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Everything posted by Carlos Hazday
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Vegas... Elvis played there often enough, and I've been dying to write a story set in Sin City for a long time. In 2027, most of the original Squad turn 30. The Agean (set six months after Flying Circus) will feature a week of parties for Chipper that will also serve to celebrate everyone else's birthdays. The outline calls for the entire Squad and a bunch of characters from Singer, pool party, gambling, motorcycle rides in the desert, maybe a wedding but not the one you're suspicious about, and details about where most of the guys will wind up in their 30s.
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Thank you. I try to take readers to places they may not otherwise visit and throwin in details I come across is always fun. A lot of those I discover by accident while doing basic research. You might be interested in knowing I've outlined a character named Dave from Manchester. LOL He'll be a professor at the London School of Economics. @Mrsgnomie Where's your Dave? LMAO
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Ritch's life has to be interesting considering he's doing what he always wanted--fly fighter jets--and doing it in a place like Aviano. The fact his brother's a media darling might affect him more, but I'm certain the Air Force keeps a tight rein on who can talk to him and when. They're not above parading him around when it suits their purpose. I wanted to change point of views so we could get a glimpse about how each family member views the family and their vacation. The sweet moment with Liebe gets balanced by the twins' acting up. I wanted to show CJ and Owen disciplining the kids, they will NOT become entitled brats. Of course, CJ being CJ, he's gonna do it with a sense of humor. That was why I used the noggin line. Freezing rain and snow sounds good about now. Raining right now and the temperature's going into the high 80s today. I know I live in Florida but by now we should at least not have sweltering weather.
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It had to happen sooner or later, and I didn't want to dwell on it. It reminded me too much of having to put my golden down at around the same age. Big breeds unfortunately don't live as long as small dogs. Of course, I had to replace him with two puppies and make them rescues.
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04 Thursday 4 May 2027 Palma de Mallorca “Beautiful sky! Sailors take warning…” Leaning over the railing, Ritch sipped coffee while casting his eyes upwards. “I’d say we’re getting rain in the next couple of hours, Munchkin.” “How do you know that, Uncle Ritch?” Liebe had been sent to fetch him for breakfast and joined in staring at the eastern horizon from the top deck. “The saying’s ‘Red sky at night sailors’ delight. Red sky in the morning, sailors take warning.’ When the
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So far, I've published 18 stories starring CJ with nearly a million words. That's not counting the spinoffs. In Flying Circus, I had to introduce multiple new characters to crew the sailboat, but I also recycled a bunch of them. The cousin would have been introduced in the book about CJ's time as ambassador (not yet written but I have ideas) and the photographer has made several appearances in previous stories. Two of the shorts I planned for the summer of 2022 involve weddings, one featuring college friends and the other one high school ones. I have a rich cast of secondary characters who will populate future stories. Hell, in Loving Anniversary I even featured two of Ritch's classmates at the Air Force Academy. My writing often leaves open items when a story ends, but that doesn't mean I won't revisit the situation. Stick around, we may be jumping all over the calendar, but eventually it'll all tie together.
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I'll guess you're still getting used to working long hours.
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Thank you!!!!
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Maybe not the Abello kids, but there's that Nigerian athlete with the big--never mind. I don't want to give the plot away. I think I jotted the concept down about 5 or 6 years ago. We can assume Liebe asked if Santa was real early, and CJ won't lie to her. It'll be interesting when the boys are in the picture if Liebe plays along.
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The only way to read Premium stories is to become a Premium Supporter. Which everyone who can afford it should be. GA's a wonderful place but it costs money to run. In a chat with @Myr, he noted the data storage cost alone was huge. Gas and food are not the only things affected by inflation. Inked has no connection to any other stories. It's something new with an MC who could star in his own series. The other Premium story I'm planning on, Aloha Aina, will have a connection to my main man.
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It's always the author's fault! LOL Thanks, Simon. Let's see where my writing takes us. As I said, Inked and Newport are written and ready to go. The Premium story will go live whenever the GA staff decides, the other one will begin posting January 2023. The current story has a few chapters to go.
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Thanks. I often wish these characters were real so I could hang out with them. They're easy to write for most of the time, and althoug they share basic characteristics, each is an individual. Except for the twins; that will probably change once they hit puberty. LOL
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That reminds me of an outline for a Christmas story I should dust off. Santino Claus takes over when his father dies. He moves the toy shop to Antarctica and designs FABULOUS new outfits for the elves.
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I wrote Circus right after I finished writing CDMX. I wanted a light-hearted story to counteract all the drama in the Mexico story. I planned to write a long story covering the Summer of '22 which cleared old open items and set the stage for CJ to become ambassador to Cuba and his election as major. When readers complained CDMX did not clear everything up, I stupidly decided to break that long story into 9 and post what I already had as Key West and Everhope. Big mistake. Readers again complained. This time about the short story format even though I'd announced it. I blew a fuse and decided to fuck the summer books and publish Circus. It by no means fills in all the gaps. Once my blood pressure returned to normal, I decided I had to please myself first and to ignore the bullshit comments. We're back to those 9 stories which I listed on a previous comment. I want to write at least 3 of them. The others, and the rest of those 5 years between Mexico and the Med, I don't know if I'll get to. There's one story set 6 months after the sailing I'd really like to write because it would feature the entire Squad, their partners, and a few secondary characters. We'll see. Depending on when Myr and Cia decide to publish Inked (something I wrote for Premium) I also have a second non-CJ story I need to find time for. If I croak by the end of the year, none of this is enforceable.
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I do have a character named David in an upcoming story, but I might do something that's rare for me and repeat a name.
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Yeah, but can he come up with a story about a guy named Dave from Manchester? LOL I haven't forgotten about that!
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Take a look at what Mancunian says. If you read my early stuff you'll notice my stories had decent bones but the writing wasn't always crisp. A good editor and lots of practice helped me.
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Yep... LOL They're all working titles until I find something I really like. Those nine stories I tried to alternate titles between in-town locations and their travels. The alternate right now is Prospect Street. That's where Brett and Cesar's house is and where the opening chapter takes place. The second one moves around town a bit. A two chapter short story's what I've outlined.
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Ding, ding, ding... we have a winner LOL
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I'm a big believer in the healing power of music.
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We have quite a few talented writers on the site!
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In Mexico, CJ played jazz vocalists during the cocktail party and now Cesar chooses Segovia. Just you wait until an upcoming dinner party (not yet written) when we have something else playing. I recall hearing, a long time ago and not sure from who, that the main ingredient in Cuban music was the piano and in music from Spain it was the acoustic guitar. I played it up with Segovia and with El Toro y la luna. Unfortunately, I've listened to it so much while writing and since, that I find myself breaking into song at the weirdest times.
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I may have loaded the story with sap. Playing to the audience's an acceptable practice for authors and since I know y'all like sappy stuff... LOL By now, readers should know I don't like to repeat myself, so I constantly vary locations, events, and activities while retaining the smart ass comments and love at the core.
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Perish the thought of them spending their money on expensive designer suits. Their bank balance might take a hit.
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I loved writing Brett's line when he asks if he needs permission to dive off the rocks. He is a kid at heart. What's coming up? Dry land. Next chapter they go ashore in Palma, and CJ faces a revolt. LOL Check your private messages
