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Oh, this was good, really good! At least Alex didn't stab him on the spot. Must mean something. I curious how they will handle this. It kind of makes you wonder about Luca's background...
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I'll even pack boots! He is just too sweet. Damien will have some fight in the morning.
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Come on, people! All smooth sailing won't be any fun. We need a bit of drama or the story will suffocate in cuteness. Besides, jealousy is not so far out there. It's part of almost any relationship. When things turn everyday, it's easy to doubt yourself and your partner. They will overcome! Have faith! If nothing else, just for the make up nookie...
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Perhaps she had a soft spot for small people that were always underestimated. Ha, ha! Alex would be so pissed by that! Could Ysabel have a heart after all? Good for Luca to stand up to her. Can't wait to read Alex's reaction when he shows up.
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It's so great that you have started a new series about these two. It will be nice to see how they move from the falling in love phase to the relationship phase. Somehow I think Damien might get to meet Kayden's panther up close and personal pretty soon. I thought Damien could use a little song to go with his current mood:
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I think I hated reading that just as much as you writing it, but I sort of saw it coming. There really was no way for them both to make it to Alex.
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What a sweet chapter! Maybe someone is feeling a bit lovey-dovey and it's spilling in to the story..? I think it's easy to forget that Alex is very young, even if he is quite deadly. His innocense is really adorable.
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This chapter gave me the sudden idea that this is turning out to be a ménage, with Alex in the middle. Maybe that is what he needs deep down, to give up control once in a while to Carlin but at the same time regain his sense of being in charge by also having Luca. I agree with Faxity. You are really funny!
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How can anyone complain about your chapters being too long? I just want more, more, MORE! Great chapter as always.
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Funny you should write that about Luca. I thought he would be a passing character, mostly to show that Alex isn't a total douche, so I was really surprised when he was in the opening of this chapter. It's going to be interesting to see where he will fit in in this story I assumed would be primarily about Alex and Carlin. Luca seems a little soft to hold Alex's interest, but who knows? He might be a lot more than meets the eye.
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Prompt 387 - New World
Puppilull commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Prompt 387 - New World
Suddenly, Rudolph's christmas makes sense. Oh, wait, it doesn't and neither does this! You can really go from the most sad (like The Anniversary) to the very silly and still every word seems geniune and true. -
When you turn up the intensity, you really turn it up! Great chapter, even if I'm on needles and pins here waiting for the next chapter. Good thing Nelson didn't kill Carl. He should have to live with what he's done. All alone, rotting away somewhere...
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Oh, wow! I hope Matt thought to bring Nelson! Can hardly wait untill tomorrow!
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The world of Craftingmom -inhabited by the scummiest scumbags ever... This chapter made me think of this song: I'm not a violent person, but where is Samuel L Jackson when you need him..? He would go medieval on his ass!
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I've read all the chapters now after New Years and I have to say it's a wild ride. Tears and laughter, terror and friendship. Can't wait for the next chapter. Is there maybe a dormant virus among the settlers?
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Oh, ye of little faith! Ashlee might appear delicate, but to be delicate in that environment you have to be tough as nails. I think we've only seen the softer side of Ashlee so far. I for one think he will put up one hell of a fight (physical or not) for his man.
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I stumbled upon this series this morning and have read them all by now. Such great stories, all of them, but this one actually had ne crying. For real. So sweet and sad. Love is truly wonderful.
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Prompt #340: The Nuptial Dinner
Puppilull commented on craftingmom's story chapter in Prompt #340: The Nuptial Dinner
That was so sweet... Almost gave me cavities -
I really liked this story, but it struck me as more of a sketch of a story than a finished one. It would be wonderful if you went over it again and fleshed it out a lot more. Or maybe I'm just greedy..!
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What in the world were you smoking when you wrote that? It must be highly illegal, because that story was bizarre and very, very funny! Merry christmas!
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Oh... Poor Clem! I hope he finds himself a gorgeous, sassy firecracker of a boyfriend who's an expert in... let's say... krav maga and can hold his own in a fight with Nathan. Because there will be a fight when Nathan understands what he has lost. But then it is TOO LATE, IDIOT!
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Men trust their ears less than their eyes
Puppilull commented on Aditus's story chapter in Men trust their ears less than their eyes
Well, it is pretty obvious Chris is lying. The name of the chapter kind of says so... Maybe he blames Jonah for his break up with Eric. But that doesn't explain Ren being all nice and shit with Eric. Sure, they are friends but why would he act like that towards someone who treated Jonah and him like dirt? Ren probably thought he had everything under control, as usual... Ren will have to go to Sicily. Like right now. A bit childish of Jonah to run, but with his history it's logical. -
Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
Puppilull commented on Aditus's story chapter in Birthday Party and Jealous Conniption Fits
I'm warming a bit to Ren now, but both of them really has some growing up to do. As much as Jonah needs to let Ren in, Ren needs to learn how to let Jonah go when needed. Otherwise, his beautiful bird will fly the coup pretty quickly. I mean if he is this controling when they haven't even started dating, what will happen when things get serious and they fight..? -
I just find Ren a little too creepy. The ringtone- fine, a tattoo - WTF?!? If someone did that to me, I would seriously run and I wouldn't need any red shoes... Love the story anyway, but I can understand Jonah being sceptical.
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Difficult to say where this story is going, but nonetheless I am hooked. I am feeling kind of sorry for Hani right now, but somehow he will land on his feet. After all, he is feline... Great story!
