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  1. pvtguy
    Another fine story to add the the Hugillverse! This story has a wide range of characters, subplots, drama, and humor. Superb writing keeps one moving from chapter to chapter with easy flow. A must read!
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    I find this chapter not so much an ending as in all things wrapped up, but a stopping point where we see the possibility of the commune growing together in their individual crafts and talents as well as the "family" they have formed. Excellent writing and a thoroughly engaging story! I look forward to the next!
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    Bitterness can eventually damage relationships and the person himself if not dealt with. It's a shame that Phil ended in this manner, though his feeling of total abandonment from his family gave him no hope for the future. I always believe reconciliation is possible, though resumption of the former relationships would not have to be resumed. Forgiveness will ultimately be beneficial to all concerned. I find this a particularly sad chapter.
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    So, the Panther turd is returned to its proper place. The characters take central position, showing their growth as individuals and as a supportive group of friends. While I hate to see the story end, I am ready for more stories from the Hugillverse!
  5. pvtguy
    I agree with @drsawzall: I'm not ready for this story to end just yet (if ever, lol!). I truly couldn't care less if the Nimrud Panther was ever found! I would love to see the eventual dick-tionary!
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    I really hate to see this story end but guess it must. Might the Nimrud Panther be found during the small barn remodel? I think the collection of pictures would make a nice bonus to see...
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    Pericles & PJ

    pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Pericles & PJ

    The "mystery" of the lost item has certainly taken a backseat to this wonderful story of another growing community of supportive members! Great writing! And I second a story featuring Joss and PJ!
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    Drawing class

    pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Drawing class

    Nothing more to add after the wonderful comments made already! Brilliant writing and creativity, @Robert Hugill!
  9. pvtguy
    Stunningly beautiful! And if I may, I hope you realize how much you are loved too!
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    Moving with Gus

    pvtguy commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Moving with Gus

    I second @CincyKris comment about Lewis and Charlie: their relationship is building slowly on a solid foundation of friendship. Both are learning to be vulnerable and real!
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    Chapter 47

    pvtguy commented on Andre Delport's story chapter in Chapter 47

    You have crafted a family that seems like our next-door-neighbors. Their wealth is used to provide top-tier experiences for all their guests without denying themselves a very comfortable home. Throughout, all their employees are considered equal and respected as such. This chapter illustrates this very pointedly in their discussions with all the various employees with whom they speak. That 10 years has passed since the origin of Belle Catherine seems like the blink of an eye! Great writing and story telling!
  12. pvtguy
    Loving the "growing pains" in the community: learning boundaries and respect for each other. Wonderfully warm chapter!
  13. pvtguy
    A delightful chapter! Things are coming together nicely for the community - but knowing that they may never know the full extent of the crime network and accepting that fact.
  14. pvtguy
    I love the mixing of real places and events with the fictional ones. It provided a nice vicarious day-trip on an otherwise mundane day here. I believe that Tom is truly trying to be his own man rather than his step-dad's son. It might seem a bit late in life to become independent, but it truly isn't! He has found an accepting community where he is allowed and encouraged to be himself and supported all along the way!
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    Choice

    pvtguy commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Choice

    And I get that! I really do!
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    I've met this stop light on many occasions - they sent it to Orlando,FL and surroundings. It seems to sense where I'm going and swaps places with its friends... Well done story!
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    Choice

    pvtguy commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Choice

    Initially, love is based more on emotion, attraction, that certain "je ne sais quoi" that draws you to a person. However, in my humble opinion, love does require decision to stay when things get rough but two decide to work through together because each values the other. So, guess I'm saying it takes both to form, enhance, and maintain love. Beautiful writing!
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    In line with the observation by @Summerabbacat re: Patsy, I was eating lunch and almost spit with this description: Bobbie, by contrast, had an engaging manner, but was rather a shapeless blob of a man. Absolutely hilarious! The story, while surrounded by all sorts of crime, still keeps a wonderful focus on the relationships of Louis' band of merry men! Great job, @Robert Hugill.
  19. pvtguy
    I am certainly looking forward to and glad there are 10 more chapters!
  20. pvtguy
    I've had a very busy week and got behind on my reading. Agree with all the above comments. All the main characters are growing into a wonderfully supportive community. Beautiful!
  21. pvtguy
    A powerful tale about what a child actor faced and finally stood up to thanks to the support and love which began accidentally but grew into a powerful redemptive force. This story is filled with wonderful characters, drama, humor, dedication, and belief in a better way to deal with child actors, wrapped in a powerful love story.
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    I started reading this late and at times felt like reading a Dickensian styled novel: lots of words which created very present scenarios where the reader was truly the proverbial fly on the wall, observing it all! Each chapter was full of emotion and depth. Looking forward to more stories, @Nuno R.F.C. Rendeiro.
  23. pvtguy
    "What I set out to tell was a very specific kind of love story about how this unexpected love saved a lost man and gave him a new, genuine life." While your original intent was to focus on Liam's growth, you also accomplished the same thing for Hudson and Mateo. All three came to find their genuine lives.
  24. pvtguy
    The story continues at a wonderful pace with just the amount of intrigue interspersed! There is serious material, humor mixed in, and wonderful characters! Love it!
  25. pvtguy
    Such a lovely story! I get hungry for cake each time I read a chapter, lol! Next chapter with Charlie and Graham should be quite interesting.
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