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Chapter 2 "Bonnie is all set for tonight, she has her rug on and I have fed and watered her," Logan said breaking the silence after a good few minutes. "Thanks, mate, so no camping trip eh" I replied, "Nah, the weather wasn't going to be very good, and one of the guys was being an ass, which was really pissing me off, and making me regret deciding not to come with you" Logan replied. "Will you be ok to be my groom, when I am preparing and finishing the competition?" I asked my brother, "
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Chapter 1 “Right Mum, I am off now, see you in a few days’ time” I called out, as I headed towards the back door of the family home on the South East outskirts of Perth. “Ok dear, take care and drive carefully” Mum called back, “Will do Ma, and thanks for putting up with me, this past few years, I do appreciate it and I love you” I said at the doorway, and I stopped to look back at Mum, who had tears welling in her eyes. Seeing this, I dropped my bag, rushed to her, and wrapped
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Harrison Alpike is a talented young man, who worked hard with his studies, as well as doing his Farrier apprenticeship alongside his father. When his father dies suddenly, he finds himself the man of the house, with a widowed mother and younger brother. To help cope with the stresses of home and his university studies to become a Doctor of Veterinary Science, he decides to participate in a rodeo, which is a 6-hour drive North of home.
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No it’s the typewriter font which is that is hard to read.
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I can’t read this chapter, as the text is all haywire, can you fix it please
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Yes thanks for the spelling correction, I knew it looked wrong
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Mikey, was that you?
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You missed the $1000 fine issued by Lloyd
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Yes you did, but he keeps delaying his arrival
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Would have been karki shorts
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Ouch! Who just kicked me?
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Understood, over and out
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Thanks for comments, my editor has seen your comments, I will speak to him (give him a verbal spanking) in the next few days. it is very difficult to find editors willing to assist, as it is done voluntarily, I have given a call out a number of time, but rarely get a response. Q
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Still writing it, but I have submitted a story for the coming out theme for pride month.
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Thankyou everyone for comments
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Thanks for that info
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“Coral Bay, isn’t that were they had a cyclone that went over them recently?” Tim asked, and I chuckled at this. “You are right about the cyclone going over the coast, but it went straight over the top of the station, as a category 5, and that is one experience, I don’t want to deal with ever again” I replied. “Wow, I didn’t know it was that strong, we have had cyclones here sometimes, but no higher than a category two, that must have been really scary” Tim said. “Yes, it was, but w
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“Yes, I will leave as soon as I am off the phone, thank you” Davis replied, and as soon as the call ended, we started making plans. The boys could use my room, as it has two double beds in it, and I quickly packed up my things, said goodbye to Davis and Alistair, and caught a taxi to another hotel, and with their hotel located near the botanical gardens at the south end of the CBD, I called ahead and booked a room at a hotel at the north end of the CBD. Near the Roma Street Parklands. O
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Thanks, only three chapters to go. Already stared on writing a new story.
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“Oh, I am sorry boss, do you want me to leave you on your own?” Matt asked. “No please stay, it was some news that was quite unexpected. I thought I was a widower with no children, now it appears that I have two sons, who are living with relatives of Sarah’s in Queensland, and if my maths is correct, they would be about 5 & 7 years old now” I said. “Wow, firstly your brother in law and nephew turn up out of the blue, and now this” Matt said quietly. When I checked the envelope
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I then need my house to be thoroughly cleaned, as in spotless, as that will be the accommodation for the guests, I will have to bunk down in the loungeroom in the apartment, the same with the spare room in Dave and Sue’s place, so as to accommodate the pilot. I won’t be up until tomorrow morning, so you will have to greet Mr De Paul, his personal assistant and pilot at the airfield, and I want you to be very respectful, as he is related to the Grimaldi family, and whatever they ask for you
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Also, once all the rubbish has been cleared away, I will need you to do a weekly inspection of the larger farm, and Alistair will be able to attend the local district high school” I suggested. “That would be great thanks Lloyd, you really are an angel” Davis said, and I smiled, at that last bit. “Err, that is what Alister called you, for literally saving our lives, as we would have gone hungry and as well as been homeless” Davis added. “Well we are family, so we have to help each ot
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The wife left her husband, she asked to be taken to the church. the lease was ending anyway, so the eviction was just a little earlier than a month.
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“Wonderful, do you mind if I tag along, as I also own Galena Estate, on Brooks Road, the land that he has been leasing for twenty years, and I haven’t seen it since I was 11 years old.” I replied. “That is why I came looking for you, and I have asked the Shire Building and Health inspector to tag along as well, as I have had a number of complaints about the children that live there” the Sergeant replied smiling. I text Davis to let him know that I will be busy for a while, and to just re
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