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  1. Carlos Hazday
    We just read about the process for even being allowed to apply to the Academy. After jumping through so many hoops, only 10% of applicants are accepted. That tells me these four guys are above average. Smart enough not to get trapped in anything. These are officer candidates, not regular airmen. Brett and Cesar, as we've seen, are heavily involved in their sons' lives. I'm certain they have discussed the perils of wealth with Ritch.
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    Now, why would you even think that? You must be reading a lot of crappy stories where women are not to be trusted. She was nice enough to buy them lunch, and try to make their leave a bit more enjoyable. And sometimes, a fuck's just a fuck. Particualrly when you're a teenager and someone's willing to put out.
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    Peter Pan? LMAO Stick around, next week, Ritch starts his second year at the Academy
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    “Why the fuck are they taking so long?” Ritch was frustrated; he hated the military’s hurry up and wait approach to everything. “I mean, we’re all here. Let’s get this shit show on the road.” Will extended an arm and snatched the tennis ball Ritch was bouncing off the wall. “Down, Peterson. We’ve all seen the videos and heard the stories of what’s going to happen. Why are you so eager?” “Yeah, Peterson, what’s the rush? I’m willing to sit here as long as they want.” The squadron’s dool
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    Nocturne

    Carlos Hazday commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Nocturne

    Country bumpkins. I hate tablet typing. Why do I keep doing it?
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    Nocturne

    Carlos Hazday commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Nocturne

    The interaction between outright bumping and sophisticated jetsetter are fascinating. Ignorance about a different lifestyle could derail friendships but when people open themselves to new experiences wonderful things happen.
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    Quodlibet

    Carlos Hazday commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Quodlibet

    Only a musician could have written this chapter. Loved the way the two 'couples' dance around each other.
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    Chapter 34

    Carlos Hazday commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Chapter 34

    The opening scene had me laughing. Not bad, Mann. These two plan to get away, while at the same time Fergus plots how to secure his hold over Jimmy. Something's gotta give.
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    Hey, James- Any story in the Boomers, Gen Xers, & Millennials is somewhat related to the CJ series. I'm thinking of changing that long name to CJverse LOL I have more CJ proper stories planned but the next one may not begin posting until next year. Let me get through Cadet and a couple of small projects, and I'll start writing. Once you're all caught up, you'll have to make do with weekly Cadet chapters.
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    Brett and Cesar must be rattling around that Georgetown house. Maybe you and them need a bunch of grandchildren to keep you entertained.
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    For those who've read the CJ series, we know The Squad may have dispersed but most of them return to D.C. when CJ becomes President. And hopefully, anyone he appoints to high office will be confirmed on a timely basis.
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    Rocky Ground

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Rocky Ground

    @Defiance19 They'll get with the program as soon as they're done binge reading.
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    Local Hero

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Local Hero

    LMAO - I do too! That line's so good, I've used it at least once more.
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    @BlueWindBoy Sometimes I go overboard, cut a paste something, and forget to modify it. Thank goodness my editor(s) usually catch it and say it sounds like a brochure instead of my writing.
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    Rocky Ground

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Rocky Ground

    Careful... she's a teacher and has to deal with kids all the time. I'm certain she can handle you. LOL
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    THANK YOU!!!!! I did say I had multiple issues posting this chapter. The duplication has been removed. Not sure about the next chapter, there may be sexual references included LOL The news last night had a report on a Paralympics runner befriending a little kid learning how to use an artificial leg. The athlete's blades immediately made me think of Brad. I suspect by the time Brad reaches middle age, advances in prosthetics will have him walking/running as if he had his real legs back.
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    I'm still innocent of everything I've been accused of. It's all fake news. Many, many people have told me I'm doing a good job.
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    Fergus. is that you? I think Mann's account has been hacked!
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    So far it would be the Dynamic Duo since it's only Ritch and Will LOL Let's see what happens with the other two guys joining them for spring break.
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    Rocky Ground

    Carlos Hazday commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Rocky Ground

    LMAO Unfortunately Sean's unavailable. @Defiance19 called dibs on him a long time ago.
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    Splinters are dangerous. Safer spankings require a rubber
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    As cavalier an attitude as Brett has towards most things, I've tried to show his love for Ritch is as strong as Cesar's and as both's for CJ. Ritch was a scared kid and look how he's turned out. They're doing something right. I think they'll end up doting on grandchildren.
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    LOL I had multiple computer issues this morning. I think they're all corrected now. As for the final scene, that was by design. I wrote two versions simultaneously. One from Brett's POV and the other one from Ritchie's. From the dads side, I wanted to show them visiting Colorado a few times. Their other son stayed in Washington for college so this is new to them. From Ritch's side the purpose is to continue growing Will's relationship with the dads after meeting them in August. Next step's meeting a few more at Christmas I also wanted to establish the availability of the Vail house. Ritch will be there a few times over the next 3 years.
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    I think Ritch had to grow up in that aspect since he spent so much time with The Squad. One of those if you can't stand the heat things. I'll have him on fire by the end of the story.
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    Ethan will continue to be part of the story. If not before, he'll be back in DC in 2041. I do have a title for his spinoff, but not much else right now. He and the other NYC characters will feature prominently when CJ, Ozzie, and the kids move to the penthouse at 50 United Nations Plaza.
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