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Jared's low self-esteem makes me sad... I think he's just desperate for someone's affections even if it is just manipulative like Joel. What an ass-hat, for taking advantage of Jared's insecurities. Cole had better come and rescue him.
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I appreciate the effort Hint duly noted. It is sad. But the story just progressed in such a way.... inspiration is often such a stubborn force. thanks for the review
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awww... c'mon Brad's a nice guy... he's handsome and obviously makes Tyler happy.... Blake has issues... lots of them to do with control... But I'm so happy you care so much for Blake... I wish it could've ended better too.... I'm going to leave the story as it is right now. I might come back to it later but I'll be working on new stuff that'll be out soon, hopefully.
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The glass door swung open. Tyler stood in the doorway, uncertainty in his posture: his eyes darting around nervously, fingers fidgeting. “Uh… Blake –“ he started to say. “You’re being transferred,” I interrupted, my voice level, distant, cold. Surprise widened in his eyes, disappointment weighed down his usual smile. But in a moment, he recovered; a smile blossomed and his eyes twinkled. “Oh, okay. I’ll just tidy up your schedule for the rest of the week, Mr. Wyatt,” he chirped, a quiver b
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A gentle breeze caressed your face as strands of chestnut lifted, revealing your cool blue eyes. I watched as the sunlight filter through the leaves, casting shadows over your warm golden skin. I held back my fingers. The awakening of life hummed deeply in the mild air. Your gaze fell on me as I watched you watch me. The corners of your mouth lifted and a tingle shot straight through to my centre. Wrinkles spread in the corner of your eyes, your eyes glittering in the light. Fishtail lines, I
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Gay Short Film For 7/10
totallyy replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
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I just got started on this novel and I'm loving it. I'm not really one for chapter to chapter reviews and since I read the 40 chapters in one sitting, I thought I'd just save up all my gushing for the end. I thought it was really sweet. I'm just overall a puddle of gooey sappiness right here what with Scott and Noah. Thanks for sharing. I'm going to be heartbroken when it ends.
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Here we go again, I mused, a bunch of freshly graduated ass-kissing interns looking to snake their way up to the top. The minute hand of the clock on the wall inched its way to 8 a.m. Anytime now, I scowled, they’d ambush me with their crisp, ironed shirts and shined shoes. Some days, I hated my job. Voices and footsteps approached the door simultaneously. 7:51 a.m. The conversations lowered into a hushed whisper, ceasing altogether with the halted footsteps. 7:52 a.m. Hushed discussion
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Blake Wyatt's a hard ass when it comes to intern. He's sadistic and loves making life hard for them. Then, he's assigned Tyler, who manages to turn the tables on him.
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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FINALLY. I WAS DYING BACK THEN. You're still brilliant.
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I really want to punch Andy at this point of time. I've been trooping through the chapters like a soldier but I can't take the hurt anymore. I just want to smack him. And if anything bad happens to Matt, I swear I'm going to breakdown and cry. I'd probably end up rolling around in bed crying the next few days. D: All these horrible feelings. In other words, Adam, you're f*cking brilliant. I'm sorry for the language and sorry for the crazy review that's not much of a review. I just can't stand these feelings not coming out anymore. Now everyone thinks I belong in the loony bin.
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it's summer all day everyday over here in the tropics. I lie in bed, thrash around in the sheets and blankets and hope I don't die from the heat.
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James Savik's 10 tips for young men
totallyy commented on JamesSavik's blog entry in jamessavik's Blog
i concur with number 2 seeing as i speak and write mandarin! nothing's tackier than an inked word, miswritten. -
It was so hard to end this though. I wanted to type until blisters formed. But the focus of the story would shift completely. As for the second part, it's definitely a possibility. I'm kind of in love with Gabe and Alex.
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Thank you! It was fun writing this! Thanks for the feedback.
