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Caz Pedroso
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Two months later Silas “Are you sure you’re not rushing into this?” Daniel asked for the tenth time making Silas roll his eyes. “Bro, we’ve spent our lives either rushing ahead of our peers or being held captive. I nearly lost you not long ago and it brought home to me that we need to grab every moment because we don’t know what will happen tomorrow. I know Oliver loves me and I know I can trust him. I also know I love him and I need him. He stills the restlessness in me. With him
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Very well written
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Thank you moggy, I'm glad you like it so far Here's hoping Thank you chris Thank you all for your comments. I hope to post again really soon, but I have some off site work to catch up on too. 's to you all
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Daniel Daniel watched as Oliver eagerly dragged Silas off the stage. He was happy for his brother, he really was. But, he couldn’t help but be jealous. Even though he knew he wasn’t ready for that kind of advancement in his and Carlos’ relationship, it didn’t stop him being a bit envious. “That will be us one day, boy.” Carlos’ whisper sent a shiver down his spine. “When you’re ready it will be you on your knees accepting my collar and then standing beside me as we marry. Until then I
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Who listens to the listener?
Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Who listens to the listener?
It's actually based on a true experience, i just made it a bit more melodramtic to make a point. I'm glad i could infuse those few words with emotion, it is a wonderful complement for an author to get. Yep, been there done that. It wasn't a death i needed their help with, but it was important and everyone was too busy. I'm sure one of his friends will suddenly wonder why he's gone off grid and call to find out. Then he'll be inundated with well meaning people trying to help. Thanks for commenting everyone 's to all of you. -
Wonderful, and very well said
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Very good, I liked the flow and the imagery. Also the last line This seems to give hope. Along the lines of if at first you don't succeed, try, try again. Very well written
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A beautiful and loving memory. Thanks for sharing it
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Happy Birthday
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Who listens to the listener? Sniffling I hit the speed dial. “Hey, dahling, it’s a really bad time to talk right now. I’m just heading out for a date with that dreamboat I told you about. Thanks for listening last week and helping me decide. Gotta go, ciao.” A long tone told me Larry had hung up and I just stood there staring at my phone. I grabbed some tissues and hit the next number. “This is Carter,” came the distracted answer. I could hear tapping in the background
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Wonderful, inspiring, and loving. Very well written
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I'm glad you found each other and make each other happy
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Wonderful, and inspiring
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Oh yes, i think everyone would like a power like that. Could come in very handy
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It starts with a beating
Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in It starts with a beating
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Welcome to Unison Island
Caz Pedroso commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Welcome to Unison Island
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I've fixed that now too. I knew i shouldn't have tried to do this while finishing my other story, but i didn't want to miss another week. I'll be more careful next week. Thanks for all your help
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for all the comments they are always appreciated. Especially if you see anything I've missed. 's to all.
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this is what I get for posting too quickly. Two secs and I'll sort it. Thanks for the heads up
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Daniel Daniel looked around the club. How could everything still look the same when he felt so different? In a few months, his life had changed beyond recognition. He no longer had to fear anyone coming after him. He and Silas were safe and had new Masters who loved them and wanted what was best for them. Daniel watched as Oliver demonstrated the right way to give an erotic spanking. Silas was obviously in heaven and only connected to earth via his Master’s hand landing at even interva
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The way it puts you in the characters places/minds is amazing.
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Lol, yes and the profits and collections from the pride events get shared between several charities.
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I tried to think of something different to say about this than what i usually say about your poems, but then i decided to not mess with the truth. This is as always wonderfully written. The words are powerful and the story they tell is clear. Especially with the happy outcome. A short story in a few powerful, emotional words.
