@Myr
HP laptop with latest version of Windows and Firefox
iPad with an older version of IOS and latest version of Chrome
Samsung Galaxy Note with updated Android and Chrome.
Myr, any idea why the review button at the end of the final chapter does not show up even though the story's marked as complete?
Also, I posted the last two chapters manually on real time yet neither one shows up in the daily 'most liked content' even though both have received more reactions than other entries.
https://gayauthors.org/story/carlos-hazday/singer/26#comment-404474
“Don’t give me that look. It’s legal in California and so am I.” Chipper grinned at his father and allowed the unlit joint to dangle from his lips.
“Doesn’t smoking affect your voice?” Cristina shook her head when her brother offered to take her outside with him. “No, thanks. I’ll stick to wine.”
“Long term, I’m sure it would. But I don’t smoke that much. And in places like California, where recreational use’s legal, edibles are a great alternative. I’m just feeling a little old-scho
FYI the one I was working on that kept threatening to get out of hand clocked in at just over 8k. I could have written double without too much difficulty. The 1k chapter experiment was good, getting better at distilling a story down to bare bones, then limiting the fleshing out.
Pretty darn good, Cassie. It was a comfortable read. Realistic dialogue which is a pet peeve of mine, and I found myself smiling at the care you took in it. I can see the conflict/drama coming from a couple different directions, so I won't guess to prevent being embarrassed. I look forward to reading the rest of it
@Cris L President Trump's in South Florida for the Thanksgiving Holiday. Yesterday, I had to deal with road closures when I took my bike in for service, and that was hours before the rally at the arena. Not sure if he has anything planned for Friday but let's hope he doesn't make a public appearance and coverage means our show gets preempted.
The notifications about you reacting to chapters and commenting on a couple of them made me smile.
Harvey Weinstein inspired this sub-plot but I didn't want to make it all about sex. The casting couch may be the subject of many jokes but it's real. Taking advantage of innocent upstarts may have been Nalbo's modus operanti, but he didn't count on Chipper not being so innocent nd having friends in high places.
Haven't watched this weeks shows yet so I don't know who advanced. Blake has one guy I think will make it to the finals but surprisingly he's not country. Jake Hoot, Clarkson's contestant is pure country. Big, good-looking single father with an incredible voice.
Glad you caught that... I'm tired but I'm going out there and dancing my ass off. I'd be wanting a Ben-Gay bath. I made a point of mentioning his regular gym visits; most modern, successful artists don't get to stand by a microphone and sing without moving.
Although Singer can be read without having to read the CJ series first, I wanted to include a few references for the diehard fans. Since I'd written him performing that song before, I was unsure about including it in this story. In the end I thought it fit too well and the little comment here served as a kind of Easter egg.