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Excellent presentation, Carlos. I love your ability to weave reality in with fiction. And it is always well researched. As for your comment about CJ may get pushy, duh!! He is, after all, the leader of the Squad. But he does it out of love!
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I wish I had both the financial and physical ability to travel and enjoy the places CJ and Ozzie are fortunate to experience. I love your story telling and engaging writing. Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Tony
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Chapter 114 Welcome to Cobourg
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 114 Welcome to Cobourg
I don't see it as a dark ending. I see it as his understanding that there's something wrong and the fear that it might well be terminal. Often people know within themselves long before a diagnosis is made. I just wish Don would open his mind and heart more rather than just fulfilling a promise to his sister. -
The fast movement in this volume has taken a bit of getting used to, but it also mirrors CJ's life. As usual, I love the characters and story lines. They inspire hope in spite of the BS coming from the swamp master. Thank you for that, Carlos. Tony
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Chapter 112 The Blues Brothers
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 112 The Blues Brothers
Might there be a tumor? Might this story turn out not to be a HEA? Thanks for posting more frequently, Dodger. Tony -
Carlos airways provides thought provoking stories. This one is no dIfferent. And, as usual, it is very well written.
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I love all the threads of this story. I'm eager to see how you resolve them. Tony
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I have been reading the first two volumes in order to prepare for this. Wonderful story...compelling characters...great writing! I am loving this journey. Tony
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Seems as though Lewis will be a one-stop shop...he'll be responsible for everything! Will he get the treehouse back for his brother? Would that even be desirable any more? Now on to the next chapter!
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It seems that Lewis' life is dictated from without. He just rolls along, doing an excellent job with whatever is assigned. Still, I really like learning all about the various areas he visits. It allows me to research these areas and learn even more. Thanks for your continued sharing of your talents, Q. Tony
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Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 103 The Painful Truth
All this time and still Robbie has not had serious counseling. With all he's had to endure he needs major help! I know I feel this way because I was a professional counselor, now retired, but he could still have drama without this unnecessary trauma. -
I am also touched that the yacht is named "Huon". I am eager to see what develops between Lewis and Sebastian. Great going!
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So Sebastian returns, but without the twins in tow. I like this continuity.
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Thanks. I love learning about Australia and environs through your writing. It has opened a wonderful new world to me. I am extremely grateful for this knowledge.
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II am not familiar with time zone differences of 1/2 hours. Every time zone I am familiar with is in one-hour intervals. The purchase of the glass-bottom boat seems odd for transport. Better for tourist uses. Seems like an imposition on a brother he has only known briefly. The story is good. The language - especially in conversations - is stilted at times. Patience is the virtue; Patients are people... Just minor observations. I do await the next adventure. Tony
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I am not familiar with time zone differences of 1/2 hours. Every time zone I am familiar with is in one-hour intervals. The purchase of the glass-bottom boat seems odd for transport. Better for tourist uses. Seems like an imposition on a brother he has only known briefly. The story is good. The language - especially in conversations - is stilted at times. Patience is the virtue; Patients are people... Just minor observations. I do await the next adventure. Tony
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The likelihood of a teen bonding with others - especially adults - when they've had no bonding as a child is very remote. I would like to think Ian has a chance, considering he does have a bond with Steve. Thanks for the conclusion to this story. Tony
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Is this the end? As usual, I hate leaving new "friends" behind. But also, as usual, I always enjoy your stories as I learn so much from them.
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I love the care he takes of Ernie, Emmy and family.
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At long last, another chapter! And, as always, very well done! May the next one appear after not so long an interval. Thanks, Dodger! Tony
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Was the decision to abandon the cruise come about too abruptly? The fire might simply have been minor. However, we'll see what new adventure awaits.
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Now you have me confused about the seasons: If it is Autumn up here, the winter would follow. Summer still follows spring in either hemisphere.
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I believe the comments to this, point cover all that I was thinking. I just hope the coming chapters have less time between postings. Great job, Dodger! Tony
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Another wonderful volume comes to an enviable end. If only I could enjoy just one of their travels...! Now that this volume has ended, it's on to complete the next 24 volumes! You make waiting for 2019 hopeful: meanwhile, we must live with the excrement produced by the Swamp folk. Tony
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A beautiful, charming, joyful chapter filled with authentic CJ and Owen. You've done quite well with this one!!! Tony
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