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Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
Puppilull commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 344 Why didn’t you just tell me that?
Two chapters in one weekend! Nice! Can't wait for the boys to get to the next phase. Who will be the first to ask the other out? -
So happy to find more of this story here than on your blog! I really like Harvest and plan to get the new and improved edition soon. This story looks to be just as good. I am such a sucker for these capturor - captive stories and add a bit of Resistance is futile and I am hooked!
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I really liked this story and didn't even want to go to work today, because I just wanted to keep reading. I think you created a wondeful little universe and the characters were well written. I especially liked that you let their relationship develop slowly. No insta-love. It made it much more believable. Looking forward to more from you (and Kayden and Damien)!
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Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Puppilull commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 213 You want me to do what?
Thanks for the sequel! Self-contained, compact and concise chapters that form a story nonetheless and are based on prompts - just say to yourself "Challenge accepted!" -
Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Puppilull commented on Timothy M.'s story chapter in Prompt 352 I can’t believe you asked him that!
Nce going! And it's your first time! You know it only gets better with practice... Immeditely, I want to read more. What is is with these high school love stories that is so captivating? Oh, yeah right, young, beautiful guys in love getting busy. What's not to like? -
I read this story on Lit a while ago and since then I have stalked you a bit to see if you will finish it. It is such a great story. I hope you find inspiration and time to get it done. I'm impatient, but I would rather the story be written well instead of quickly.
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The Death of a Good Dog
Puppilull commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in The Death of a Good Dog
You have to google Ladyhawke! A masterpiece of 80's movies! If you like Rutger Hauer that is. Did I just reveal that I am indeed ancient? -
Oh, new story! Excited! I think the flashbacks mixed very well, since you used the words as bridges (if you get what I mean). I kept thinking Ladyhawke while I read it. But my imagination often runs away with me.
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Well, now you have me longing for fall and summer has just begun. I feel sorry for Miah being so helpless, but if he just accepts it he seems to be in very good hands. And "gentle giant" cracked me up.
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Oh, the Hives! I like the Scandinavian references you make from time to time. Like Pilkvist. Your stories are so good.
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Have been away without internet for the weekend (gasp, the horror) and had made sure to get my Rob-fix by buying An American lamb in Europe. My cunning plan backfired when I couldn't stop reading once I started... Saturday was torturous but now I'm back to civilisation and everything is alright! Great chapter! I won't even try to speculate what is going to happen between who. So many possibilities! You can write this series for ever. I know I will be reading!
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I read the story over the weekend and I must say I was totally captivated. Of course it was frustrating when they were acting like idiots at times, but I had to remind me they were very young to deal with this. Bisexual and polyamorous... Difficult stuff when you are just 18. I would really like a follow up, epilogue to the epilogue so to speak, just to see how they solve this puzzle. Because I for one am sure they will. If I can't have that, just keep writing. You have a true gift. Thank you!
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Sitting here on my balcony, sun is shining, got a nice cup of coffee and some chocolate AND a new chapter. Life is good! Great chapter. Little Wylie tugged at my mommy heart strings. Poor baby!
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Oh, that's just mean! No, just kidding! I'm curious as hell (ha, ha...). Good chapter!
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You seem to have a Scandinavian following in me and Timothy. I really liked this chapter, even if it made me feel so sorry for Jed and Buzz. I trust in you, Rob, to make it all right. Thanks again for sharing your talent!
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Speaking of candy, as another reviewer did, in Sweden we have something called lördagsgodis or Saturday candy. Kids are often only allowed candy once a week, often Saturday. This helps save their teeth and reduce nagging at the grocery store. But what can mummy do when the kids are snacking away and no one is trying to seriuosly hurt someone for about 30 minutes? Well, Rob, Enforcer has become my lördagsgodis! Yum, yum!
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I loved this story so much. To me, it was really a sweet story, even if one of the main characters is from Hell. I kept wondering if you are Dutch, because Vruuaska's name just makes me think "Through ash" since aska is Swedish for ash and sometimes Dutch is similar. Also, Vruu got me thinking of vrouw or wife. V is sort of a caring but scary wife to Atoki.
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Somehow, this song made me think of Kia and Jem. Kia better get his act together, or Jem just might say "I've had enough!" Love the story!
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Yeay! Such a great chapter! Luckily, Saturday is only three days away. Hopefully we will get a peak into Buzz's head next!
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I love your writing, so I wasn't surprised that I was drawn in to this story immediately. I would think one more chapter from Miah's POV would be interesting, just to get to know him even better. If nit, I think Lisco is the more interesting of the two shifters. Funny you wrote gentle giant above, because that was my thought too. And for me that always gets me to think Lennie and I am more into brain than brawn. Maybe I'm judging Moshe too soon, but Lisco just seems more appealing to me. Seems I am a minority, though. Anyway you go will be fine. Just update!
