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Over The Rainbow • Part VII
pvtguy commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part VII
Thank you for allowing me to visit and experience vicariously through CJ a place I will never have the chance to visit in my lifetime. The history you teach through the conversations and narratives are so exciting. Now on to the drama of life's injection into plans. Thanks for sharing your talent once again. Tony -
The most important healing is in the mind an attitude. Huon seems more at peace, though time will tell.
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A Tibetan healing retreat....very interesting!!! Tony
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Huon's health seems very precarious. I do hope he regains strength and is able to live a long and productive life. However, I do see the possibility of an early demise... Tony
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Such a powerful chapter!! Thanks for sharing. Tony
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Over The Rainbow • Part V
pvtguy commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part V
What you have done is to create such a compelling story. I have terrible separation anxiety when stories end... -
Over The Rainbow • Part V
pvtguy commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part V
As I look forward to the next 25 volumes of the CJ saga, I certainly appreciate and enjoy each chapter. Such excellent writing! Tony -
Great chapter. The setups for upcoming chapters only serve to keep me eagerly anticipating future postings. Your talent for telling a great story is most impressive!!! Tony
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Unfortunately, greed and other evils will surface their ugly heads with "progress". When people have little but each other and have to work hard to survive, good memories are made. I hope lost innocence doesn't ruin the good that exists now, but I'm afraid history proves otherwise. Thanks for continuing this story. Tony
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Over The Rainbow • Part IV
pvtguy commented on Carlos Hazday's story chapter in Over The Rainbow • Part IV
Your writing is exceptional. I feel as though I am in the midst of each scene, observing and participating. You give life to each character. Thanks so much. Tony -
All I can say to the last sentence is "Wanna' bet?" I'm still amazed at the stories where someone so young is so rich, so knowledgeable in business, and so out of touch with their own nature. But that's what keeps me reading. Keep the chapters coming! Tony
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I thought I was familiar with the story. It still amazes me that an eleven year old has such a business acumen. It certainly doesn't apply to any eleven year old people I have known in my lifetime, but perhaps they are more advanced where you are. Otherwise, I always enjoy your stories.
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Lots of smiles and warm feelings. Loved the snowball fight. However, I do believe Eric "exerted" himself rather than "excreted" himself, that is unless e dirtied his pants! Love this story. Tony
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Chapter 22 Matters of the heart
pvtguy commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Chapter 22 Matters of the heart
I'm so glad you're continuing the story. It's very well done. Hope the next chapters appear more quickly. -
Thanks for returning to this story. I was having Makarovia withdrawal! So much is conveyed through this story: education about the Holocaust, understanding and tolerance of others who live differently from others, questions about religion, the nature of love. I can also see the process of working through grief and I can only offer my admiration for the love and life you have been blessed with. Tony
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There is a depth to this chapter that shows a growing maturity in Robbie. Maybe we could see an adoption celebration after all. Tony
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I agree with all the above and am eager to see what happens with Stephen. Will he become another member of the family? Thanks for continuing this story!!! I love all the characters.
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If a guy hadn't liked doing "that" with a female, none of us would be here to say "ewww"! Just sayin'...
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Another excellent tome of the CJ saga. It is so well written. One can imagine being almost physically present in every scene. Can't wait for the next volume. Thanks Carlos.
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Chapter 88 Throwing Your Life Away
pvtguy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 88 Throwing Your Life Away
In his own way, Don is trying to protect Robbie even though his thinking is not totally accurate or supportive. Robbie will face obstacles born of ignorance and prejudice, but pretending to be other than he is will prove far more destructive. I am worried about his drug overdose. -
Ok. The plot is thickening. Intrigue...excitement.
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Great start! You are so colorful in your writing that I can picture myself right there with them.
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Why do I have the feeling that all will not go smoothly? Yet, all will work out.
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Thanks for continuing this story. I'm eager to see it's development.
