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Caz Pedroso

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  1. Carlos "You're just a big teddy bear, aren't you?" Carlos looked up and grinned at Daniel's comment. Snuggled together on a couch in a nearby room they’d found, Carlos was close to dozing off. His heart had almost stopped when he’d entered that room, but his medic training had kicked in and since Daniel was yelling for his brother Carlos had seen to Toby first. The cleaning crew had unceremoniously kicked them out of the room as soon as they arrived, with orders to not leave the building. Ol
  2. I've read all these, but it was a while ago. Will have to read them again before the discussion day.
  3. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 43

    He's not out yet, but nearly. As for the cleaner service, i wonder what they charge??? Thanks for the review
  4. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 43

    Toby will always run in head first i think. And as for hte rest, all will be revealed Thanks for the comments
  5. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 42

    But, will there be a rescue or just more captives??? Thanks for the review
  6. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 42

    Sorry to miss weeks. I just get into a routine and something happens to throw my schedule out the window. I will always promise to do my best, that is all anyone can do. Thanks for the comments
  7. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 41

    Good intentions or not, people don't like to think they're being watched. I think a long talk is in Toby's future. Thanks for the review
  8. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 40

    We all have secrets.... I think Daniel will get around to asking sometime very soon. As long as he is able to ask, of course Thanks for the review
  9. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 40

    I'm glad i gave you something to read when you needed it. As for the footsteps, they could be Thanks for the comments
  10. I'll admit it is actually something that could have happened when i was younger. Now, i write everything down - at least twice. Thanks for the review
  11. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 16

    is what i think of the grandparents. I'll leave what you think is under the tape trying to get out up to you. Good Chapter.
  12. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 4

    Alex needs to learn what 'Get Lost!' means. Great as always and I look forward to the next chapter
  13. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 3

    Saint Nathan sounds wonderful, and sweet. Alex on the other hand sounds more and more like a stalker. Can't belive I nearly missed this chapter. On to the next
  14. I wonder what the punishment was for hi partner when they got home? Hmm, may put that in another prompt sometime. Thanks for the review.
  15. If they looked half as good as my imagination had them looking, they looked great Thanks for the review
  16. Toby Toby ran ahead of the others and ignored Carlos’ call that they should all stick together. He cleared room after room until he heard faint voices. He found the door and wasted no time in kicking it open. He took bare moments to take in the situation. Daniel was tied to what looked like some sort of metal medical bed. His hands and feet were chained and he look pissed. He took aim at the jerk who held a whip ready over his brother. “Drop it and maybe you’ll live,” he snarled at the stra
  17. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 34

  18. Caz Pedroso

    Chapter 34

    Sorry for the late reply, I don't know how I missed thus great review... Sorry but the limit stays for the entire story, I will however try to ensure I miss as few weeks as possible. Thanks for the review
  19. Caz Pedroso

    Where am I?

    Thank you. She did finally write something. It will interesting to see what the teacher says. I may continue, we'll see what time i have. Thanks for the review
  20. Caz Pedroso

    Where am I?

    I hope so too Timmie. I may continue it and sort out the scary bit Thanks for the review
  21. Caz Pedroso

    Where am I?

    We'll have to see. Depends on what the English teacher thinks of it I may continue it when i have time. Also, I love a man who knows how to 'carrying on as such'. Just ask my husbands, he's always carrying on LOL Thanks for comments
  22. Caz Pedroso

    Where am I?

    Maybe, Maybe not.... Thanks for the comments
  23. I'm always sweet Oh, you meant the story... Thanks for the review
  24. “When a cold wind blows, it chills you chills you to the bone. But, there’s nothing…” I looked up at a faint noise. “Who’s there?” I called out. I paused the DVD player and listened carefully. I was sure I’d heard something, even with the TV up loud. The Muppet in a blue sweater stood frozen on the screen as I strained to hear even the quietest sound. I slowly rose and moved to the window. Snow covered the ground outside making the view look like a picture-perfect postcard. I sta
  25. Thank you.mI am glad you liked the story. This one is on my list to rewrite and expand, so I will keep your comment in my note book. Thanks for the review
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