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    Chapter 4

    pvtguy commented on Mikeymike88's story chapter in Chapter 4

    The quality continues. I am interested to see the unveiling of Marcus...so far he has been absolutely perfect. I want to see the not-so-perfect, but all too human, side. Keep 'em coming Michael!
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    Chapter 3

    pvtguy commented on Mikeymike88's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Thank goodness there are people like Marcus. They really do exist. Tony is to be commended for his drive and focus. Brian, while wanting more and wanting it NOW, is doing well to keep Tony's priorities at the forefront. Good character development. Compelling story. I am looking forward to the development of this story. Good job, Michael. Keep it coming.
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    Part 2

    pvtguy commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Part 2

    Accurate description of some small towns (not all though!) and this type of "Christianity". All in all, a great story. Keep them coming!
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    Part 1

    pvtguy commented on Rob Colton's story chapter in Part 1

    Forget the "ever child left behind" act...he was speaking cultural slang, not "white". Having been an educator for many years, I hear the difference daily. Anyhow, the story is great. You've created real characters and are great at showing the desires, emotions, etc. Wally's parents are stereotypical, but they are also real. I am looking forward to the development in this story.
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    Chapter 2

    pvtguy commented on Mikeymike88's story chapter in Chapter 2

    I love the development of the story. It is so much more real than the quick "electric" and gratuitous sex. The realization of Tony's sexuality and his coming to terms is presented well. I look forward to more chapters.
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