Ritch and Brett are all about fun and toys. CJ and Cesar are the planners and plotters.
  4. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks, bud.
  5. Carlos Hazday
    You have no idea how hard I tried to not turn Ritch into a CJ clone. Yes, they'll have similar values because of family ties, but their personalities will not be identical. Ritch wants to fly planes but if he continues to show leadership capabilities, he may end up spending more time behind a desk than in a cockpit. We'll see more of Ritch's values emerge in the next chapter.
  6. Carlos Hazday
    My kind of drama, though. None of the silly, angst ridden characters
  7. Carlos Hazday
    He needs the grandson for a few days to keep him busy between chapters.
  8. Carlos Hazday
    Mesa Verde National Park. Been there, done that. The climb's not as steep as at Echo Point in Katoomba.
  9. Carlos Hazday
    My old boss taught me when dealing with an IRS audit for a client, we were to answer questions truthfully but not volunteer information. I very much doubt the Academy is ignorant of underage cadets drinking. Ritch has enough sense never to do it in public, like at a party, where a picture of him doing so would provide evidence.
  10. Carlos Hazday
    Very good observation. Brad's visit to the Academy was mentioned in Ranger. I think it was less than a full sentence. Since I'm writing overlapping stories, I end up mentioning something in one and developing the idea in another one. It'll happen with a few events in Cadet. Not sure he has to report Donovan drinking, but if asked about it he must tell the truth. I have a feeling the Academy will find out about the arrest without Ritch turning into a rat.
  11. Carlos Hazday
    You want drama? Just wait a bit and I'll show you drama.
  12. Carlos Hazday
    LOL At least you're not complaining about short chapters.
  13. Carlos Hazday
    I love the speculation! May have to start writing cliffies on purpose.
  14. Carlos Hazday
    Cliffhanger? Where? Ritch has enough to worry about the last thing he needs is a classmate's arrest. Unfortunately, it looks as if he'll have to deal with it.
  15. Carlos Hazday
    Ritch may be ensconced at the Academy, but life for everyone else moves on. Remember he's the youngest Squad member by a few years.
  16. Carlos Hazday
    Let's wait and see what happens next with Donovan. I'm kinda curious myself.
  17. Carlos Hazday
    Well, technically they didn't give him alcohol. I think most kids Ritch's age will drink no matter how stupid related laws may be. Legislating morality will use lead to law breaking. Prohibition's a prime example.
  18. Carlos Hazday
    Thanks, bud. The shell surrounding Ritch has been cracked and he's slowly but surely finding his place in the world.
  19. Carlos Hazday
    I've tried to contain chapters to one event or two, this one was meant to cover summer break and classes, but I couldn't fit it all in within a reasonable word count. Ended up splitting it when it was borderline too long.
  20. Carlos Hazday
    “Thank you, Peterson. It’s beautiful.” Cadet First Class Nicole Baxter—the Olympic caliber swimmer who harangued Ritch about his attire on I-Day—hugged him. “I’m glad you like it. I… I…” Ritch did not stutter often, but around the statuesque woman, he frequently found himself tongue-tied. “Not sure if you remember, but you made a big impression on I-Day. And since then, you’ve always encouraged me whenever we’ve ended up working together.” Baxter laughed and placed a hand on Ritch’s sh
  21. Carlos Hazday

    Intermezzo

    Carlos Hazday commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Intermezzo

    Good chapter and great reader comments. Speculation's always fun to read. I'll just say don't trust a smiling man who had lunch with the woman chasing you.
  22. Carlos Hazday

    Chapter 35

    Carlos Hazday commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 35

    Can't wait to read Fergus' reaction. Bad move on his part no matter what his intentions were when he sent over his betas. And maybe, if they can figure out a way for Jada and Sawyer not to be rabids forever, Jimmy's found his pack. Although they should move somewhere warm. Like Arizona, now that it's a blue state.
  23. Carlos Hazday

    October 2014

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in October 2014

    I think by the time that happens it'll be King Charles and CJ will call him Charlie or Chuck.
  24. Carlos Hazday
    Let the guessing begin. Five more days until the reveal.
  25. Carlos Hazday
    Chipper's story ended in December 2020, Brad's in June 2022. As soon as I can find the proper spot, I'll provide updates on their lives.
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