Rishabhpar

I loved it. Thank you for sharing this story with us. If the story is really an autobiography I am happy for Zach and Alex. But I ll take your word and wont try to pursue the second part. The characters were good. Character Jason was really a character, hehe. Lisa dissapointed us, and most importantly Zach. I cant say I hate her for this because she had been the mother Zach never had. Again I ll say I loved it my best wishes. Keep writing. Wish the second part was also a happy ending. But well

Oh I forgot Rishabh means " Saint like" though I doubt it. Another is The First Warrior

Hey guys, Name'S Rishabh (dont ask the meaning).Am from India, and a newbie in the....umm....gay community.I am still in the confused phase where I do acknowledge my attraction for the male gender, but...... forget it.I am an uncurable romantic, as my friends say, so obviously I like to read love stories, but not just any.I love action, chase, a little bloodshed-not fatal unless its the bad party.Werecreatures, college, and sci-fi are my favourite genres. I ve read 508 novels since last Aug.Umm...Thats all

Ok, I see your point in not making Julian immortal via Jerome right now, because they werent sure if the esseren would save him from Damien'S modified caretakers.Plus you had a plot running, you wanted to bring in the prophecy, and had to show off the virus :-D.I like your way but in the middle the story got stuck and really frustrating when they were preparing the surveillance system.And I was also thinking why doesnt he just introduce the nanos in Julian and get over with it.But there is a series building

I ve loved the story uptill now.... I m wondering how I missed it on nifty. I just have one question. why isnt Jeremy simply converts Julian immortal? it will heal him of the Caretakers and put Godfather off their back. And since both will be immortal they wont be a weak point for the other. Even Rom can do the job. Its unlikely for him to find a partner. well except if a pedophile and him fall in love. that would be interesting. and last why didnt the old woman on plane changed her husband if she lovd him

I loved it and dont have much complaints, though the characters were a bit extra self conscious, I would say.I loved the plot, I usually read stories which have a cocktail of everything, love, jealousy, enmity, the adrenaline rush, and all, which it had.I would have loved some more action, some more chase, I mean though I have some gay tendencies but I love my dose of action, I m still a man. :-D I also wished Derek could have some closure with Tom. Nevertheless, I loved it.

Ummm.... it is the end? really? such an abrupt end to such an awesome going story? I dont get it. should I compliment you and thank you for your work, or should I curse you for cliffhanger? :-D

I loved the story and it only builds hope in me that I'Ll find someone like Brett who will not only be a lover but a best friend to me too. I loved ending the most. It wasnt cheesy and mushy. I mean....haha.... will asking Brett if he had his favourite cheesecake....haha... I'Ll never forget it, and they snuggled instead of kissing which seemed soooo nice. wish there'D been something more informative on Bretts coming out, but surely it'D have put a damper, so I love the end result, overall. thank you.

After so much abuse the sex scene want very uplifting but it surely put a damper on the foul mood. it seems Shanes is being noticed more but his brother and fatheer are still left unpunished. good luck

Thats what I said in the last chapter. how can everyone turn a blinf eye to what is happening to Shane. Its unbelievable. I'Ll still be loud to protest against the sexual abuse. I wish these people are given a taste of their own medicine. Jail is just too easy a punishment.

I dont know why I am willing to continue this horror. Maybe I am hoping to see justice coming to poor Shane. verbal and physical abuse was tolerable to an extent but sexual abuse that too after the beating he got, his brother is sick and needs to be reported. And what sick student laugh at someone's beating. And what sick teachers and that fake principal is if he does'nT report to social services or the police about the abuse he knows surely he Shane is enduring at the hands of his dad? Hope to see that.

awesome story buddy. I loved the multiple twists in the story like where jason and colt were caught in the rather compromising state and the how leo handles it maturely and literally allows colt to spread his wings. But Colt succumbs to his love and realises his mistake. And when Colt saves Albert. You know if Colt hadn't tried a little out of the shell with Jason the story would have become very unrealistic. but that part gave a diff flavour to it and brought out the love which some of us die for.