I´ve read it several times I must confess. Awsome, awsome, awsome! Such endearing characters! Please tell me, what Ben wrote while hospitalized was ¨Joe¨ as in G. I. Joe, right? - I have to know!-
For me it was quite the ride. First anime, then manga, yaoi and somewhere along the way i stumbled upon gayauthors. Yours and ¨Second shot¨ (big fan of drama) are both in my top ten stories and I keep returning for more...and to think that not 5 years ago I was a bit of homophobe myself, at least regarding same sex action. Shame on me! Well, not anymore, though. I still get a bit weird out by too much PDOA, not matter the source or gender ...little steps I guess.
Sorry for the mistakes, but english in not my first language.
I really enjoy your writting. It makes you sink into the plot but keeps you afloat. Superb!
You must write a sequel, please!!!