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There is definitely a threesome in the immediate future. Steph is a sexual guru. I think in the Will and Zach, Will and Tyler, and Zach and Tyler will survive. It’s a realistic solution that should work. Will is off to Harvard in Autumn and both Zach and Tyler will be long distance relationships. Will is going to have other sexual relationships that will be not be so distant. There’s no need for him to make any stronger commitments than he already has. There is nothing wrong with a young man expanding his inner circle of friends and lovers. At some point Will may be ready for an exclusive partner, but not as a college freshman. He may be mature for a seventeen year old, but he is not ready to settle down.

I just can’t get enough of this story. What will happen next! Such great pacing. Steph is here! The tape is in his hands. The Buck stops here!

Will accepts and supports Zach’s need to be in the closet, but he doesn’t hold Zach accountable for his for his behavior. Perhaps watching the ups and downs of Brad and Robbie’s relationship and knowing the history of his Grand’s and Jeff’s partnership, Will subconsciously gives his screwed up Hayes boy more leeway than he deserves.

I’m not too worried about Zach ; he and Will are a long way from making a lifetime commitment. Until their relationship becomes committed and Zach is out of the football closet, they’re just drifting along while supporting each other as well as their situation permits. While there is no doubt that Will gives better support than Zach can give, Zach still mostly comes through for Will. After all Zach is a Hayes and therefore likely to create a few rollercoaster rides in any relationship. Trevor has a lot to deal with, and Will will help him. I don’t think the Buck family can be fixed, but I think Curtis Buck can be controlled. I mean the Schluters know how to use their power and they can be ruthless. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Great pacing. Thanks.

CJ stories always leave me with a warm feeling and hope for the future. Thanks for the jumpstart. Today is looking great!

The tape! I think Curtis Buck will feel the wrath of the Will and the Schluters. As usual I am eager for the next chapter. Thanks for a great Sunday read!

I was hoping to hear what Will recorded, but I was delighted by closet drama! And it goes on with Zack! Great chapter. So much to look forward to.

Oh my, oh my! What is going on? Will is in the closet, not Zach! After Will is out of the closet and has listened to the tapes, I believe things will be even more interesting. The cliffhangers seem to be developing cliffhangers! Way to go, another great chapter!

George made a splash in Denmark and obtained a somewhat damaged passenger who seems definitely worth saving. Another drunken doctor! Mr. Anson to the rescue. How smooth will the sailing be as George heads home? Surely there will be a French or Spanish merchant ship to be captured. Great chapter.

Will seems drawn in differing degrees to all the young Bucks. So which of the brothers will he kiss first? Thanks for the new chapter. It made me smile.

Great start for Labor Day! Thanks. Will does know Zack. I’m sure they can work through the inappropriate kiss.

Thanks for the extra chapter! I look forward to Monday. Will is blossoming. Stef’s invitation to include Will in his meetings indicates that his growth has been noticed and he is being groomed for more family responsibilities. Will is already his own person and is ready to address issues within the family whether it is the distribution of funds from the family foundation or the cellphone tracking.

You always leave me wanting more! I look forward to the next chapter every time, but I find that all these “balls in the air “ very exciting. Great job!

Will and Zack make me edgy. Will seems to be holding on to a dream of what could be. Zack has always been selfish putting himself first and while he talks about how much he cares for Will, he never considers that having a lifetime commitment could outweigh a football career. Zack is so driven. Even if Zack does have a successful professional football career, when it comes to an end he will likely implode so many of the Hayes boys/men. He is not balanced enough to maintain a mature relationship. Will is becoming a grownup, at some point he must reevaluate this relationship.

Your pacing is excellent. If you know generally where you want to go, you can take any route to get there. Some writers plan every aspect of their stories , storyboard outlines so detailed that all that is needed fleshing out and wordsmithing; how ever , the best way, in my opinion , to tell a story is to allow the characters lead the way. Sometimes as the characters develop and interact , the interplay enhances the storyline beyond the mystery or the action itself. I am looking forward to reading the next chapters.

What about Brad?

Will and Stef back in the movie business with a chance to help close friends and screw old adversaries, it seems like a done deal! Will always asks the best questions because he wants to understand the intricacies of the process Stef considers when making investments. Stef is giving Will a master class investing. He has identified Will’s potential and he makes opportunities to be his mentor. Now it’s time to party! I can’t wait to see what happens next. So many things in play! Will is going to have a busy weekend! Great chapter!

At some point in the future Will may be an equal partner in the venture capital business with Stef and Brad or maybe eventually be in charge after Stef is gone. Just saying.

Thanks for the Gap Year! I’m on to Northern Exposure! Wow! Thanks for the chapters.You certainly deserve the vacation.Reading your series has been my vacation for years. Thanks again.

Thank you. My weekend gets better and better! I appreciate your commitment and your willingness to share your extraordinary skills. Your character development, historical research and knowledge alongside your wonderfully executed story arcs make you easily one of my favorite authors. Thank you for all the epic stories of Bridgemont and CAP.

Thanks for the Will fix! You made my weekend.

Jake finally understands he has a family. Will managed to deal with Brad as an adult and break the cycle. Perhaps Brad will be forced to become an adult as well. John is going to have to be strong if he is to follow his dreams of touring with the band; Jack and Clair can be rigid and obstinate. What a lovely family dinner! Thanks for the drama.

Thank you for the Father’s Day treat! What a great chapter with George thriving in his element. His focus is shifting away from Russia to the journey home and the adventures ahead. I suspect the correspondence will reveal some challenges awaiting in England. I look forward to the next update. Have a great day!

Will is so smooth. He even has Brad and Jake believing the marriage counselor is their idea. He really does have JP’s good sense and intellectual capacity as well as Steph’s sense for sexual adventures and investment opportunities. This gap year is giving him the insight to become his best self. Another great chapter. Quite a delicious serving!

I love the series. The ending of this storyline was very satisfying, but as usual your followers want more! Thanks for the great read. I look forward to the next adventure.