Twisted_Dreemz

Well, once again what else can I say that hasn't been said at least twice before? Good job, man. I LIKE this story! 👊

When I read this, it made me feel like I stepped into the Twilight Zone. Not the spooky talky tina part of town, but the ironic, get inside your head and make you think part of town. We people will do some very *special* things if we think it will improve our performance. This story is that cautionary tale of result, weaved together by an author who knows how to weave very well!

“What are you autistic or something, didn’t you hear what I said?” the girl snapped at Peter, who hadn’t moved and hadn’t responded to her last statement. Ten seconds was the amount of time that’d passed since then. During it, Peter experienced a succession of emotions. Initial horror, bewilderment…returning horror. “Did you…” he started, but couldn’t finish. The girl gave a brief look down at Tony’s body, the focus of Peter’s attention. “He’s still alive. I just made him take a

Thank you very much for reading and for the comment AC. I'm glad you enjoyed and that the curiosity about all the relationships still drives you. That's going to be the fun part getting into all of that!

Thank you for the comment centexhairysub. I'm glad you read this chapter, enjoyed, and that the writing and pacing still felt good in the face of a lot of information to take in. Hopefully the next step will not falter. Thanks very much for reading and commenting BHopper2. I'm glad to hear you loved the details. I did slave over them just a little. right? I'll give you a bit more than 24 hours, just so we make sure you're good for that next round. Thanks very much for reading and for thy comment. Thanks very much Disjecta Membra. I did try. Hard.

Whoo! As I sit my chair back into its normal position, I’m glad to see the guys made it out intact and still breathing. But even in the face of loss, the quest continues.

I figured a storm was coming, but wow. Abandoned and left to a fate unknown by everybody. I get the feeling Gordon did something very smart with the life vest. Seat tilted forward with intensity for the next chapter.

Rocky Tindale. Rocky Edward Tindale. That was my name. My real name. It was as if a light had been turned on inside my brain, revealing the fact that there was darkness in the first place. But there wasn't just a single light. There were many. All of them shining down on small bits of knowledge, such as my name. But the power of the lights was weak. The light they shed only covered the small area they were revealing and nothing else beyond that. So despite their number,

It wasn’t until the next morning, Wednesday, when Peter found out about the homicide that’d taken place the day before. He’d just finished confirming that the latest update had been downloaded for one of his games, and had turned the system off, when the television brought up its selection menu. The selection menu provided a live feed of whichever station the television had been left on in a miniature window. The station happened to be broadcasting the local news, and was at the tail end of its

Thanks very much for the comment Starrynight22. I appreciate it, and am glad you are enjoying the ride so far. But be prepared again. We are at the tip top of another drop... Very glad you checked it out Bhopper2 and enjoyed. As you are waiting for the next installment, the next installment is waiting for all of you. It pre-emptively hopes it will keep you interested. Hey, you can't run a good reupholstering business if you can't do it well! Those are some very good questions, and indeed there are many possibilities. What are their answers? We'll find out as the ride continues! I'm glad you checked out this second chapter and hope that the future continues to strike intrigue. Thanks very much for the comment centexhairysub. I love it. You will know more soon, and I hope it keeps you coming back wanting to know even more after that.

One word can sometimes speak an entire paragraph. It looks like I’m doing my job correctly for ya! Thanks very much for reading and I hope I’ll keep those oooh’s to the point to where you start to wonder if you’ve got some monkey in you. Thanks very much for commenting Disjecta Membra, letting me know what you’ve liked so far, and how this chapter felt for you. I hope that intrigue continues as we get ready to head down that path of discovery. I’d never keep you on the edge…for too long. Thanks very much for the comment Defiance19 and for letting me know how this chapter felt for you. Hellraiser vibes, huh? It was that thing about the floor wasn’t it? Lol. Very glad you enjoyed. Uh oh. I’ve got another one on the edge! Do not despair. Soon, we will go over that edge together! Thanks very much for the comment Mikiesboy.

That's right. Get the details in writing or it didn't happen. It looks like all is well in the land for now. I didn't expect all to adhere so easily. But with the wind picking up...one wonders what's next.

Tonight on Jeopardy, this chapter. I thought everything was out of the window until the peace treaty. Now let's hope that all members abide to their contracts. Breaches will not be accepted.

Now that was a "farce" I did not expect. Female female-impersonators. I was hoping that Sadeeq's new genre would actually work, but we need to send in security because it looks like we've got some who can see through the veil. Can't have that. Too dangerous. Good chapter as always. I like the whole feel you have for this story.

Man. Literally out of the frying pan and into the fire. With Sadeeq speaking about "farce", it makes me worry. I trust him not, but I hope he proves his membership.