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Caz Pedroso
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Hopefully, he won't panic. Then he'll be able to use that brain of his. Thanks for the review
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We'll all just have to wait and see. Thanks for the review
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As you say, worse and better all in one. Hopefully Toby will get his finger out of his and get to trying to use his own resources to find Daniel. Thanks for the review
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Ah, wouldn't it be good if you could attach music to stories/chapters As for if he gets hurt, I'm afraid the depends on how fast Toby and the others can stop bickering, and blaming each other, and get to trying to find him. Thanks for the review
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Daniel Awareness returned to Daniel slowly. He blinked his eyes and started to panic when he realized he was wearing a blindfold. He tried to raise an arm to pull it off and found he couldn’t. The clank of metal told him he was chained to something, somewhere, somehow. Where was he? How had he got where ever he was? Who had brought him here? Slowly, previous events started to make themselves known. He remembered yelling at Toby then running out the fire exit of the club. Entering the park c
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He was tempted, but Toby is still his brother, and Daniel is still not really that confident. Of course, when/if he sees Toby again, he may have to decide between hugging or punching him. Thanks for the review
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Sorry, I ran out of words. I'm blaming the word limit and hiding till next week Thanks for the review
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Toby is very protective of his brothers, but I also think he's feeling very guilty about not being there to help sooner. He is over compensating and I'm sure you're right, he may end up driving them back into a bad state or even make them leave him altogether. Thanks for the review
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Our Christmas tree went up today. We have a fake one as real ones are too expensive and messy.
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Yay, for Josh getting there. But, I think the road is still going to be hard going. Undoing all the lies the boy has been told is going to be long, hard work. I hope the police are the right kind and that they're gentle with him. Great chapter and i look forward towhat happens next.
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Happy Birthday Gary
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Happy Birthday Hope you have/had a great day
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Daniel Daniel ran for a couple of blocks before had to slow to catch his breath. How could Toby? How could he embarrass him like that? That kiss had been magnificent and Toby had had to spoil it—again. He looked around and saw he’d ended up near the entrance to a park. Deciding he needed space and quiet he headed inside the park. The moonlight was reflecting off the trees and casting shadows over the ground. As he went deeper the darkness became more complete, the trees getting denser and blo
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Daniel Daniel was dead. He must be, because he felt like he was in heaven. Carlos’ lips felt soft and his tongue…oh God…his tongue felt wonderful exploring Daniel's mouth as though he had every right—which of course he did. Daniel melted against the strong chest of his master. He felt safe and, dare he even think it? Loved. Carlos Carlos had to keep from pinching himself. His boy was melded to him like a second skin and the moans being fed into his mouth were arousing him beyond anything
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When will Josh break down the door and beat the out of that ? A well written chapter and I look forward to the next.
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I'm sure they'll get back to the interesting bits, at some point Thank you for the review
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Trouble? In one of my stories? Hopefully we'll find out next week. As long as work stays at the current level, I'll be fine. Thanks for the review
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HaHa, Loved it. I hope you include Imp's reaction to waking up next to Angie in the next story. I love this pairing and the way they grow closer and learn to work together to both reach their goals. Looking forward to another story of them
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Silas Silas slowed his pace as he approached Oliver’s office. What if Oliver had changed his mind? What if the Dom no longer wanted to put up with a damaged sub like him? What if…? “Boy, are you going to stand out there all night?” Oliver's voice echoed in the long hallway and Silas noticed he was standing outside Oliver’s office. How long had he been standing there panicking? “Now, Boy,” Oliver ordered, causing Silas to almost run into the room. He took in the room with a quick glance and s
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I totally agree Timmie. Sometimes people are better at putting strong locks on those mind boxes. But, even the strongest lock breaks occasionally. Thank you for the reviews
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Being afraid of the unknown is how I decided what to put for the bad guys title. Oliver and Carlos can only help if the boys let them. Here's hoping. Thanks for the reviews
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Thank you, and yes you're right. Some things you never forget. Thanks you for the reviews
