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Chapter 5 - Reuniting of Souls
7letcher commented on Jordn87's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Reuniting of Souls
such a great idea for a story but..... Brady was forgiven much too quickly. Nes tried to kill himself for God's sake. This could have been developed much much more. Nes should have been very fearful about letting Brady back into into his life. Very fearful. -
ok...ok.. Let me say this. when a writer can reach through my computer screen and let me cry until my nose clog and my head hurt then you know you have found a fucking good writer. That scene with the mother in the supermarket did me in. wow.
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Wow! You made me burn dinner! This was so engaging i forgot i was cooking. oh well.
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At the end there i was like, "Bumbo clawwt!! lol (hope there is no one here who understands my cussing so no one will be offended. LOL. Nice.
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csr feature January CSR Feature: Fun with a Fanfiction Story by Laura S. Fox
7letcher commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Thank you soooo much Laura. I am in Quarantine in Jamaica and you made it so much easier. your story was just fantastic. i am gonna go read every damn thing i can find that you wrote. By the way, i have not signed in for a few years now. i did just to make a comment. -
Why don't you write anymore?? You are so goooooooood! Please start writing again or if you are but not on this site please tell me where i can find you. I really miss you.
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You are too good of a writer, i have not seen anything from you in a while. Whats happening?
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I love this story. It is so well written and I really love the guys.
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Why is it going so fast?
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I wish, wish, wish that you would complete this story. It is sooooooooooooo damn good!
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Honestly, i started reading this and i was like, 'yes, a good read!', then it started to go south. The characters just became unbelievable in the end. Tracy, for one became the nanny for everyone's kids after they treated him like shit. It also became too 'syrupy'. My God, everybody loved everybody and although there were toddlers about everybody behaved.
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I read this story to see a little bit more of Davis and Ellis but i fell in love with this story. I think it is finished here.
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Dane’s POV He felt as if his world was imploding as he looked at the woman sitting and staring at him. He had told her time and time again never to come to his house, yet here she sits with that fucking silly, innocent, but conniving look on her face. Fuck! Fuck! Fuck! Nate can’t know about this! Not yet anyway! I need just a little more time! The thoughts kept swirling in his head, threatening to make him temporarily insane. He then remembered his short conversation with Nate. He was the one
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“Nathaniel George Farafax! You better stop averting your eyes! Do you want me to take you down to the clinic so that Nurse Timull can do this?” His mom tapped her shoe on the tiled floor in an impatient way as she held up the chart which showed a high level of grossness, in Nathaniel’s opinion. The chart showed ass holes in many different shades, sporting all sorts of warts, sores and ….just gross! “Mom, I know all about STIs and how to be safe”. His face being permanently red as his mom took c
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When the Christmas break was over Nathaniel started the year high on his overpowering feelings towards Dane. There were days when Nathaniel felt that it just could not get any better and Dane topped himself yet again; surprising Nathaniel with simple things that sent him over the moon. Even his mom was softening towards him. “Hmm, he is caring, I’ll admit that”, she observed, when she came home to see Dane taking care of him when he got sick. She was even civil to him on occasions as he was
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Nathaniel’s eighteenth birthday passed with him and his mom having lunch together. Nathaniel had quite forcefully told his mom that he did not want another ‘surprise party’, in which she invited his ‘friends’ from school to help him celebrate. Thankfully this year she had listened. Nathaniel had also warned her that he was going out later so she was not too worried that he was going to spend the evening of his birthday alone while she went to work. Dane told him to dress up and they went out
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Nathaniel's good mood lasted for the whole night. He was singing in the shower, smiling while re-reading Dane's messages, touching his lips while smiling and worst of all he laid on his back, on his bed, and replayed the conversation that they had in the car, over and over again in his head. At some point he forced himself to open his Geography textbook and got some studying done for his exams tomorrow. Dane and his sexy kisses were never too far from his mind. Nathaniel woke up thirty m
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O.K, O.K, deep breath, just calm the fuck down. Nathaniel listened to his internal monologue. He took deep breaths and tried to clear his head of the Cab.....no, Dane, he reminded himself. He moved away from the door and walked briskly to the refrigerator where he gulped down water. He, Nathaniel George Farafax, made out with a taxi driver who he had met only a few minutes before!! Oh my God!! What the fuck was going on with him, anyway? It seems as if the closer he got to eighteen the mo
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"Ho... How.. How did you..........?" Nathaniel used his hands to finish the question. "How did I know your name? Well, you can thank your mom for that. She either thinks i am deaf or do not speak the English language". He finished with a wide smile which did strange things to Nathaniel's insides. "I know a lot more, but i can't give away all of my secrets on the first meeting, now can I?" He licked his lips and glanced at Nathaniel's for a second, he then turn his attention back to control
